Reviewer: bodrickbode
Date: 11/11/11 17:13
Chapter: Why Duh Ya Harve A Rand, Doodley?

This is my favourite hpfan fic yet.... are there anymore chapters?

Reviewer: ajruss7
Date: 11/10/11 15:17
Chapter: Why Duh Ya Harve A Rand, Doodley?

I love it, love it love it. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: greenstripes
Date: 11/09/11 0:29
Chapter: Why Duh Ya Harve A Rand, Doodley?

This is really good! It's a shame its been a few months.

Reviewer: ksecc
Date: 10/30/11 20:00
Chapter: Septum Aperio

What fun! I love the Uncle Vernon vs Hestia! Can't wait to see what happens.

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 10/08/11 18:50
Chapter: Why Duh Ya Harve A Rand, Doodley?

Oh my. It does make sense that Dudders Magic was suppressed. It would probably help him if just one person was instructing him. I think he has a lot motivation to learn. He wants to help protect his parents, especially his Mum. Dean won't be around long, as he will (I predict) break out Ted Tonks. That is if you're following Canon. I must go on to find out what happens next.
FoM

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 10/08/11 17:53
Chapter: Mrs. Longbottom's Experiment

The change in Dudley and Petunia is amazing. But Vernon is still a problem. Not that he'll speak much until Hestia gives him his voice back. Now there's a new wrinkle. I'm guessing Dudley might have a bit of Magic in him. Not enough to alert Hogwarts, but maybe a bit. Hmmmm? Now I must go on and see what happens. Fascinating.
FoM

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 10/08/11 15:14
Chapter: The Rescue from St. Mungo's

Wow! When Dudley makes a change he doesn't go halfway. That was great thinking giving that DE a Weasley sweet. I can tell there's more to come. I look forward how Petunia and Vernon react.
FoM

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 10/08/11 4:40
Chapter: The Plan

I am afraid this might be where Dean almost gets caught. But I am intrigued by how Dudders stepped up. Hopefully his parents aren't going to do something stupid. Very interesting.
FoM

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 10/08/11 0:24
Chapter: Answers

Oh my goodness! Petunia finally let it out. It's too bad Harry wasn't there to hear it. I have to wunder what this will do to Vernon. He has got to change out someone will toss him a room and lock him in. I was thrilled that Dudley asked all his questions. That had to open both his and her eyes. Now it looks like Dean is about to join the group. I'm also Thankful that Vernon screwed up Riddles name. That would have been horrible.
Good One,
FoM

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 10/07/11 22:31
Chapter: The Wall of Questions

I guess I just found a chapter I don't remember. What a fascinating gem. I have to wunder just how Dudders will seek his answers. And what will his parents say?????? I have got to go on
FoM

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 10/07/11 22:26
Chapter: The Wall of Questions

I guess I just found a chapter I don't remember. What a fascinating gem. I have to wunder just how Dudders will seek his answers. And what will his parents say?????? I have got to go on
FoM

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 10/07/11 18:53
Chapter: A Weasley Welcome

This is truly an adventurous read. I really was glad the Twins didn't goad Vernon into eating a piece of candy. I really like how Dudley is reacting to, and learning about the Magical World.
FoM

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 10/07/11 10:02
Chapter: What Dudley Doesn't Know About His Mum

I'm rereading this to catch up. I think I'm enjoying it even more.
FoM

Reviewer: Accio Goblet
Date: 09/04/11 18:30
Chapter: Why Duh Ya Harve A Rand, Doodley?

I think this is really funny. (Vernon versus Hestia? Goooooo Hestia!)

Reviewer: morthathe wizard
Date: 09/04/11 15:30
Chapter: Why Duh Ya Harve A Rand, Doodley?

wonderful but you forgot one sign and jk herself gave us it, dudley could see the dementors and muggles cant see dementors and you reiterated on it in this story

Reviewer: lambtoslaughter
Date: 08/31/11 0:25
Chapter: Why Duh Ya Harve A Rand, Doodley?

yay! finally! i had a feeling since i started reading this story that dudley might be a wizard, and the clues kept piling up! Again, though, you paced things just right... waited just long enough to let us know for sure, and have dudley find out, that he's a wizard. OOOH I cannot WAIT to hear what Vernon will have to say about this! lol. I hope you're still updating this story, and will update again soon. =) i'm def not ready for this tale to end!

Reviewer: lambtoslaughter
Date: 08/30/11 22:57
Chapter: The Plan

Well I really hope no one gets hurt!! I miss Vernon's jerk-ish but hilarious comments, but I'm enjoying the action. Also, I wanted to compliment your pacing... The characters are developing and growing at a realistic rate, and things aren't happening too fast or too slow, which is really nice. a lot of times author's either drag a plotline out, or reveal things / present character growth way too fast. Your story so far has been paced just right!! Can't wait to see what happens next! This is prob my fav HP fanfiction =)

Reviewer: lambtoslaughter
Date: 08/30/11 22:09
Chapter: The Wall of Questions

Wow! Ok when i started reading this story i was wondering if dudley would end up being a wizard or having some sort of magical powers... and when you said only two wizards would be able to cross into the Longbottoms' house as a security measure, I had a feeling that after the three "muggles" entered, only one wizard would be able to cross...suggesting one of the "muggles" is actually a witch/wizard! At first I was guessin it's dudley, but maybe it's vernon? obv it can't be petunia, or dumbledore would have let her go to hogwarts... but wouldn't hagrid have told dudley he was wizard when he came to get harry? hmm... maybe vernon stole dudley's letters as well, huh? I'm guessin that's what happened, but it would be a funny twist if it turned out vernon was a fully qualified wizard or somthin! LOL. i love the little details you put in from the book, like the fact that Neville's walls are covered w/ bubblegum wrappers... =)

Reviewer: lambtoslaughter
Date: 08/30/11 21:28
Chapter: A Weasley Welcome

I like where you're taking this story... the way the Dursley's are coming across other people from the magical world, but in a way that makes sense =)

Reviewer: lambtoslaughter
Date: 08/30/11 21:00
Chapter: What Dudley Doesn't Know About His Mum

my fave part of this chapter is when Vernon is complaining about the polyjuice potion and Hestia goes, "Yes, i know you're worried about it getting into your dinner" hehehe yep def seems like somethin uncle vernon would be supremely concerned about considering he and his entire family are being stalked by murderous wizards... i mean, a man's gotta eat! lol. I like the way you're portraying petunia, it seems very likely she'd be feeling this way after what snape's memories told us in book 7. thanks for another great chapter!

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
MOST RECENT
Sophomore Spells at the Wizarding University of Paris by jenniferes Professors
Hermione Granger and Draco Malfoy attend their sophomore year at the Wizarding...
Torn Apart by Soap 6th-7th Years
When Sirius Black was taken to Azkaban, he left someone behind. After his escape...
You're Safe With Me by phoenix_tearPatronus 3rd-5th Years
Teddy and Victoire. Victoire and Teddy. That's how it had always been. Growing...
FEATURED
When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning by forsakenphoenix 1st-2nd Years
Hope, loyalty, love, despair, and tragedy. Through it all, Lily discovers the...
The Seven Potters by Gmariam 1st-2nd Years
Harry is about to leave the Burrow for the final time when his six doppelgangers...
Doubt by lucca4 3rd-5th Years
In the midst of the war, the Marauders and Lily have joined the Order, resolute...
Rest In The Bed by welshdevondragon 3rd-5th Years
"This is the last night I will spend in our flat. I have spent sixty-nine nights...
Marriage and Other Matters by Acacia Carter 3rd-5th Years
All Augusta wanted to do was apologise, but the minute she opened her mouth...
Chased by Daylight by iLuna17 3rd-5th Years
In the morning, she knows he'll never be there. This is for Maple, as a...
When You Think of Umbridge by hestiajones 1st-2nd Years
How Umbridge sees herself and wants to be seen - a speculation in prose poem...
Empty Chairs at Empty Tables by The_Real_Hermione 3rd-5th Years
In November 1981, Remus Lupin returns to the headquarters of the Order of the...
CATEGORIES