Believe and it shall happen. You certainly had Lockhart pegged as the same idiot from COS. It will be interesting to find out how he got involved with this.
Now this is really getting interesting. I'm certainly hoping the back-up gets there quickly. I'm sure it's going to end okay, but I'm laughing so hard at Lockhart's appearance I don't think I can handle many more surprises.
Oops, the boys intentions were good, but they didn't quite think things through. At least not fast enough. Hopefully Unclle Neville, Dad and Uncle Ron will be in time to save everyone and catch the real bad guys.
I had to read this one all the way through with out stopping. This is GREAT. Thank you for taking your time and for putting in all of the effort you have into this. You have a true gift for writing.
I do like this twist. I'm hoping the boys are able to rescue Rosie and prove it was the Smith's who kidnapped her. I am wondering how they managed to get Lucius wand though.
Someone is trying very to get the Malfoy's in serious trouble. I was thinking the kidnappers might be older friend's of say, Zabini, who've already graduated and are helping her try to make Scorpius look bad for going against her.
As usual Ron is opening his mouth without putting brain in gear. Granted his daughter has just been kidnapped. Maybe they should have asked Scorpius a couple questions. Draco is definitely going in the right direction. Ernie MacMillan could use a few lessons in maturity.
“NO! I needed that mushroom!” Aaah LOL!!!!
The ending of this chapter is not a good thing. I would not want to be the ones caught by Harry and Ron. And I refuse to believe(until proven otherwise)that Rosie will not be rescued in record time and the bad guys brought to justice. I really, really hope I'm right.
I am so laughing outloud with this story. I love that the DA have all remained friends, married each other, etc. I reiterate, I so wish there could be a published volume of some of these stories. I could be wrong, but I bet there would be a lot of people who would appreciate them. Then again, they should just go to MNFF
I love Neville's character! This is fast becoming one of those stories that should be published. Being "sued into the next universe" wouldn't be much fun for you, but there are a lot of people who haven't discovered MNFF that would really enjoy this story and a few others.
Just keeps getting better and better. Now someone just needs to give Smith a major attitude adjustment. I'm hoping it's going to be Albus/Rosie and company
Draco may become my new hero! This is the Hogwarts the Sorting Hat and Albus Dumbbledore were trying to achieve and I think it's wonderful. I've been reading a few Albus/Rose/Scorpius stories and this may is going to be one of my favorites.
This is another story I'm really going to like. Well, actually, I really like it already, and like it more every chapter. It's an angle I may never have considered, but I love the way you are writing it.
I really like this chapter. I love that Scorpius was Sorted in Gryffindor. Smith should have gone to Slytherin. I'm certainly hoping Albus and Rosie will make up their own minds rather than be led by the predjudices of their family.
I definitely think Draco has done some growing and changing. It took a lot of guts ot tell his son even that version of the story.
I was certainly hoping Lucius would have had an attitude adjustment but apparently some things never change. I do like the small changes I see in Draco and Narcissa, and Scorpius is starting out as a delightful child.
Great ending! but i hated the fact that Teddy gave the map to Scorpius insted of James...
Really good story. Very entertaining, and well written. Good job!
Awww that was just an awesome chapter i really liked how scorpius even though provoked kept him self grounded and then rose and al found him at the end that was awesome too :D