Reviewer: suswoman
Date: 10/25/08 22:19
Chapter: Tabooed

I'm reading your story for the first time and am enjoying it very much. I love the idea of following the Dursleys during that final year and expanding upon the changes of heart that Petunia and Dudley seemed to have at the beginning of Hallows. What fun!

Reviewer: hermione_lily_ginny_luna
Date: 10/25/08 4:21
Chapter: Tabooed

please, please, please let me know when you update! i love your story! i wouldn't review if i didn't!

Reviewer: hermione_lily_ginny_luna
Date: 10/25/08 4:13
Chapter: What Dudley Doesn't Know About His Mum

i was right! i. love. it!

Reviewer: Stubbornly_appeared
Date: 10/25/08 1:08
Chapter: Tabooed

Wow, that was exciting. The conflict between Dudley and Vernon is really good, plus you're working in the 'real world' elements well, too. Keep writing!

Reviewer: dona682
Date: 10/24/08 20:27
Chapter: Septum Aperio

Enjoyable story, look forward to the next chapters. You my need to come up with way Duddley cn stun death eaters toescape various situatuins.

Reviewer: linnealovegood
Date: 10/24/08 20:04
Chapter: Tabooed

i love your story! it is holarious!!

Reviewer: ILoveHarry 3_14
Date: 10/24/08 19:53
Chapter: Tabooed

I loved it. This story keeps getting better and better. Please update soon!

Reviewer: FireboltCrasher
Date: 10/24/08 15:43
Chapter: Tabooed

This chapter is very creative. I like how you show a different side of Petunia; what the boggart turned into when it saw her really showed how much she actually cared for Harry. There's a lot of action in this chapter, and I look forward to the next one. :)

Reviewer: phoenix_fille
Date: 10/24/08 15:20
Chapter: Tabooed

Very good, update again soon!

Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 10/24/08 13:50
Chapter: Tabooed

i love dudley standing up the his dad, vernon is a right ole git and even puntunia is coming along. this is my favorite comedy story on the site, keep up the great writing, can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 10/24/08 11:59
Chapter: Tabooed

Is the reason we didn't see what Vernon is afraid of, is that it is magic in any form that terrifies him. Great chapter, I hope you have another chapter ready for queue, because this is really good.

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 10/24/08 11:58
Chapter: Tabooed

Is the reason we didn't see what Vernon is afraid of, is that it is magic in any form that terrifies him. Great chapter, I hope you have another chapter ready for queue, because this is really good.

Reviewer: hermione_lily_ginny_luna
Date: 10/24/08 7:02
Chapter: Septum Aperio

three words: i. like. it. i'm sure i'll love the rest!

Reviewer: harryRT
Date: 10/23/08 20:13
Chapter: What Dudley Doesn't Know About His Mum

OMG... this is great!!!
but really you have got to update its been all most 2 months

LOVE the story

Reviewer: Sesah
Date: 10/17/08 0:58
Chapter: What Dudley Doesn't Know About His Mum

oooooooh! i like this story! Please finish it!!

Reviewer: sabradan
Date: 10/09/08 19:47
Chapter: Septum Aperio

So, is there an update coming any time soon?

Reviewer: goddess of light
Date: 09/20/08 16:55
Chapter: Septum Aperio

I have already left a review for this chapter, but I was in a hurry and it was so short, I realize that it does not accurately communicate my rabid obsession with this story. I love it! I LOVE IT SO MUCH! You must update as soon as the queue is back up, for if you do not my poor head shall surely implode! And then what is left of my poor imploded head will explode! All over my computer! And that would be messy! Now that that is on the level, I simply must again stress that I absolutely adore your story. I love the way you're gradually adapting Dudley and his new way of thinking, and how you take the other Dursleys oddities (normalities?) to new cannon-worthy heights. (Almost cannon worthy--to say it were entirely so would be blasphemy.) I love it! Spectfabulmarvstanding! Twelve million and sixty-four out of ten.

Reviewer: FireboltCrasher
Date: 09/15/08 15:31
Chapter: Septum Aperio

This story is awesome! Uncle Vernon is so hilarious! I still would probably be really mad at him, because he's not really acting like he's grateful to Hestia and Dedalus. I'm glad Dudley is showing some interest in Harry's world. Maybe they'll see each other again in the future? Please update! :)

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 09/15/08 14:12
Chapter: What Dudley Doesn't Know About His Mum

This chapter was very touching and very funny. I would be so made with Uncle Vernon if I were Hestia. I'd hex him into next week if he threw my coffee cup out the window, enchanted or not. Update soon please!

Reviewer: rambkowalczyk
Date: 09/03/08 9:18
Chapter: What Dudley Doesn't Know About His Mum

I always dread reading humorous stories because my sense of humor usually doesn't match. I think this story is more in the general catagory with touches of humor.

I think your characterization of Dudley is optimistic and slightly off cannon. For instance I would expect Dudley to be a bit more grumpy especially since they have been confined to the seventh floor, that at times he would side with his dad and other times be curious about the wizard world. Although he is grateful to Harry, I would expect him to also be jealous of him and maybe angry at him because he is in effect in prison. It is only recently (within the last year)that Dudley has thought of Harry as someone to thank. He is still used to getting his own way.

But other than this, I find the story fascinating.

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