Reviews For A Fresh Start
Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves
Date: 04/27/08 9:24
Chapter: Caught Unprepared

*gasp* Rosie! Wonderful chapter, despite the evil cliffie... I think Scorpius's letter had one too many exclamation points, but that doesn't really matter ^_^

I hope the next chapter's up soon! I need to find out where they took Rose.

Reviewer: Master Of Death
Date: 04/27/08 8:35
Chapter: Caught Unprepared

yay! I love the story keep it up!
(and update XD)

Reviewer: gitgit
Date: 04/27/08 8:32
Chapter: Caught Unprepared

ROSIE Is gone
oh man thats not goood
cant wait till you post the next chapter that is really interesting how the story is going so far.. and yaaay scorpious :D

Reviewer: harryfan4ever
Date: 04/27/08 0:42
Chapter: Caught Unprepared

GASP!!! OH NOES!!!! An ebil cliffhanger!!! And Rosie got kidnapped!!!! . . . Can't wait to see what happens next! I would write more but my battery's about to die . . .

Reviewer: DMTAT003
Date: 04/26/08 23:49
Chapter: Caught Unprepared

NO!! Death Eaters? Please update soon, this chapter just made my weekend.

Reviewer: Phoenix13
Date: 04/26/08 23:01
Chapter: Caught Unprepared

Duhn-duhn-duuuuuhhhnn!!!! Nice cliffie! Please update soon, I'm really enjoying this story.

Reviewer: harryfan4ever
Date: 04/22/08 1:22
Chapter: The Mistaken Marauder

OMG I CAN'T BELIEVE I HAVEN'T REVIEWED FOR THIS YET!!! RAWR! I HATE MY COMPUTER!!! . . . WHY IS THIS ALL CAPITALIZED?! OH WAIT . . . I HAVE MY CAP LOCKS ON . . . That's better. So anyways. . . GO ALICE!!! James is a bit of a prat isn't he? XD He needed to get down off his high horse. Have I said this before? Neville is acting very Dumbledore like! I mean it! It's a bit insane really. . . So . . . can't wait to read more and please update soon! =)

Reviewer: KDTheRavenclaw
Date: 03/30/08 16:31
Chapter: Ruffled Feathers

I know I just reviewed, but... awwwwwwww! That last line was great.

Reviewer: KDTheRavenclaw
Date: 03/30/08 15:51
Chapter: Sins of the Father

I love this story so far. This doesn't really matter, but did you know it's not entirely cannon-compliant? Malfoy married Daphne Greengrass's sister, Luna married a relative of Newt Scamander, and George married Angelina. Wow, I read waaaaay too many JKR interviews...
Anyway, you're a really good writer, I read your story about Molly Weasley as well. Hope you keep at it!

Reviewer: Ravenclaws Noble Heir
Date: 03/27/08 17:55
Chapter: Great Expectations

Also I would like to say that I love the way you put both the children and their parents into the fold. Its a quite lovely story. I can't wait fo rthe next chapter. Plz hurry!

*~* Ravenclaw's Noble Heir *~*

Reviewer: Ravenclaws Noble Heir
Date: 03/26/08 17:40
Chapter: The Mistaken Marauder

I can't wait for the next chapter! Plz hurry and post it!

*~* Ravenclaw's Noble Heir *~*

Reviewer: gogolax
Date: 03/24/08 18:38
Chapter: The Mistaken Marauder

great story so far. i really like how you are including both the children and there parents. keep up the good work.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 03/24/08 9:45
Chapter: The Mistaken Marauder

Fantastic chapter!!! I loved how the Map insults Malfoy :-) Nicely written chapter

Reviewer: Celestina
Date: 03/24/08 7:57
Chapter: The Mistaken Marauder

Love this fic. More please!

Reviewer: Celestina
Date: 03/24/08 7:38
Chapter: Where the Truth Lies

I love the different references to canon in this fic, eg. the ticklich pear and all the business at the Malfoys. INteresting to see how the "facts" can be manipulated to suit a person's purpose.

Reviewer: Celestina
Date: 03/24/08 7:24
Chapter: For Every Action...

Draco's letter to his father was just about perfect, I reckon.

Reviewer: Celestina
Date: 03/24/08 7:10
Chapter: Ruffled Feathers

We're used to Hermione being wise, but I'm still getting used to Noble Draco!

Reviewer: Celestina
Date: 03/23/08 9:03
Chapter: Seeing Things in a Different Light

Can't wait to see the elder Malfoys' reactions to Scorpius's letters. Love the image of Profs McGonnagal and Slughorn in full flight at the Battle of Hogwarts in their PJ's. I didn't register that detail when I read the books.

Reviewer: Celestina
Date: 03/23/08 8:46
Chapter: Pride and Prejudice

Awesome story - love the rationale for sorting Scorpius into Gryffindor. Already love the Rose and Albus characters.

Reviewer: magic_pen
Date: 03/22/08 16:57
Chapter: The Mistaken Marauder

Yay!!! I love this story. I liked how Draco decided to be proud of Scorpious (and the howler things. sorry about going on about the other chapters)
anyway, about this chapter. I LOVED that alice slapped James!
can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

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