Reviews For A Fresh Start
Reviewer: eternityzangel
Date: 03/22/08 16:55
Chapter: The Mistaken Marauder

This is great. I've been looking for a good story about the next generation. Please update soon!

Reviewer: anath
Date: 03/21/08 17:23
Chapter: The Mistaken Marauder

Wow! I loved this chapter. I especially loved Alice's retaliation. James really went too far this time, the donkey! (in my language, we have the phrase 'as stubborn as adonlry', instead of 'as stubborn as a mule'. James falls in this category! And the two copies of the map certainly surprised me.

Reviewer: Carma Godsun
Date: 03/21/08 10:36
Chapter: The Mistaken Marauder

Brilliant, absolutely brilliant. Well, ta ta I'm off to watch America's Next Top Model

Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves
Date: 03/21/08 9:41
Chapter: The Mistaken Marauder

Mr Prongs feels affronted that someone missing part of their right eyebrow would have the nerve to call this most dignified piece of parchment ‘ratty’.

Glad to know someone can make James sound funny without being a airhead :)

Mr Moony agrees with Mr Prongs and would also advise young Mr Malfoy to comb his hair.

Ah... Remus can't really talk, can he?

This was yet another wonderful and entertaining chapter. I love Alice's character- her fieriness balances out nicely with her father. I detected a bit of James/Alice-ness... or am I simply delusional?

My favorite part would have to be at the end wth the altered map, and Neville saying that he was proud of Alice. It's awesome that you have the doits bold if they're smug, or slightly fading if they're 'didn't have its usual swagger.' It's also sweet that they would let their kids discover those things themselves.

All in all, great chapter! It was worth the wait!

Reviewer: gitgit
Date: 03/21/08 7:17
Chapter: The Mistaken Marauder

hahahhah Harry is one bright guy for recopying the map.. its nice how everyone is getting along, i see that mr james and miss alice are having some difficulties eh ... and miss alice taught mr james a lesson and wow wormtail even when your dead i wanna kill you for saying that

nice chapter cant wait to read the next one :D

Reviewer: DMTAT003
Date: 03/21/08 0:00
Chapter: The Mistaken Marauder

Thank you for updating, I really enjoy the story so far and looking forward to the next chapter. Alice's character is very well done and glad to see James humbled a little.

Reviewer: DMTAT003
Date: 03/19/08 21:09
Chapter: Great Expectations

Amazing, please update when you get the chance. I am glad to see that MNFF is back up and operational. R/S is fastly becoming my favorite ship, secondly only to Lily/Snape.

Reviewer: shelovesyou
Date: 02/26/08 16:31
Chapter: Where the Truth Lies

Ahh! This is so good! I lllloooovvvveee it! :P

I have now become a regular reader :)
Thanks for writing such a great story!

Reviewer: qqquill_rita
Date: 02/13/08 10:42
Chapter: Great Expectations

i love this story. it is like omg. it is kinda predictable, but you described it well.

Reviewer: sadlymuggle
Date: 01/20/08 9:39
Chapter: Great Expectations

I'm glad I stumbled onto your story. It was interesting to listen to Draco's take on his relationship with Harry. You write sympathetically and make the characters less one dimensional. Nicely done.

Reviewer: killjoy
Date: 01/14/08 19:22
Chapter: Where the Truth Lies

Cool I get to be the 100 review here.First off let me say I like this story very much.I have become a BIG Rose/Scorpius of lately so I'm liking the pair in this story.Glad to see Draco and Pansy are more human in this story.The way they love their son and don't seem to be pureblood bigots like some Malfoy still are.Normal for Ron to over react on everything.Glad to see that the Weasleys and Potters are looking out for Scorpius.

Reviewer: PaddysGal
Date: 01/01/08 14:18
Chapter: Where the Truth Lies

I can't wait for the next chapter! Will Scorpius be with Rose?

Reviewer: Metamorphmagusgil
Date: 12/29/07 3:51
Chapter: Where the Truth Lies

a really hilarious chapter, keep it going

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 12/26/07 11:29
Chapter: Where the Truth Lies

Terrific chapter! Seems like Draco is hiding quite alot from his son!!

Reviewer: tatjanablack
Date: 12/26/07 6:35
Chapter: Ruffled Feathers

What a amazing story. Love it so far

Reviewer: harryfan4ever
Date: 12/22/07 20:00
Chapter: Where the Truth Lies

wow . . . um . . . you do know you're making Neville seem very Dumbledore-ish right? I DO NOT LIKE RACHEL OR BERNARD!!! (goes on a rampage after these characters and chases them with a vengance) Well, at least things seem to be looking up for poor Scorpius . . . Can't wait for the next chappie . . . (but I guess I have to over the holidays. ^_^)

Reviewer: daffy
Date: 12/22/07 2:05
Chapter: Where the Truth Lies

goin gr8!! cant wait for more....
actually *stampin my feet in frustration* i want more i want more!!
do update.... jus love ur fic.... figures y i have it my favorites!!

Reviewer: Sev and Lily
Date: 12/21/07 23:54
Chapter: Where the Truth Lies

This story keeps getting better and better. Neville is such an awesome teacher to scorpius. Poor lil scorpius though having to pay for the bad things his father did. I really like the way this stroy portrays the malfoys in a much more positive light then others. Awesome writing and happy holidays!

Reviewer: Suika07
Date: 12/21/07 15:51
Chapter: Where the Truth Lies

yay! what a great chapter!
hah i laughed when Scorpius mentioned the hippogriffs. that was very clever, having him mention them to Hagrid. how ironic. :)
I'm glad Hagrid is warming up to him! seeing as how Scorpius loves magical creatures, their realtionship promises to be very interesting indeed.
oh and adding in Rita Skeeter! that was a brillinat little twist. poor Scorpius, i hope he does burn that book! If he must learn the truth about his family's past, she is definitally the worst person for the poor kid to hear it from.
i like how you have portrayed neville. im sure he definitally would have much wisdom to bestow on his students :)
hahhaha "ticklish pears". priceless!
i love the dynamics you have set up! it is very believable, seeing as how jkr did leave so much intrigue and leeway as far as speculation with that short epilogue. :)
can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves
Date: 12/21/07 15:26
Chapter: Where the Truth Lies

Great chappie! Bernard is such a crappyhead... but it onyl make sit more exciting! I wonder what Rachel has in store for Scorpius...

Ohh, Hagrid's warming up! Yaay! I knew he would.

Neville is like Dumbydore. That's awesome, however- I like how Scorpius admires him but Draco thinks he's a piece of hippogriff doodoo. I wonder how Scorpius will react when (if) he finds out who attacked Neville's parents...

I look forward to teh next chapter and the 'adventure'!

Merry Christmas, Hypatia! ^_^

Buh byes, Padfoot

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