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Name: hermy_loves_ron (Signed) · Date: 01/29/08 0:00 · For: A Veritable Hotbed Of Sordid Activity
My goodness. Lucius trying to instate a cliche! Of course, one is already going on with Head Boy Malfoy and Head Girl Granger, but oh well. Still very funny.

Name: hermy_loves_ron (Signed) · Date: 01/28/08 23:49 · For: Problems In Potions
It's very funny and a bit surprising how amusing Pansy finds this all. I liked your little bit of mocking Harry taking Potions 6th year (new teacher with lower standards!). Just wondering, why is there no AU or DH Disregarded warning? I'll much enjoy seeing Draco's progress with Miss Muggleborn. Snape is hilarious, and so, of course, is Draco.

Name: hermy_loves_ron (Signed) · Date: 01/28/08 23:33 · For: Damsel In Distress
Great how you can make something funny without randomness or cliches or adult humor. I find it a bit surprising that Draco is all about sweeping Hermione off her feet now, instead of searching fruitlessly for a different bride. Sarcasm is wonderful, and I love it. I am a little confused at when this all takes place, but I suppose it doesn't really matter. I love the tone and voice and realisticness of it, but with melodramatic!delicate!Harry also thrown in some silliness. The whole thing is very tongue-in-cheek.

Name: hermy_loves_ron (Signed) · Date: 01/28/08 23:21 · For: Mudblood Studies
Lovely with the quick wit, fast dialogue and great humorous vocabulary.

Name: hermy_loves_ron (Signed) · Date: 01/28/08 23:12 · For: A Reluctant Conversation
I love the subtle humor! Although I don't see how Hufflepuffs are all inbreeds of Sirius Black (not likely) and I could name Hannah Abbott as a blonde. But whatever. On to chapter 2!

Name: MissyQuill (Signed) · Date: 01/24/08 11:24 · For: A Veritable Hotbed Of Sordid Activity
Finally, an update!

I must say I've was looking for this story to be updated and now am one happy reader.

I loved your portrayal of Lucius as always, you make the Malfoys rock.

Please update soon. I'll be waiting with bated breath.=Sammy

Name: dracoslamis (Signed) · Date: 01/23/08 11:24 · For: A Veritable Hotbed Of Sordid Activity

LOVE it!

its hilarious and yet so true at the same time =D

more please!!!


Name: SasszSara (Signed) · Date: 01/22/08 23:59 · For: A Veritable Hotbed Of Sordid Activity
I love Dumbledore's deflections!
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Name: CowGirlHPFan (Signed) · Date: 01/22/08 22:51 · For: A Veritable Hotbed Of Sordid Activity
Wow....that was so funny!!! "Some kind of lecture"? This should be good jk lol
Great story:)

Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 01/22/08 21:31 · For: A Veritable Hotbed Of Sordid Activity
Uhoh Looks like Lucius' plan did not play out the way he had hoped! Terrific chapter ;-)

Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 01/22/08 21:26 · For: Problems In Potions
Awesome chapter, though getting these two together may take a miracle!

Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 01/22/08 21:21 · For: Damsel In Distress
Impressive dialogue between Draco and the Trio! Loved this chapter

Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 01/22/08 21:18 · For: Mudblood Studies
Amazing chapter! You have done a fantastic job keeping Draco in character :-)

Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 01/22/08 21:12 · For: A Reluctant Conversation
I really do not think Pansy will take too kindly to that news! Nicely written chapter also =)

Name: tha_looney_one (Signed) · Date: 01/22/08 20:26 · For: A Veritable Hotbed Of Sordid Activity
Hogwarts is getting s-e-x ed, thanks the Lucius Malfoy, aren't they?

I like how you avoided the cliche of Head's Dorms with no explanation. That was a wise move.

And lol about the *hem* examples Lucius was giving Dumbledore, and how Dumbledore just brushed him off... lol.

I also like thought process in the beginning about the Floo. It's true, though, Voldemort could have had Hogwarts if he used it, but it would /not/ make a great, glorifying history book... lol, again.

Good Job!

Name: pheonixfairy91 (Signed) · Date: 12/24/07 0:01 · For: Problems In Potions
This story is AWESOME!!! It's hilarious and completely realistic to think that, with all the pureblood mania in the books, they would have issues with this kind of thing. I love it!

Name: dracoslamis (Signed) · Date: 12/16/07 10:59 · For: Problems In Potions

pleases, with whipped cream and chocolate sprinkles on top =]

xxxxxxxxxxxxxx love it

Name: dracoslamis (Signed) · Date: 12/16/07 10:50 · For: Damsel In Distress

i physically fell off my chair laughing. oww, my bum hurts now.

=] woooop! cant wait for chap 5!!!!!!


Name: white_doe (Signed) · Date: 11/11/07 11:36 · For: Problems In Potions
This is a good fic, but so far the plot feels a little underdeveloped. I like the way that the humor is not obvious or absurd. Keep writing, I would like to read the rest!

Name: Bookwormy (Signed) · Date: 11/04/07 5:35 · For: Problems In Potions
V. funny && interesting! Next chapter sounds fun. Please try to update soon!

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