Wow. I really liked this. It was intense. You coils really feel her pain.
I like how you incorporated the actual lyrics of the song in the poem. great work, keep writing!
Author's Response: thanks!
Oh my Salazar. That was breath taking. The flow was excellent and the added 'Ring around the rosies' bits were incrediably placed. This is actually the second fic that I've seen that song used (_Ivy_'s was the other) And both were amazing. Very good job. This was my favorite part:
This could not be the end,
Not the death of her best friend.
It was just so powerful to me. Then again the whole entire poem is powerful. I loved this. It is one of my favorite HP poems I have read.
I'm sure this sounded a little incoherant, but I just loved this poem. I am outstanded.
Keep up this amazing work,
Author's Response: Thank you! It was such a great review!
That was wonderfully tragic. I liked it loads.=Sammy
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
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That was so beautiful I loved how you used a chilhood poem, becasue Harry Potter is truly about a loss of innocence
Author's Response: True that!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
i think this is a really great poem. i enjoyed it a lot. it was very well written.
Author's Response: Thanks. If you liked this poem, read some of the others that i have written, I would love to know what you think!
that fits Ginny and I like how you had the song thing in it too!
Author's Response: Thank you! I could not get the ryme out of my head, so it became part of the poem.