Reviewer: Black_Beret
Date: 04/04/09 21:19
Chapter: A Pocket Full of Posies

Wow. I really liked this. It was intense. You coils really feel her pain.

Reviewer: Lalalalatina
Date: 10/13/07 19:03
Chapter: A Pocket Full of Posies

so sad...
I like how you incorporated the actual lyrics of the song in the poem. great work, keep writing!

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 10/07/07 21:38
Chapter: A Pocket Full of Posies

Oh my Salazar. That was breath taking. The flow was excellent and the added 'Ring around the rosies' bits were incrediably placed. This is actually the second fic that I've seen that song used (_Ivy_'s was the other) And both were amazing. Very good job. This was my favorite part:

This could not be the end,
Not the death of her best friend.

It was just so powerful to me. Then again the whole entire poem is powerful. I loved this. It is one of my favorite HP poems I have read.

I'm sure this sounded a little incoherant, but I just loved this poem. I am outstanded.

Keep up this amazing work,
Haylee



Author's Response: Thank you! It was such a great review!

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 10/07/07 10:38
Chapter: A Pocket Full of Posies

That was wonderfully tragic. I liked it loads.=Sammy

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 10/04/07 16:14
Chapter: A Pocket Full of Posies

*sniff*

Author's Response: *passes hankie*

Reviewer: loveismagicharry
Date: 10/04/07 15:08
Chapter: A Pocket Full of Posies

That was so beautiful I loved how you used a chilhood poem, becasue Harry Potter is truly about a loss of innocence

Author's Response: True that!

Reviewer: marvelousmeg
Date: 10/04/07 14:21
Chapter: A Pocket Full of Posies

Cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: hlrf
Date: 10/04/07 12:19
Chapter: A Pocket Full of Posies

i think this is a really great poem. i enjoyed it a lot. it was very well written.

Author's Response: Thanks. If you liked this poem, read some of the others that i have written, I would love to know what you think!

Reviewer: siriusrox26
Date: 10/04/07 8:00
Chapter: A Pocket Full of Posies

cool!!
that fits Ginny and I like how you had the song thing in it too!

Author's Response: Thank you! I could not get the ryme out of my head, so it became part of the poem.

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