Reviews For A Fresh Start
Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 08/07/08 20:13
Chapter: Tying Up Loose Ends

nice to see lockheart is still a bloody fool great chapter abalutly loved it

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

Reviewer: Kiryn
Date: 08/07/08 19:08
Chapter: Tying Up Loose Ends

Ooh, can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: gitgit
Date: 08/07/08 16:00
Chapter: Tying Up Loose Ends

oh wow that was a nice chapter and would you look at that the malfoys are welcoem to dinner that was awesome :D great chapter

Author's Response: Well, it seems the least they can do after Draco and Scorpius helped with the rescue. Poor Ron still isn't thrilled about it though. Truth be told, neither is Draco. ;)

Reviewer: CowGirlHPFan
Date: 08/07/08 15:44
Chapter: Tying Up Loose Ends

Oooo that was good! :D

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: shadowmagus
Date: 08/07/08 14:44
Chapter: Great Expectations

Good update, hope the next one comes soon. As for changing Pansy to Astoria, I think it's a good idea. Hopefully you eventually change the previous chapters, to fit as well. Although I would like to know if you plan on changing any of the wording for how Pansy reacted and what she said. We all know what Pansy is like and what you wrote previously fit with her but we know next to nothing about Astoria and if she is just like Pansy, it'd be boring.

Reviewer: CakeorDeath
Date: 08/07/08 14:01
Chapter: Great Expectations

Great update and brilliant characterisation.

Reviewer: Ravenclaws Noble Heir
Date: 07/31/08 13:12
Chapter: Out of the Shadows

I'm sorry ... WHAT?!?!?!?!?


that spineless git?!!?


Reviewer: Ravenclaws Noble Heir
Date: 07/31/08 13:01
Chapter: The Rescuers Down Under

Another terrific chapter!!


Reviewer: sylviamirror
Date: 07/29/08 8:35
Chapter: Great Expectations

seriously....what the hell is HE doing there??????????

Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 07/24/08 13:09
Chapter: Out of the Shadows

Kick A@@ i love love seeing draco as nice guy, please hurry with the next chapter i cna't wait what a cliffy

Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman
Date: 07/24/08 4:45
Chapter: Out of the Shadows

Gilderoy Lockhart? Did he regain his memories? LOL. You really crack me up! More please!!!!!

Reviewer: Kiryn
Date: 07/24/08 4:30
Chapter: Out of the Shadows

WTF????????? Where the heck did HE come from???????????????

I assume he's got his memory back, but he can't be that much of a threat. He was defeated by two 12 year olds, and one with a malfunctioning wand for God's sake!

Update soon!

Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves
Date: 07/23/08 17:49
Chapter: Out of the Shadows

This story is surpassing legal limits of awesome. It's so suspenseful, and plenty of twists! Lockhart's in this too? Oh my! Can't wait for the rest!

Reviewer: lostinside1
Date: 07/23/08 17:00
Chapter: Out of the Shadows

WTF?!?! Lockhart??? wierd...

Reviewer: gitgit
Date: 07/23/08 15:44
Chapter: Out of the Shadows

gaaaaah lockhart oh man thats sooo ahahhaha sorri i just started laughing when i read that that was an awesome chapter i really enjoyed every single bit of it i liked hw you described the action and i liked how you had everyone work as a team that was awesome :D great work cant wait to read what happens next :D

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 07/23/08 15:32
Chapter: Out of the Shadows

OMG!!! You are def. coming up with great cliff hangers!!!! Loved this chapter :-)

Reviewer: Carma Godsun
Date: 07/21/08 19:08
Chapter: The Rescuers Down Under

OMG! I hope that sums it up. I'm assuming Bernard is Zacharias Smith's son?

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 07/20/08 9:51
Chapter: The Rescuers Down Under

Oooo, Bad, Bad, Bad, Bad!!! Cannot wait for the next chapter to be posted!!! Great cliffie :-P

Reviewer: DMTAT003
Date: 07/18/08 18:48
Chapter: The Rescuers Down Under

Thank you so much for the update, and I really want to know what happens to Scorpius and Albus. Please update your story when you can. Thanks again!

Reviewer: gitgit
Date: 07/18/08 17:01
Chapter: The Rescuers Down Under

oh man that was really really intense great chapter i cant wait till they try to figure a way out that does mean that eose is with them interesting very interesting

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