Reviewer: GlynnisI
Date: 06/26/11 10:54
Chapter: Why Duh Ya Harve A Rand, Doodley?

Congratulations to Big D! I've been sure for a few chapters... um, and just where is Vernon? :P

Reviewer: Cypress
Date: 06/23/11 18:45
Chapter: Why Duh Ya Harve A Rand, Doodley?

This is one of my favorite fics because it's nice to read something about the Dursleys.

My favorite part of this installment was in the wee-beginning where there was much anticipation and the Dursleys were in hiding...that made me read chapter after chapter in one sitting.

It's nice how you captured the essence of Vernon and Petunia, and I also liked Dudley's inquisitive side.

The only thing is that I feel the last few chapters in particular have too much in them...Dudley's a wizard now? Well that's very interesting but wouldn't he have been proclaimed a Squib early on? We can see Dudley's change from the beginning to this point, but I feel that his changes are too big...does he really need an improvement every chapter? If so, will he be the Wizarding World's next hero in the next chapter?

I honestly don't mean to appear like I'm bashing you, really. This is a brilliant story and and certainly has me gripped to it...I just feel that the last few chapters have got me gripped because I have to see how the story ends; I don't feel same the spark of anticipation I felt when the Dursleys were in hiding.

Reviewer: ILoveHarry 3_14
Date: 06/20/11 11:42
Chapter: Why Duh Ya Harve A Rand, Doodley?

I love this story. I get so excited when you update! It's so cool that you made Dudley a wizard. I wonder what Vernon is going to think when he finds out his son is a wizard. Please update soon!

Reviewer: Taki-Maki
Date: 06/19/11 16:20
Chapter: Septum Aperio

I laughed way too hard at this! Excellent job! I love your writing!

Reviewer: rowangreenhill
Date: 06/19/11 10:53
Chapter: The Wall of Questions

That was amazing! GIRL, WRITE A BOOK AND GET IT PUBLISHED!!!

Reviewer: rowangreenhill
Date: 06/19/11 9:47
Chapter: What Dudley Doesn't Know About His Mum

again, this is epic :D

Reviewer: rowangreenhill
Date: 06/19/11 9:13
Chapter: Death Eaters, Weasels, and Rumours, Oh my!

OH MY GOSH I HAVE BEEN READING THIS FOR AN HOUR AND I AM EATING IT UP! THIS IS AMAZING BECAUSE IT KINDA GIVES YOU INSIGHT TO THE DURSELYS DURING THE DEATHLY HALLOWS AND IT IS SO AWESOMAZING! YOU SHOULD BECOME AN AUTHOR!!!!! EVEN THOUGH U RNT JK ROWLING IT FEELS LIKE I AM READING ONE OF HER BOOKS!!! :D
-Rowan G.

Reviewer: grangergirl35
Date: 06/18/11 20:05
Chapter: Why Duh Ya Harve A Rand, Doodley?

thanks for finally updating!!!

Reviewer: Snowlily
Date: 06/18/11 16:04
Chapter: t Paris

I can see Dudley's interest in Quidditch, although he would need more of an Abraxan horse than a Firebolt. I can see him doing the 'Crabbe/Goyle' sort of Beating.....=)

Reviewer: Snowlily
Date: 06/18/11 15:57
Chapter: Rice Krispies and Comic Strips

Dudley is a bit....more humane than I like to think of him.... you do it in an intristing way, fun to read...=) Although, I was really hoping for some 'mishandled' magic and perhaps another issue for Dudders.... well, the story's barely started. I really love it. =)

Reviewer: Snowlily
Date: 06/18/11 15:51
Chapter: Septum Aperio

Very imaginative, very creative, very well written, very canon. I love it. =)

Reviewer: ajruss7
Date: 06/18/11 14:52
Chapter: Why Duh Ya Harve A Rand, Doodley?

Wonderful. I'm hopeing theres going to be more

Reviewer: majestic_ginny
Date: 06/18/11 12:05
Chapter: Why Duh Ya Harve A Rand, Doodley?

Okay, wow. This is most definitely one of my favourite stories. I love everything about this fic, starting from the plot to the characters, and I totally love what you did to Petunia and Dudley. Vernon, obviously, was totally in character XD. And Dudley, a wizard?? AWESOME :D. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Hope the wait won't be long!--Nadia :D

Reviewer: hpgploversforever
Date: 06/18/11 10:23
Chapter: Why Duh Ya Harve A Rand, Doodley?

That was a great chapter can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: cg_123
Date: 06/18/11 9:46
Chapter: Septum Aperio

Great story ! Can't wait until the next chapter !

Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 06/18/11 9:18
Chapter: Why Duh Ya Harve A Rand, Doodley?

wow dudders is a wizard, great chapter. i love this story can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 06/18/11 8:36
Chapter: Why Duh Ya Harve A Rand, Doodley?

I knew it!! Oh boy I can't wait for Vernon to find out!!!

Reviewer: ProfPosky
Date: 06/18/11 8:17
Chapter: Why Duh Ya Harve A Rand, Doodley?

I did enjoy it. I love the whole concept of this story, and I am itching to see what Dudley will do now that he's discovered magic.

I do have to chuckle at the argument about how to teach him - I can SO see that happening...

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 06/18/11 7:35
Chapter: Why Duh Ya Harve A Rand, Doodley?

Wow Very cool chapter! I cannot wait to see how Dudley progresses with his lessons ;-)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 06/18/11 7:27
Chapter: Why Duh Ya Harve A Rand, Doodley?

Wow Very cool chapter! I cannot wait to see how Dudley progresses with his lessons ;-)

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