Reviews For It Used To Shine
Reviewer: MissTiquelle
Date: 01/01/10 21:14
Chapter: Chapter 1

Love it. The Black brothers relationship is really interesting, I think. "We walk the same road, Sirius. We just chose different paths." perfectly sums it up, I think. Love that line.

Great work! :)

Reviewer: Miss Alice
Date: 10/05/07 0:42
Chapter: Chapter 1

Lovely tone, well done, except the poem/song(?) was interruptive of the flow, though it did fit the scene.

Author's Response: Thank you for the constructive crit and the review. :)

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/04/07 22:47
Chapter: Chapter 1

That's all I can say.


Author's Response: Reviews like these make my day! Thanks!

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