Great chapter with a fantastic amount of description! Truely great! Its great that someone thought to write a fic on Fenrir! Brilliant!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I find him intrifuing to write as a minor character lol. It won't be long now when chapter two comes!
Ooh, that's lovely, that is. The imagery and wording was wonderful, although it was a little rambling and hard to follow. Keep up the nice work.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm sorry it was rambling..it wasn't meant to be so. How was it hard to follow? Thank you so much for taking the time to review!