Reviews For A Fresh Start
Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 07/18/08 15:32
Chapter: The Rescuers Down Under

who done it? i guess it wasn't luciaius after all but i still hate him anyway

Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves
Date: 07/18/08 8:51
Chapter: The Rescuers Down Under

AH! Evil cliffie! Awesome chapter- i love the characterization of Neville, Albus, and Scorpius. I can't wait to read what happens next!
~PnP

Reviewer: life_lemons
Date: 07/18/08 8:42
Chapter: The Rescuers Down Under

oh nooooo.

this is not good. Not good at all. 

Reviewer: LunaforGryffindor
Date: 07/18/08 8:15
Chapter: The Rescuers Down Under

This story is great, it has the right mix of thrill and fun!

Reviewer: harrietamidala
Date: 07/18/08 6:56
Chapter: The Rescuers Down Under

Ha, ha, I loved the two movie references you put in your chapter-the title itself (I loved that movie Rescuers Down Under since I was young) and the "Why did it have to be snakes" line from Indiana Jones. Whether you were aware of it or not, I'm just pointing out.

Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman
Date: 07/18/08 6:53
Chapter: The Rescuers Down Under

I have been following this story from the very beginning and I must say that :

1. the storyline and plotlines are excellent

2. characterisation is very good.

3. very creative and descriptive.

4. well written

5. exciting.

As for this chapter, please update soon as I could not wait to see what exactly is going to happen. My heart is in my throat! Please do relieve it.

Reviewer: Kiwi_Chick
Date: 07/18/08 2:27
Chapter: The Rescuers Down Under

A familiar deep voice....I wonder who??I was so excited when I got the update email, I love this story. I totally love the way you write Neville, itas brilliant. Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: Ravenclaws Noble Heir
Date: 07/04/08 17:01
Chapter: Den of Vipers

/:) ok then
u have definitely applied some solid thinking to this...

*~* Ravenclaw's Noble Heir *~*

Reviewer: Ravenclaws Noble Heir
Date: 07/04/08 16:46
Chapter: Slytherin's Legacy

oh plz!
its obviously not Lucius
though it wouldnt surprise me
proberly someone trying to get revenge or something

*~* Ravenclaw's Noble Heir *~*

Reviewer: Ravenclaws Noble Heir
Date: 07/04/08 16:38
Chapter: Hostage

Well thats nice...

although he's willing to help he still wants his money back

but then again I guess Draco is a bit more on terms with Harry isn't he?

seeing as how he is speaking directly to him and no to Ron.

*~* Ravenclaw's Noble Heir *~*

Reviewer: CakeorDeath
Date: 06/23/08 14:20
Chapter: Den of Vipers

I am really enjoying this! Please update as soon as you can.

(No pressure though)

Reviewer: cat and otter
Date: 06/18/08 10:33
Chapter: Den of Vipers

It's getting very exciting... Please update- I can't wait to see what happens! This chapter was really great, I definitely did not see the reason of Rosie's kidnapping coming- it was very cleverly done. well done, it was a great chapter!

Reviewer: cat and otter
Date: 06/18/08 10:32
Chapter: Den of Vipers

It's getting very exciting... Please update- I can't wait to see what happens! This chapter was really great, I definitely did not see the reason of Rosie's kidnapping coming- it was very cleverly done. well done, it was a great chapter!

Reviewer: Kiwi_Chick
Date: 06/15/08 17:18
Chapter: Den of Vipers

Well I suppose it is Slytherins ring lol. I love the history repeating itself with the Potions Master hating a Griffindor. Great story so far, I can't wait to see if they got it right and that git Bernard gets expelled or something.

Reviewer: life_lemons
Date: 06/14/08 19:56
Chapter: Den of Vipers

oh dear, that doesn't sound good.

 

very good I cant wait for another update. 

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 06/14/08 13:45
Chapter: Den of Vipers

very good writing. Well defined plot.

Reviewer: harryfan4ever
Date: 06/14/08 13:06
Chapter: Den of Vipers

*shudder* Snakes. Bleh. I don't like snakes. Poor, poor Scorpius and Albus. Anywho, love the story so UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!! ^-^

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 06/14/08 13:02
Chapter: For Every Action...

Enjoying your story. nice parallel between Scorpius and Albus.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 06/14/08 10:14
Chapter: Den of Vipers

Wow great chapter!!!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 06/14/08 10:08
Chapter: Slytherin's Legacy

Ooo Framed?!?!? This is getting really serious and exciting at the same time =)

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