Reviews For The Return
Reviewer: 101harrypottergirl
Date: 11/19/09 19:02
Chapter: Chapter 1

three cheers for lupin! that was really good! luv the ending! what is it with that guy and chocolate anyway? good story!

Author's Response: Thanks! It's been ages since I got a review. You might want to check out my other stories--they carry on from here, starting with Nightmare of the Wolf. Lupin and Tonks are the best!

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 08/18/08 23:08
Chapter: Chapter 1

nice last line. haha poor david! he didnt get bitten, right? and that was a very good plot line and fic.

Reviewer: pokethedevil
Date: 02/05/08 4:57
Chapter: Chapter 1

lol! Love that last line!
This story is sweet, in its own way. You've managed to convey you're message of the dangers of Remus's risky life quiet nicely. Even though he was terribly injured and barely alie, he still managed to think of the safetly of others in St. Mungo's. Nothing less would've ben expected of him, taking care of that little boy and all.

Lupin exhaled heavily. Id sooner harm myself.

Very nice. This is so like him. I feel as if this is said not without a thouch of enom, like Ted had said the unthinkable.

Fantastic job!

Author's Response: Thanks! You made my day. There is a sequel to this one, Nightmare of the Wolf, you might find interesting.

Reviewer: shewolf2000
Date: 10/18/07 20:34
Chapter: Chapter 1

Fantastic! You captured the characters so well! I really loved it.

Reviewer: wolverine_rox
Date: 10/07/07 10:43
Chapter: Chapter 1

oh my gosh thats it keep writing you definitly got a gift

Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement. I've got another story in here, called The Sacrifice, if you are interested. I'd love to hear what you think.

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 10/06/07 2:44
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was a great fic. It showed Remus's character very well. Poor Tonks, no wonder she loves him to bits.=Sammy

Reviewer: theawesomeness
Date: 10/05/07 15:45
Chapter: Chapter 1

sweeeeeeetttttt i love how you incorporated bits of book 7 into it, like how tonk's parents call her dora, even though it takes place during 6. and i loved the chocolate reference. it was really good

Reviewer: x_lily_evans_x
Date: 10/05/07 3:15
Chapter: Chapter 1

Loved this. There was so much action going on. And the last line is really just... I don't know, for me it really took the tension out of everything. It made me smile. Thanks for the great read!

Reviewer: KaileeA42
Date: 10/04/07 22:24
Chapter: Chapter 1

I loved it. really interesting and good description of what happened when Lupin was with the werewolves, I always wondered. Also, Remus and chocolate, classic.

Reviewer: KaileeA42
Date: 10/04/07 22:24
Chapter: Chapter 1

I loved it. really interesting and good description of what happened when Lupin was with the werewolves, I always wondered. Also, Remus and chocolate, classic.

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 10/04/07 16:13
Chapter: Chapter 1

*sniff* great story!! poor remus!!

Reviewer: marvelousmeg
Date: 10/04/07 14:28
Chapter: Chapter 1

Good story I especially loved the ending.

Reviewer: rukky
Date: 10/04/07 7:48
Chapter: Chapter 1

brrrrilliant!!!

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 10/03/07 20:16
Chapter: Chapter 1

Great Story!

Reviewer: GeekyGirl1012
Date: 10/03/07 18:19
Chapter: Chapter 1

LOVE the last line...
hee hee

Reviewer: RemusLapin
Date: 10/03/07 17:09
Chapter: Chapter 1

Nice. You should continue! MMmmmm chocolate

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