Awe the end of the chapter is romantic! i love it! squee
good ending, but i still wish they would have stayed together! I almost cried when they broke up... :)
cute ending although admittedly I was hoping for them to get back together.
awww! that was a sweet ending! no offense, but it was much better than the other chapter.
great story, i read it all in one sitting!
I loved it! But I do agree with some people, it was a tad abrupt at the end of Ch.5.
The ending of chapter 15 was so abrupt. I'd been folowing & I just scratched my head at it. I'm glad for the epilogue. It actually fits better with the story overall then Chapter 15. I had felt that after George & Fred made up there needed to be something showing normalcy. Thanks for wrapping everything up!
Well that was ok...but i would have liked to find out that they both were either together or were happy with other people. This was more of another chapter than an ending
I am happy you wrote the epilogue and I agree that they weren't quite the right fit. I would love to see a sequel where we get to see who George would end up with.....?????
oh thats so sweet! I still don't like that they arent back together but I AM A ROMANCE FREAK. And thats coming from my heart
Awww.. very sweet. Good ending. I like the previous one, too, but this does wrap it up nicely. Good job.
Call me an idiot, but I didn't realize that the last chapter was the end of the story. Oh well. This was a fine way to wrap everything up. Congrats and thank you for keeping us all entertained.
is that an ending???
I loved the story. it was well writtern and interesting right up until the end. and then i just have to say HUH???
I just read this straight through-
This story was great, but I was stunned that they broke up. I hope George and Fred have a heart to heart and he makes things right with Hermione because I don't think that they were just using eachother because of lonlieness..
Can't wait until the epilogue is approved so I can read it!
Write more stories! This was awesome!
Great story but a terrible ending. Why couldn't they be together....I think you should think about writing and epilogue.
hope fred and george make up....idk, i think hermione is mean because of what she did, but in another sense she had to do it. love the story even more now...update
Whoa! Didn't see that coming! It makes perfect sense, though. Good job on telling a compelling story.
Another good chapter. Can't wait for the next installment.
oh! I knew that was going to happen in this chapter. R u giong to make a sequel?
I think you should! You can't just leave them unhappy