Reviewer: lambtoslaughter
Date: 08/30/11 22:57
Chapter: The Plan

Well I really hope no one gets hurt!! I miss Vernon's jerk-ish but hilarious comments, but I'm enjoying the action. Also, I wanted to compliment your pacing... The characters are developing and growing at a realistic rate, and things aren't happening too fast or too slow, which is really nice. a lot of times author's either drag a plotline out, or reveal things / present character growth way too fast. Your story so far has been paced just right!! Can't wait to see what happens next! This is prob my fav HP fanfiction =)

Reviewer: lambtoslaughter
Date: 08/30/11 22:09
Chapter: The Wall of Questions

Wow! Ok when i started reading this story i was wondering if dudley would end up being a wizard or having some sort of magical powers... and when you said only two wizards would be able to cross into the Longbottoms' house as a security measure, I had a feeling that after the three "muggles" entered, only one wizard would be able to cross...suggesting one of the "muggles" is actually a witch/wizard! At first I was guessin it's dudley, but maybe it's vernon? obv it can't be petunia, or dumbledore would have let her go to hogwarts... but wouldn't hagrid have told dudley he was wizard when he came to get harry? hmm... maybe vernon stole dudley's letters as well, huh? I'm guessin that's what happened, but it would be a funny twist if it turned out vernon was a fully qualified wizard or somthin! LOL. i love the little details you put in from the book, like the fact that Neville's walls are covered w/ bubblegum wrappers... =)

Reviewer: lambtoslaughter
Date: 08/30/11 21:28
Chapter: A Weasley Welcome

I like where you're taking this story... the way the Dursley's are coming across other people from the magical world, but in a way that makes sense =)

Reviewer: lambtoslaughter
Date: 08/30/11 21:00
Chapter: What Dudley Doesn't Know About His Mum

my fave part of this chapter is when Vernon is complaining about the polyjuice potion and Hestia goes, "Yes, i know you're worried about it getting into your dinner" hehehe yep def seems like somethin uncle vernon would be supremely concerned about considering he and his entire family are being stalked by murderous wizards... i mean, a man's gotta eat! lol. I like the way you're portraying petunia, it seems very likely she'd be feeling this way after what snape's memories told us in book 7. thanks for another great chapter!

Reviewer: lambtoslaughter
Date: 08/30/11 18:28
Chapter: The Silver Lynx

LOL i loved this chapter... Uncle Vernon has always cracked me up, but I think he's even more hilarious in your story than in the regular HP's... i love it when he goes "Spray this one, spray this one, for god's sake woman, spray this one!" LOL and then "you wanted me to suffer, that's why you sprayed my bug last.' hahaha my bug...just totally cracked me up. i love your story! =) this is why i like reading the funny fics... they are so much better than the angst-y ones

Reviewer: lambtoslaughter
Date: 08/30/11 18:11
Chapter: été ŕ Paris

hehehe I love how you wrote that Vernon was eating his sandwich more forcefully than usual, pretending it was Hestia's head... LOL

Reviewer: ajruss7
Date: 08/23/11 20:27
Chapter: Why Duh Ya Harve A Rand, Doodley?

Loved it and can't wait for the next one

Reviewer: janetta
Date: 08/16/11 7:30
Chapter: Why Duh Ya Harve A Rand, Doodley?

love this story. PLEASE continue it soon.

Reviewer: OohButterfly
Date: 08/13/11 21:38
Chapter: Septum Aperio

I love this so very much. It is in my favorites. *Whacks* Update!

Reviewer: GeniusITM
Date: 08/10/11 7:04
Chapter: Why Duh Ya Harve A Rand, Doodley?

Awesome Story. Excellent twist at the end.

Reviewer: harrypotterlover987
Date: 08/08/11 2:58
Chapter: Septum Aperio

This is amazing, I haven't thought about writing about what happened to the Dursleys, but now you have, I can't believe no one did it before! This is in incredibly well written story, and I LOVE the twist at the end, though I'm not going to go into it here- spoilers! Amazing, amazing, amazing :) xxx Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: seeker_17
Date: 08/06/11 13:19
Chapter: Why Duh Ya Harve A Rand, Doodley?

awsome!get the rest of the chapters finished so i can read more!

Reviewer: Laura Creevy
Date: 08/05/11 8:32
Chapter: Why Duh Ya Harve A Rand, Doodley?

OMG this is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: ChocolateInTheLibrary
Date: 07/26/11 14:09
Chapter: Why Duh Ya Harve A Rand, Doodley?

So glad you updated again so soon. What a treat! And I love the direction the story is taking. I'm just hoping we'll eventually get to see a reunion between Dudley and Harry. (My dream would be for Dudley to tag along to the Battle of Hogwarts, sort of the way he did to the Longbottom rescue at St. Mungo's, but maybe that's too over the top. But I can always dream!)

Reviewer: Christopher OBarr
Date: 07/23/11 18:21
Chapter: Why Duh Ya Harve A Rand, Doodley?

Might want to change that 4th "Neville" to a "Dudley"

Reviewer: Dementors
Date: 07/15/11 9:15
Chapter: Septum Aperio

in the latest chapter i think i spotted a mistake not sure though...

Who’s wand is that?” Hestia asked.

“It was Alice’s.”

“Do you think it will work for him?” Hestia asked. “It hasn’t chosen him, and he hasn’t won it. It might not work right.”

“It’s the only one we have,” Mrs. Longbottom said. “Plus, wands work in strange ways sometimes. Neville(isnt that supposed to be Dudley not neville?) helped save Alice from St. Mungo’s today, and this wand may know that.

Author's Response: Oh, missed that! I'll change it, thanks for pointing it out!

Reviewer: ralula
Date: 07/14/11 1:18
Chapter: Why Duh Ya Harve A Rand, Doodley?

Amazingly well written showing Dudley and Petunia in a whole new light. Very enjoyable reading, hard to put down!

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: oboechick
Date: 07/12/11 18:26
Chapter: Why Duh Ya Harve A Rand, Doodley?

This is a great story!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you, glad you like it!

Reviewer: swimmer13
Date: 07/09/11 16:23
Chapter: Why Duh Ya Harve A Rand, Doodley?

this is one of the only humor stories that i actually find funny!

Reviewer: GinnyPottterGranger
Date: 06/28/11 23:03
Chapter: Why Duh Ya Harve A Rand, Doodley?

aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!!! i cant believe it!! a wizard! please tell me ur updating soon! i want to read vernon's reaction! and please tell me you're putting in a scene where harry finds out!please i think i'll die otherwise!

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