Reviews For A Fresh Start
Reviewer: CowGirlHPFan
Date: 11/17/07 14:23
Chapter: Seeing Things in a Different Light

Aww, I love this story!! :) Hmmm......Scopius's last letter.....hmm....his parents' reaction should be intresting, among everything else! :) Great story :) *~*CowGirlHPFan*~*

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves
Date: 11/17/07 14:18
Chapter: Seeing Things in a Different Light

i love your portrayal of Scorpius! this is an interesting story... can't wait to see Draco's reaction to his only kid being a Gryff! how long's this gonna be? cant wait for the next chappie!

Author's Response: I'll update as quickly as I can! :)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 11/17/07 12:26
Chapter: Seeing Things in a Different Light

Excellent chapter! Melting the cauldron reminds me of Nevillle! :P

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: gitgit
Date: 11/17/07 12:21
Chapter: Seeing Things in a Different Light

niceee
i really like how ur story is going i cant wait till the response letter comes
i hope that draco is supportive of scorpius's friendship with rose and albus ...

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: paddy_prongsie
Date: 11/17/07 11:57
Chapter: Seeing Things in a Different Light

hey... that was a nice chapter... worth de wait !! do update soon and pl make sure that bernard is given his due share !!!

Author's Response: I'll see what I can do regarding updates and Bernard ;)

Reviewer: daffy
Date: 11/17/07 11:26
Chapter: Seeing Things in a Different Light

aawww!!! i'd rather stay at hogawarts!!! way 2 go scorpius!! i jus luv dis fic but the updates take fore ever... n i hate dat!!!.... wat can i say... i ges i luv to hate ur fic!! lols...
jus loved how potter n weasley kids stood beside scorpius... harry n gang definitely played good parents!!.... waitin for d malfoy reactions though....
plz update more often...
luv,
daffy!!

Author's Response: I'm sorry; I'm a grad student and depending on experiments and such, some weeks are much busier than others. I'll try to update as often as possible though. :)

Reviewer: Lylian
Date: 10/23/07 1:36
Chapter: Pride and Prejudice

Wow. What a great story. I'm just wondering what the plot will be...

Author's Response: Me too! (Just kidding.) I'll leave it as a surprise though. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: harryfan4ever
Date: 10/22/07 11:08
Chapter: Great Expectations

The story is soooooooooooooo good! I can't wait to read the rest! You gotta update soon! The suspense is killing me!!

Author's Response: I'll try to update as quickly as possible! :)

Reviewer: daffy
Date: 10/17/07 4:48
Chapter: Pride and Prejudice

yeayyy!!! scorpius is in gryffindor!!! yippeee... jus love it!!
but........
y oh y did u make him insult hagrid!!(stamps her feet in sheer annoyance!!) everythin was goin gr8.. he was gettin along wid the potter n weasley kiddos.. n dont u think albus should have more of a role... i mean he's harry's son... n all he does is follow rose around.. love rose though... really hermione miniature!!
do update... waitin.... waitin .... waitin... so have u updated yet... no?.. well wat r u waitin for?!!

Author's Response: Sorry... you'll see why in the next chapter. As for Albus, his mother was fairly shy as a first year, but like her, he'll come out of his shell more in time. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: ProfPosky
Date: 10/15/07 19:58
Chapter: Pride and Prejudice

Poor Scorpius, and how perfect that it is Neville, the least likely Gryffindor, to announce so firmly that everyone there belonged in that house. And really, any Malfoy willing NOT to be in Slythering clearly belongs in Gryffindor for Bravery. After all, he will have to face his parents with this.

I do think The Hat should have hung tough on Bernard, though.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I loved making Neville head of Gryffindor, I think if anyone has a chance of understanding the pressures of "family duty" it's him. As for Bernard, like most bullies, he has his own demons to face. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 10/15/07 19:47
Chapter: Pride and Prejudice

*sniff* good chapter!! update soon!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to! :)

Reviewer: katwozere
Date: 10/15/07 18:27
Chapter: Pride and Prejudice

I loved this chapter! I felt that you portrayed Scorpius so well. I also felt the predjudice that was shown towards him was also very well written. Scorpious going into Griffindor was a suprise though, I thought he would be in Ravenclaw. I hope you update this story soon and keep writing.

Author's Response: I did think about putting him in Ravenclaw. Although, the more I thought about it, the more I felt that he was going to need to be brave to deal with the way the other kids are treating him. Almost making him need to be in Gryffindor. I also think he showed a good deal of bravery simply by walking into the Great Hall after everything that happened. Thanks for the review and I'll try to update soon! :)

Reviewer: Wicked Wench
Date: 10/15/07 18:04
Chapter: Pride and Prejudice

I loved this chapter -- especially comparing young Scorpius to Harry.


Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: DMTAT003
Date: 10/15/07 17:06
Chapter: Pride and Prejudice

Thanks for the update, I do hope that the Potters and Rosie give Scorpius a chance. He seems like a decent kid.

Author's Response: He is a pretty decent kid (well at least, I think so). As for them giving him another chance... you'll just have to wait for chapter four and I'll try to make it a short wait.

Reviewer: KaileeA42
Date: 10/15/07 16:29
Chapter: Pride and Prejudice

Update soon this is a really good story so far!! I love how the toaad was named Dolores and I was so shocked when he called Hagrid a half-breed but it's only because he was raised to think that of course. I also love the line " Where do you think they first tested them" for no apparent reason. PLZ UPDATE SOON!!

Reviewer: KaileeA42
Date: 10/15/07 16:03
Chapter: Pride and Prejudice

Update soon this is a really good story so far!! I love how the toaad was named Dolores and I was so shocked when he called Hagrid a half-breed but it's only because he was raised to think that of course. I also love the line " Where do you think they first tested them" for no apparent reason. PLZ UPDATE SOON!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it and I'll try to update soon. :)

Reviewer: honey bon
Date: 10/15/07 15:54
Chapter: Pride and Prejudice

its great!!!! I can't wait to read more!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 10/15/07 15:41
Chapter: Pride and Prejudice

very interesting chapter. Wasn't sure you were going to sort Scorpius to Gryffindor or not. I like the hat's reasoning though.

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 10/15/07 15:23
Chapter: Sins of the Father

I wonder how Draco can change basicallt from being a git so someone not so bad. I think telling the story through his son's eyes might be just the way to do it. You provided Scorpius with magical interest yet they are such that his mom will not think much of them. Good start.

Author's Response: Well, Draco hasn't completely changed, but I think his time as Voldemort's prisoner and having his life saved by the trio twice at least started off a change within him. Whatever faults he still has, he does love his son. Pansy hasn't changed as much, she never really saw the horrors that Draco did. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/15/07 13:42
Chapter: Pride and Prejudice

Terrific chapter!! Poor Scorpius though!

Author's Response: Thanks! I did feel rather bad ruining his evening. I'll try and make it up to him sometime.

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