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Name: Allovimo (Signed) · Date: 10/31/10 17:24 · For: Chapter 1
Very interesting look at this family!

Name: AngieJ (Signed) · Date: 12/03/07 19:21 · For: Chapter 1
That was really good. I dig all your one-shots; they are so well-characterized and insightful. You really should write more of these.

Name: mock_turtle (Signed) · Date: 10/25/07 16:39 · For: Chapter 1
I sense a trend in your stories. they are all about things I would like to write fics on if I had the time or patience to sit down and write. this was an excellent, excellent portrayal of petunia. it felt so real! I've always found the dursleys fascinating--and I love reading fanfiction about them--and the bits about lily and petunia in the 7th book were some of my favorites. I love what you wrote.

Name: lilyevans91 (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 15:39 · For: Chapter 1
oh wow. this was really good! i loved petunia's character, it's so realistic, and the way they both treat harry is sad and very like the book. great job, i really liked this!

Name: GlynnisI (Signed) · Date: 10/07/07 12:56 · For: Chapter 1
You made me cry! I have small children, so this is a part of the story that I can barely stand to consider... the neglect that Harry suffered growing up with the Dursleys. You really brought the Dursleys to life in this piece. Very well done!

Name: cjbaggins (Signed) · Date: 10/07/07 10:04 · For: Chapter 1
Very good story. Great lead-up to all the abuse and neglect we know Harry suffered at their hands. I especially enjoyed how you put in the bit about the toast that Dudley stole - setting up their relationship and Vernon and Petunia's reaction to it right from the beginning. Well done!

Name: JustLikeHermione77 (Signed) · Date: 10/06/07 18:35 · For: Chapter 1
awww.. pooor harry!!! good story!!

Name: Her My Own EE (Signed) · Date: 10/06/07 11:08 · For: Chapter 1
Well, I still think the Dursley's are HORRIBLE. But, I did like the insight into Petunia. I honestly couldn't understand how a doting mother could neglect a child like that. This helped.

Name: White Unicorn (Signed) · Date: 10/06/07 0:45 · For: Chapter 1
Poor Harry! I just wanted to give him a hug myself after reading this. This was excellent and so well written. Very believable too, in terms of canon. I could almost believe JKR herself wrote this. Well done!

Name: Hermione Clone (Signed) · Date: 10/05/07 20:59 · For: Chapter 1
Until the last line, I was starting to feel bad for the Dursleys. Still, poor Harry.
This was my favorite line:
"But Dudley is special,” Vernon pointed out, frowning. “Listen — he’s figured out how to turn the television on all by himself already. No-one can say that boy isn’t bright."
Great job!

Name: bluemoon13 (Signed) · Date: 10/05/07 19:49 · For: Chapter 1
Nice job...that was interesting doing it from Petunia's point of view...You protreyed the feelings well. Poor Harry.

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