Reviewer: Salmantino7
Date: 08/13/09 14:20
Chapter: What Dudley Doesn't Know About His Mum

WHOA! Go Petunia! I was definitely not expecting that. can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Salmantino7
Date: 08/13/09 13:59
Chapter: Death Eaters, Weasels, and Rumours, Oh my!

“Oh dear, what will the neighbours think!” Petunia squeaked. “Dudley, get away from the window.”

Silly Petunia. another good chapter. I loved dedalus' and hestia's recounting of the sorcerers stone, that was great.

Reviewer: Salmantino7
Date: 08/13/09 13:45
Chapter: The Silver Lynx

oooooh, I think the house is going to explode if venon and hestia keep at it. Dudley is getting really cool, and I really like hestia and dedalus.

Reviewer: Salmantino7
Date: 08/10/09 18:13
Chapter: Septum Aperio

Wow, I'm really enjoying this. I like Dudley!!

Reviewer: type-n-shadow
Date: 08/07/09 22:32
Chapter: Death Eaters, Weasels, and Rumours, Oh my!

Haha!!! This was a great idea! I'm glad you wrote it, and it's making me laugh my head off.

Reviewer: Fenrir_Confringo
Date: 08/06/09 21:59
Chapter: Rice Krispies and Comic Strips

Hahha, this story is good so far, I love how confused Dudley is about the Wizarding World.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 08/06/09 17:47
Chapter: The Wall of Questions

It is very nice to see Dudley taking a very active role in learning more about the wizarding world. Super chapter, Keep up the good work and update as soon as you can!!!!!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 08/06/09 17:37
Chapter: A Weasley Welcome

Nice to see Fred and George taking the joke shop very seriously, Floo order was a great idea!! Wonderful chapter, Cannot wait to see how "Gran" treats them in the next chapter :-)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 08/06/09 17:28
Chapter: Tabooed

After reading each chapter I am starting to like Dudley more and more, excellent chapter. Vernon should really just go away though...LOL

Reviewer: snpdrgn
Date: 08/04/09 17:07
Chapter: The Wall of Questions

Great chapter!  So much happened.  Can't wait for Vernon to meet Augusta!

Reviewer: potterchassid
Date: 08/03/09 7:26
Chapter: Septum Aperio

I just have this crazy idea: Did the door close, not because Dudders is unbeknownst to himself a wizard, but because Vernon is one, and, since he didn't get to go to Hogwarts for whatever reason, he has been bitter about it ever since.

The third option, of Petunia being a witch, is unavailable; runs counter to cannon.

Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer
Date: 08/02/09 20:57
Chapter: Septum Aperio

uuh, i absolutely looove this chappie! and i loooves this story!!!! :)
but some of those articles don't seem like the stuff neville would hang up, like the ones critisizing harry and dumbledore, but i can see why you had to put these in, so dudley would know.
can't wait to read the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: Cascia
Date: 08/02/09 20:54
Chapter: The Wall of Questions

Personally I think that long chapters are better.... I like this chapter and I can't wait for the other ones!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 08/02/09 19:44
Chapter: The Wall of Questions

Wonderful chapter. So Dudley is going to be a Wizard?! You are sneaky, and probably smirking as we read this,lol. I love the idea. This has always been a fun story, and it's just getting better!!! Thank you.

Author's Response: haha thanks! :) Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Ghoul In Pajamas
Date: 08/02/09 19:37
Chapter: The Wall of Questions

I know, it's been so long! I'm trying to fire out a few more chapters before school starts. I'm glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing!

Author's Response: Wow, how lame am I? Accidentally reviewing my own story...

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 08/02/09 18:28
Chapter: The Wall of Questions

I really love this story. It's amazing. I can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm really glad you like it!

Reviewer: grangergal101
Date: 08/02/09 18:19
Chapter: The Wall of Questions

A very interesting take on Neville's room, i found it quite interesting.

Did the door close because another witch or wizard entered with them?

Author's Response: I guess you'll just have to wait to see! Thanks!

Reviewer: bigtimer
Date: 08/02/09 14:04
Chapter: The Wall of Questions

can't believe that duders is actually learning about the wizarding world and on his own to boot. can't wait for your next chapter, i love the way you have vernon still a jerk but putunia and dudley acting nicer, i really think thats the way it would happen in jo's world too. keep up the great story

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you like it!

Reviewer: ProfPosky
Date: 08/02/09 13:33
Chapter: The Wall of Questions

Yes, this needed to be that long.

It certainly seems as if Dudley is changing, and it is believable in the sense that his parents catering to his every whim was what made him nasty to begin with. Now that he is having to come into his own a bit, he has a spine, not just a stick to hit people with. They are lucky he is not more like Snape - were he that unforgiving of the Weasley brothers, this would all be a lot harder for the Deadalus and Hestia.

I wonder if Dudley is a Wizard and this is why the door sealed itself?

I like the little moment of shame you gave him, where he feels badly about making fun of Harry about Cedric's death, but I am also a little surprised that he is not a bit astounded at all the fuss about his cousin, who was, after all, probably nothing special in Dudley's eyes to begin with, except for having saved him from the dementors.

I think he's just put more effort into getting all these bits of new straight than he's put into all his previous years of schooling combined.

I am really enjoying this and hope you update soon!

Author's Response: I'm glad someone mentioned that he should be more surprised! That was one thing that I tried to put into this chapter that just didn't come off right. It's actually part of why the wait was so long. :/ Obviously, he would begin to understand how important Harry is from what Dedalus and Hestia have been telling him, but not to the degree that it is portrayed in the articles. Anyway, I'm done ranting, so thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: potterchassid
Date: 08/02/09 10:57
Chapter: The Wall of Questions

You know, I thought that your portrayal of the Prophet articles was too factual, too serious, out of character.

Until ... until, that is, you inserted the following:
When Ginny Weasley, a fourth-year whose ankle was broken in the fray, was asked for a comment, she replied, “You dunderheads should have listened to Harry a year ago!”

ROTFL. Excellent chapter, I look forward to the next update, with impatience

Author's Response: thanks, I'm glad you like it!

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