oohh this is so good!! :O
Now this might sound stupid I suppose since 'Dudders' didnt see the dementor's in Harry's 5th year but is there a possibility that he's magical??
2 reasons -
The door would close after 2 magical people went through the door??
And the chess moved for Dudley..
Now,, also if he is magic he will be able to get through to st.mungos ;)
It'k be a really interesting turn if he turns out to be magic!! And please updare soon now because I love this story,, and also because this is a big cliffhanger for me im just dying to find out what happens next!! =D
Oooh now that was a fantastic chapter,, don't ask why but I really enjoyed reading this 1 =]
“I had to catch up with them,” Dead said exasperatedly.
*sniffle* how heart warming!
Oh dear, it sounds like this next chapter is going to be very exciting!! I am really excited for the next chapter :-)
Correct it was Dean. After finding out that the chess pieces are listening to Dudley, I believe Mrs. L is getting the idea that he may indeed be a wizard. I'd venture to guess because his parents hate magic so vehemently and taught him to do the same it took being exposed to witches and wizards and an idea that it wouldn't be such a bad thing to be one that finally allowed his magic to show up. I can't even begin to imagine what's going to happen at St, Mungo's. But I'm guessing Dean and Dudley are going to be the deciding factors that the good guys win.
loved it!! i'm so happy you finally updated, hopefully you'll be able to do it more often now. i love how dudley has changed so much. keep up the great story
If it turns out Dudders is a Wizard, I'm having a cow. And loving your story!!! ^_^
Hey, just wanted to point out that Mrs L says VOLDEMORT but nothing happens...a small slip for this great story...
Author's Response: don't worry, it's not a slip. ;)
This is so awsome. I absolutely love your story and I was so happy when I saw you updated. Maybe you can do another update before you head back to school? Thanks always for writing!
wow! I love it! I'm certain we're going to find out Dudley is a Wizard, and I anticipate a riotous scene at the hospital.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like it!
I think it's going to be Dudley and dean run in there then an angry guard has ms. Longbottom, hestida, and Dedalus in ropes with a smug look on his face says something like even more huh. I'm getting a HUGE paycheck for this! And before he could fire the curse, Dudley crashes into him with the speed and weight of a football player, causeing the guard to pass out. That's what I think! Thanks
Author's Response: haha We'll see how close you are! Thanks for the review!
Oh, no! A death eater! Whatever shall we do?!
Dudley side-along Apparating!? It's hillarious, though you're threading dangerous OC territory here.
He surely matured, though. I wonder where they are.
Dudley wasn't intentionally Apparating, so I think it's believable. And this is somewhere Jo has taken us in the books before, try thinking of Order of the Phoenix! :)
I'm looking forward to seeing the attack on St Mungo's, but what Dudley thinks he's going to do I've no idea...
I've really enjoyed reading this story, but it is American and it would be easier to enjoy more if you didn't. In Britain, cots are for babies: I think you mean a camp bed for Dudley and Dean. Augusta would probably be addressed as Mrs Longbottom, given her age and because Neville's grandfather is definitely mentioned so chances are she's married. Also, don't use the word candy, apart from for candy floss which is the pink sticky stuff sold at funfairs. Dudley and the Weasleys would say sweets. And while it is possible the wizarding world is different, for Muggles hospitals are paid for by the NHS and most people don't have or need medical insurance.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you're enjoying it. I'm not entirely sure what you're trying to say after that. It would be easier to enjoy more if I didn't what? Be an American? I try to catch whatever I can, but it's not going to be perfect and where I was raised isn't something I can change now.
Oh I think that may be just the ticket to get past the guards. Either by offering it to the guards or taking it to distract them. So Brilliant, really. I do like this story and am glad you finally were able to update here. So depending on what the Order has planned, if Dean and Duds can hook up they'll have a chance to move Nevilles parents. I just hope you don't make us wait so long.
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it! :)
Hurray for the update!! I love this story!! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Great as ever. Is it Neville who apparated in the field? Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks!
So I just came across this story and got to enjoy all 10 chapters at once! It's terrific! I love it! Fast paced and fills in all those "what were they doing then" questions! Can't wait to read some more!!
Author's Response: glad you liked it! the next chapter is in the queue!