Reviews For A Fresh Start
Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves
Date: 11/24/07 8:42
Chapter: Ruffled Feathers

that was a cute chapter especially at teh end! i like this story... its not too boring and really lovely... can't wait for the next chappie! how long is this going to be, by the way?
~Padfoot

Author's Response: Well... I'm a grad student and as term is nearing it's end... it could be a bit of a wait. (Sorry!) I'll try to get it done as soon as possible though!

Reviewer: daffy
Date: 11/24/07 7:59
Chapter: Ruffled Feathers

hey!! even i am proud of malfoy... both of them!!
just loved their reactions..... just d way i had imagined! the letter draco wrote to his parents was really cute and amazin
keep updating!!


Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: x0x_shannon_x0x
Date: 11/24/07 3:31
Chapter: Ruffled Feathers

WRITE MORE ASAP!!!!! this series/what evar u want 2 call it rox!!!!

Reviewer: x0x_shannon_x0x
Date: 11/24/07 3:20
Chapter: Seeing Things in a Different Light

this is a really good series/what ever u want 2 call it but do u really think a bou would end a letter with 'luv'? cos i dont. but i am loving reakding this series/what ever u want 2 call it!!!! cant what 2 read more!!!!! :)

Author's Response: I don't think he would for anyone but family, but 'from" seemed a bit impersonal and "sincerely" a bit too old. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: DMTAT003
Date: 11/23/07 22:14
Chapter: Ruffled Feathers

Wow. I really liked Draco's change of heart. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Phoenix13
Date: 11/23/07 18:25
Chapter: Ruffled Feathers

Oooh, I like this. This chapter was a bit short though...huh...
Well, keep writing; this seems like a great story.

Author's Response: Thanks, I expect the next will be one will be longer. :)

Reviewer: Phoenix13
Date: 11/23/07 18:24
Chapter: Ruffled Feathers

Oooh, I like this. This chapter was a bit short though...huh...
Well, keep writing; this seems like a great story.

Reviewer: skippy agogo
Date: 11/23/07 18:17
Chapter: Ruffled Feathers

Love it. Reactions to the letters and the replies sent off are very well done. Just the right type of tale.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: gitgit
Date: 11/23/07 17:49
Chapter: Ruffled Feathers

YAAAAAAAAAAY i like the chapter it was nice and sweet ... can't wait till the story starts picking up :D

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Porks
Date: 11/23/07 17:49
Chapter: Ruffled Feathers

Really well done, really close to the books. Keep updating quickly.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try!

Reviewer: anath
Date: 11/20/07 17:24
Chapter: Seeing Things in a Different Light

This story is great so far! The characters are very well thought and their actions are understandable. Neville is great. Hoiw much people change...

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: njyecats
Date: 11/20/07 16:12
Chapter: Seeing Things in a Different Light

I'm really enjoying this one! I can't wait until there's more to read

Author's Response: I'll try to update more frequently. Thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: Her My Own EE
Date: 11/20/07 0:04
Chapter: Seeing Things in a Different Light

I really enjoy this story!

I like how you show that well meaning adults often lead their children on paths they wouldn't neccessarily want. Draco, simply wanted for his son never to be caught up in pureblood mania. He made sure he knew his son was loved not matter what he became. Though Draco may not have wanted Scorpius in Gryffindor, his being there could very well mean the true end to the Malfoy /Potter fued.

I'll be waiting to see where else you take this fic!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)

Reviewer: Wicked Wench
Date: 11/18/07 5:09
Chapter: Seeing Things in a Different Light

I really like this story. I like how Rosie is so much like her mother.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: duelingmaster23q
Date: 11/17/07 21:59
Chapter: Seeing Things in a Different Light

Awesome. I like Scorpious. 10/10 ten out of tens


Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: shaggy_muggle
Date: 11/17/07 21:41
Chapter: Seeing Things in a Different Light

good stuff. i have to nitpick, however. i know a bit about agriculture and botany, so i noticed a little problem. you wrote that the plants in longbottom's office receive continual sunlight. this is not healthy for a plant. it is similar to depriving an animal of sleep. during the day is when a plant makes energy n the form of sugars, but at night is when they grow. continual sunlight would result in a dehydrated plant (from the high mount of sugar, and the heat from the sunlight) with severely stunted growth. it would die rather quickly. and longbottom would know this. it would be wiser to have him simply reproduce the charm in the great hall that allows the sky to be viewed.

but i dont mean to be negative. this is a great story, and i love it. im just a little disappointed that you took so long to update! i really look forward to the next chapter. i want to see how the malfoy family reacts. i could picture lucius sending a howler, perhaps. keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Well, first of all, you may have singlehandedly rescued my houseplants (we had a grow light for them at night) As for Neville, I"ll rewrite when time permits to make it like the Great Hall, but always a sunny day (but a normal night). Until then, I'll just hide behind the old stand-by of "Umm, well you see, THOSE were Neville's magical plants that oddly enough love constant sunlight... his non-weird plants are in the greenhouses." I'm glad you enjoy it so far and I will try to update as often as time permits. Thanks for the review (my plants say 'thanks' too!)

Reviewer: Sev and Lily
Date: 11/17/07 21:32
Chapter: Seeing Things in a Different Light

I'm loving this story! (but if i don't ever finish my English paper b/c i was prodcrastinating by reading this i completley blame you :) ) i can totaly picture lil scorpius and i love him. keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks and I hope that the English paper got finished! :)

Reviewer: DMTAT003
Date: 11/17/07 17:04
Chapter: Seeing Things in a Different Light

I really like how you started and ended with a letter; I really like where this is going.

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: CakeorDeath
Date: 11/17/07 17:03
Chapter: Seeing Things in a Different Light

Please update! It is fab!

Author's Response: Will do! And thank you!

Reviewer: skippy agogo
Date: 11/17/07 14:56
Chapter: Seeing Things in a Different Light

Very well done. Not sure I like pansy as draco's wife, but one can't always get what one wants... Unless they write their own story. Looking forward to the reaction from the parents.

Author's Response: Well, if I were Draco, Pansy wouldn't have been my first choice either. Then again, if I were Draco, I'd have much bigger problems than that. ;) Thanks for the review!

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