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Name: DMTAT003 (Signed) · Date: 12/21/07 11:46 · For: Where the Truth Lies
This is awesome. I really want to read more please update soon. Merry Christmas by the way.

Name: Xsen (Signed) · Date: 12/21/07 11:38 · For: Where the Truth Lies
i see you're turning neville into an albus dumbledore! juicy chapter, and i can't wait to see scorpius loving hagrid's, er, cute creatures =D
Thanks for the quick update too!

Name: JustLikeHermione77 (Signed) · Date: 12/15/07 12:56 · For: For Every Action...
lol! i love how harry can't remember a grocery list! yay, draco stood up to his father!!! go draco!!

Name: marvelousmeg (Signed) · Date: 12/15/07 8:35 · For: For Every Action...
this was very good and I'm really beginnning to like Malfoy. So I'm assuming his strongest subject is DADA and Rosie is brainy all-around, then how about Albus? what's he hiding? Something from ginny maybe?

Name: Suika07 (Signed) · Date: 12/14/07 23:57 · For: For Every Action...
Hi there!! i really like this story!!!
your development of the characters is great, and your writing feels very natural.
hahah lucius's reaction was perfect. i also like how much draco obviously cares about his son, enough to tackle his own issues.
and i really like the dynamics you've set up between the kids! aw.
anyway, keep up the good work!! im gonna add this to my favorites :)
hope to read more soon!

Name: RavenclawGirl39 (Signed) · Date: 12/14/07 20:08 · For: Great Expectations
I am really enjoying this story and hope to read more soon. I like the idea of the "new" trio and their adventures...the biggest being how to figure out who they are in the shadow of their parents.

Name: PadfootnPeeves (Signed) · Date: 12/14/07 15:46 · For: For Every Action...
Poor Scorpius! I hate how the boys are so mean to him... makes it more interesting though ^_^ And Lucius is such a buttface... very in-character, however.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Name: daffy (Signed) · Date: 12/14/07 4:34 · For: For Every Action...
harry forgets his grocery list!!! lolz....
really like it... pity scorpius had to hide n all but i have a feelin he's gona stand up to him soon. he's stronger dan doz jerks!!

loved how draco reacted to the howler... GOOOO DRACO!!
update sooonn...pretty plz?

Name: KaileeA42 (Signed) · Date: 12/14/07 0:11 · For: For Every Action...
I really love this story. It;s very well written and I just love how everyone is characterized! Please update soon!

Name: harryfan4ever (Signed) · Date: 12/13/07 23:29 · For: For Every Action...
This is such a great chappie!!!!!!! It's kinda funny that when Harry and Draco were at school, they were enimes and now their kids are best friends!!!!!!

Now that's you got the boys talking about their parents. . . you need to get the families to meet. (hehehe) THAT WOULD BE HILARIOUS!!!!!!! but . . . you don't have to do that if you don't want to. It's just my opinion.

ANYWAY. . . Great story and I am loving these quick updates!!! Keep up the good work!!!! (Great, now that I've said that, it will take forever for the next chapter to come up . . .)

Name: gitgit (Signed) · Date: 12/13/07 22:50 · For: For Every Action...
i forgot to add when i carried on with the flow there that awsome update keep up the good work

Name: gitgit (Signed) · Date: 12/13/07 22:49 · For: For Every Action...
i hate bernard ... why is he being cruel to scorpious .. judging people by their parents is not fair what would sirius black say to that!!!!

Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 12/13/07 22:39 · For: For Every Action...
Terrific chapter! That would be an entertaining meeting Draco meeting Albus!!!

Name: Phoenix13 (Signed) · Date: 12/13/07 22:10 · For: For Every Action...
Love it, love it, love it! I can't wait for more! Update soon, please!

Name: mock_turtle (Signed) · Date: 12/13/07 21:47 · For: For Every Action...
ahaahhhh! update please! I just got really excited about this story and now i ran into the brick wall of NO MORE CHAPTERS...

Name: mock_turtle (Signed) · Date: 12/13/07 21:34 · For: Ruffled Feathers
this made me all teary eyed. I really love how you have made draco human without permanently taking away any of the events that made him who he is. I can totally see him being frightened of lucius though.

Name: mock_turtle (Signed) · Date: 12/13/07 21:18 · For: Pride and Prejudice
I love the "obviously delighted" bit where severus is their middle names. I almost choked. it was unexpected, but....I suppose they haven't learned to hate their names, like most disgruntled fans.

I absolutlely adore the ending to this chapter. I love love love it!

Name: Methionine (Signed) · Date: 12/13/07 21:03 · For: For Every Action...
Magnificent!! I love it- it great. I really like how Draco is all proud of his son, because I think the Malfoys are really proud of their family. There were so many moments when I could of hugged either Draco or Scorpious. Great writing!!!

Name: mock_turtle (Signed) · Date: 12/13/07 20:02 · For: Sins of the Father
still that incredible humanity you bring to draco and co. I really really like this. although he still manipulates the story at the end...which is only right and proper.

Name: Sev and Lily (Signed) · Date: 12/13/07 19:58 · For: For Every Action...
I'm totally hooked! i love the character of scorpius and i really like albus too. Great characterization. please update ASAP

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