who done it? i guess it wasn't luciaius after all but i still hate him anyway
AH! Evil cliffie! Awesome chapter- i love the characterization of Neville, Albus, and Scorpius. I can't wait to read what happens next!
~PnP
oh nooooo.
this is not good. Not good at all.
This story is great, it has the right mix of thrill and fun!
Ha, ha, I loved the two movie references you put in your chapter-the title itself (I loved that movie Rescuers Down Under since I was young) and the "Why did it have to be snakes" line from Indiana Jones. Whether you were aware of it or not, I'm just pointing out.
I have been following this story from the very beginning and I must say that :
1. the storyline and plotlines are excellent
2. characterisation is very good.
3. very creative and descriptive.
4. well written
5. exciting.
As for this chapter, please update soon as I could not wait to see what exactly is going to happen. My heart is in my throat! Please do relieve it.
A familiar deep voice....I wonder who??I was so excited when I got the update email, I love this story. I totally love the way you write Neville, itas brilliant. Keep up the great work.
/:) ok then
u have definitely applied some solid thinking to this...
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oh plz!
its obviously not Lucius
though it wouldnt surprise me
proberly someone trying to get revenge or something
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Well thats nice...
although he's willing to help he still wants his money back
but then again I guess Draco is a bit more on terms with Harry isn't he?
seeing as how he is speaking directly to him and no to Ron.
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I am really enjoying this! Please update as soon as you can.
(No pressure though)
It's getting very exciting... Please update- I can't wait to see what happens! This chapter was really great, I definitely did not see the reason of Rosie's kidnapping coming- it was very cleverly done. well done, it was a great chapter!
It's getting very exciting... Please update- I can't wait to see what happens! This chapter was really great, I definitely did not see the reason of Rosie's kidnapping coming- it was very cleverly done. well done, it was a great chapter!
Well I suppose it is Slytherins ring lol. I love the history repeating itself with the Potions Master hating a Griffindor. Great story so far, I can't wait to see if they got it right and that git Bernard gets expelled or something.
oh dear, that doesn't sound good.
very good I cant wait for another update.
very good writing. Well defined plot.
*shudder* Snakes. Bleh. I don't like snakes. Poor, poor Scorpius and Albus. Anywho, love the story so UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!! ^-^
Enjoying your story. nice parallel between Scorpius and Albus.
Ooo Framed?!?!? This is getting really serious and exciting at the same time =)
