Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 09/03/08 9:18
Chapter: What Dudley Doesn't Know About His Mum

I always dread reading humorous stories because my sense of humor usually doesn't match. I think this story is more in the general catagory with touches of humor.

I think your characterization of Dudley is optimistic and slightly off cannon. For instance I would expect Dudley to be a bit more grumpy especially since they have been confined to the seventh floor, that at times he would side with his dad and other times be curious about the wizard world. Although he is grateful to Harry, I would expect him to also be jealous of him and maybe angry at him because he is in effect in prison. It is only recently (within the last year)that Dudley has thought of Harry as someone to thank. He is still used to getting his own way.

But other than this, I find the story fascinating.

Reviewer: linnealovegood
Date: 09/02/08 15:09
Chapter: What Dudley Doesn't Know About His Mum

this is in the humor section, but it is also really real. the absurdity make it funny and the characters make it good! i love it.

Author's Response: thanks, I do my best to mkae it realistic. :)

Reviewer: phoenix_fille
Date: 09/01/08 15:36
Chapter: What Dudley Doesn't Know About His Mum

Yippie! You updated. Very good chapter

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: magic_pen
Date: 09/01/08 9:47
Chapter: What Dudley Doesn't Know About His Mum

I liked this chapter. YAY! Hurry up with that next chapter, now.

Reviewer: wodcdre
Date: 09/01/08 9:31
Chapter: What Dudley Doesn't Know About His Mum

Well this was well worth the wait. A brilliant "what if" scenario of what may have happened with the Dursleys. I like how you've portrayed Dudley in a plausible way in this story. I simply cannot wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like the way it's going!

Reviewer: HermyStar
Date: 09/01/08 4:06
Chapter: What Dudley Doesn't Know About His Mum

This is actually one of the first fanfics I ever read. It's awesome!!!!!!!! Keep up thegood work!!!!!!!!!!!

Huggles From HermyStar

Author's Response: I'm glad my story left a good first impression of fanfic!!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 08/31/08 15:09
Chapter: What Dudley Doesn't Know About His Mum

YAY!!! I love reading each new chapter that is posted :-) I wasnt really expecting the end of this chapter. Vernon is such a little nasty piece of work though it really makes the story interesting!

Author's Response: Vernon is nasty! I thought I would surprise you guys with that ending. Hope you like it!

Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 08/31/08 14:19
Chapter: What Dudley Doesn't Know About His Mum

amazing, splendid, stupendous, great chapter, i loved the fact that dudders starts to like magic and the fact that petunia told him he should fix his relationship with harry was great, keep up the great work. update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: goddess of light
Date: 08/31/08 10:56
Chapter: What Dudley Doesn't Know About His Mum

Awesome. Hope the next chapter will go up soon!

Reviewer: hpfreak1129
Date: 08/31/08 0:49
Chapter: Septum Aperio

OMG!!! when i saw that this was updated i was like yayy!!! haha! i love this chapter!! i rlly wasnt expecting that with petunia though!! plz dont make us wait as long as we had to for this chapter for the next one! plzz!! haha!

Author's Response: haha That's great. I was worried everyone would have forgotten my story by now!

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 08/30/08 21:25
Chapter: What Dudley Doesn't Know About His Mum

OMG !!!!!! I can foresee many exciting possibilities now. I hope you have another chapter almost ready for queue. I know it's been a while for you, but this is soooo good. Now that Petunia is changing things could get very interesting. Perhaps putting a full body bind on Vernon could help Hestia and Dedalus explain more to Dudley and Petunia. I'll be waiting patiently Not

Author's Response: Trust me, there will be some exciting things in the future! Thanks for reviewing :D

Reviewer: goddess of light
Date: 08/28/08 19:10
Chapter: Septum Aperio

Especially (sorry, I have to write again, I cannot help but rave) since now that I think about it, the whole Dursley thing was really trunkated. You've carried it on so well! And you've managed to fit it in with the REAL books way beyond the capabilities of most. It's so cool to hear what Dudley was doing, and those little hints of Harry's side make me want to squeal. 6754379587639857/10

Author's Response: Thanks, I like trying to fit it in with the story as best as I can, so I'm glad you picked up on that! thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: goddess of light
Date: 08/28/08 19:04
Chapter: Death Eaters, Weasels, and Rumours, Oh my!

I absolutely LOVE this story! You've carried on Dudley's story excellently. You've obviously got an eye for detail that many fanfic writers desperately lack. The spells you make are stupendously well thoguht out, by the way. Love it, love it, love it! Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks, i'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: weasleywannabe47
Date: 08/13/08 20:39
Chapter: Septum Aperio

I love this story!Update it as soon as possible!

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 07/28/08 16:01
Chapter: Death Eaters, Weasels, and Rumours, Oh my!

I love this fic! I've never thought about what happened to the Dursley's after they left Privet Drive in DH. I'm starting to warm to Dudley and concede that he was perhaps the product of his parents prejudices and if he'd been less inclined to listen to them Harry might have had a friend in Privet Drive all those years. I love the way Dudley is getting a garbled version of the story because of the way it's been warped by time and rumours, it was so funny. Maybe one day when it's all over he and Harry will occasionally see each other and he'll get the real truth about everything. I can't wait for the next chapter, this is so exciting to read.

Reviewer: Ghoul In Pajamas
Date: 07/26/08 16:36
Chapter: Death Eaters, Weasels, and Rumours, Oh my!

Hey guys! A lot of you have been wondering whether I'm continuing this story. Don't worry, I am. I've been really busy with real life issues lately and haven't had much time to dedicate to writing while keeping the same quality as previous chapters, but I’m very sorry about the delay. I’m a reader as well, and I know it’s horrible to wait forever for an update. I can promise chapter six will be ready for you guys soon though! I've finished writing it, so that leaves the editing with my beta and then being accepted by the mods. (I have no idea how long the queue is these days.) Again, I hope you guys don’t think I’ve abandoned this story, because that’s not going to happen, so please don’t abandon me! I love my readers and reviewers and I plan on submitting at the pace I was before, now that I’m not so busy. The next chapter is titled What Dudley didn’t know about his mum (or something to that effect—it’s a working title) and I hope you guys like it. It’s one of my favorites so far! If anyone wants to contact me, you can find me on the Beta Boards, my username is the same!
:) Kristen

Reviewer: PottyLovesLoony
Date: 07/10/08 14:22
Chapter: Death Eaters, Weasels, and Rumours, Oh my!

Is this completed? Please say no! I want to learn more about Dudley's interest in the Wizarding World! And seriously, who wouldnt want to learn about his cousin slaying a giant snake?

Author's Response: haha that would be pretty cool :)

Reviewer: Lyratearsx
Date: 07/10/08 4:38
Chapter: Death Eaters, Weasels, and Rumours, Oh my!

ZOMG, this was brilliant!

You had me rolling on the floor laughing the whole way through.

The Dursleys and the wizards.



Author's Response: Thanks!! That's good to hear :)

Reviewer: nkaul
Date: 06/18/08 10:48
Chapter: Death Eaters, Weasels, and Rumours, Oh my!

Do u mind continuing the story????????????

Reviewer: crumplehornsnorkak
Date: 05/31/08 17:57
Chapter: Death Eaters, Weasels, and Rumours, Oh my!

I love your story, it's soooo funny.

update soon plesase.

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