Reviews For Inbred
Reviewer: mm5203
Date: 01/12/09 21:38
Chapter: Nettus Narrosium

haha. i wish there was more for me to read.

Reviewer: Pinkcess of the Abyss
Date: 05/28/08 13:29
Chapter: Nettus Narrosium

This is one of the better parodys I have read in a long while. You have effortless mocked most fanfictions, (I'm sure there are more to come), without it seeming idiotic. I espeically loved Blaise.

Can't wait for more. take care xx Chicklepea

Reviewer: Anouk Lisole
Date: 04/12/08 12:38
Chapter: Nettus Narrosium

Bloody brilliant. You have outdone yourself! That internet slang curse was hysterical! And I enjoyed Blaise's changing nature. Can't wait for the next installment.

Reviewer: Ba_chan
Date: 04/01/08 11:31
Chapter: Nettus Narrosium

Well! I've never seen any curse as hilarious as this one, symbolspeech and all xD before - I like how you've managed to keep the characters very IC while making fun of them ;D I just wondered wether the he-Blaise and the she-Blaise were the same person? Sometimes it seems that there must be two of them. Perhaps I just don't get the joke ^^_ Or Blaise Zabini is a Metamorfmagus!

Reviewer: shelby_shakespeare
Date: 03/19/08 1:08
Chapter: Nettus Narrosium


Wow, I love this!
A suicidal Harry, not an altogether far-fetched notion, but extremely hilarious. I love the plays on the Boy Who Lived

Reviewer: LunaWorshiper
Date: 02/24/08 20:39
Chapter: A Reluctant Conversation

I really like it so far. You are a good writter, and I find some parts of this story very humorous, I love the last line about him telling Pansy.

Reviewer: Arwynn
Date: 02/24/08 20:18
Chapter: Nettus Narrosium

This is so delightfully deliciously devious!! The fact that you have a Draco/Hermione fic and you've still kept them in canon (aka they haven't passionately made love by chapter 4) is great!

Yep, this one's definately a keeper. *adds to Favorites*

Keep 'em comin'!

Reviewer: apoorva_ag
Date: 02/23/08 3:06
Chapter: Damsel In Distress


Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 02/21/08 9:40
Chapter: Nettus Narrosium


Another amazing chapter. You have really outdone yourself this time. Most stories lose their charm after a few chapters (or at least they do for me) but you’ve kept me completely hooked with your lovely solemn narration of a plot so hilarious, it makes you ROTFLYAO!

I really love how you take perfectly serious things and turn them funny. For instance, there is nothing funny whatsoever about Draco’s predicament yet the way you narrate it makes it so. Your characterization and plot twists are brilliant.

But most of all, I like the setting that you work with. Hogwarts is a place full of all types of people and therefore chaos always ensues, whether appreciated or not. And in this hilarious setting we see poor Draco trying to win Hermione over. Priceless!

In this particular chapter, I really enjoyed how you should Gryffindor tower through a Slytherin’s eye, making it all the more amusing to the reader. The tower seems like a hellhole to poor Draco and the fact that he is less then welcome to it adds all the more mirth.

And putting in all those (bad) clichés was a masterful stroke. Its reallt no wonder I drop everything I’m doing and rush over when I get an e mail saying the this story has been updated.

Keep up the good work. You make me laugh out loud at some of the most crummiest times of the day. *huggles*=Sammy

Reviewer: FinalCow
Date: 02/20/08 15:19
Chapter: Nettus Narrosium

oh, god, i LOVE the blaise thing. It's so sad, but so true. Anyways, this chapter was hilarious as always, and i hope you update again soon!

Reviewer: fuzz_nose
Date: 02/20/08 13:25
Chapter: Nettus Narrosium


Yeah, um, I don't like people who talk like that either. But it's true, I really do love this story! The curse was far more original than any other one that I've seen before and the end of the chapter was very exciting!
The only thing that kind of bugged me about this chapter is how you keep switiching Blaise from a female to male! Perhaps you should go back and keep Blaise strictly one gender...? Blaise Zabini is a guy, but many stories have Femme!Blaise so either is fine.

Please update soon! Your story is so....scrumtious!

Reviewer: fuzz_nose
Date: 02/20/08 13:08
Chapter: A Veritable Hotbed Of Sordid Activity

Another brilliant chapter.

I think that in the real HP world, Dumbledore would not have agreed to let Draco and Hermione share a room, and fanfiction often lets Dumlbedore lose sight of his values and let people share rooms. Thank you for not falling for that cheap trick!
And if Lucius went to see Albus to discuss such a matter, I think that the conversation would've gone almost word-for-word as you wrote it.

Reviewer: fuzz_nose
Date: 02/20/08 13:01
Chapter: Problems In Potions

This story is probably one of the best ones in all of HPFF!

Reviewer: CowGirlHPFan
Date: 02/19/08 18:28
Chapter: Nettus Narrosium

OMG!!! This was so funny!! lol rofl!!!
Awesome job:) Yayyyy my IQ is still intact!!! Yay!! :) jk lol

Reviewer: moonstonesilver
Date: 02/19/08 10:14
Chapter: Nettus Narrosium

I agree with stargirl42, Blaise seems to be switiching from a girl to a boy. sorta confusing.

Reviewer: moonstonesilver
Date: 02/19/08 10:09
Chapter: Nettus Narrosium

:rolls uncontrollably:
*laughs till tears run down her face*
omgomg i was laughing like a maniac through the whole thing!!! merlin, my sister looked alarmed when she saw me crying with laughter. her expression of fear also added to tthe interesting draco's pov and everything!!!!
not to mention smodding!!!!!! lololololollol keep writing, Sirenny, this is GREAT!!!! if you can, you should submit this for Best Humor Fic - this chapter really tops everything offff!!!!! well, one thing's for sure - i'll be checking every nanosecond to see if you updated!!! also, the serious side of the story is also pretty good.
*laughs hysterically at the thought of Lucius sitting in a pink 'plush' armchair*,

Reviewer: NorthernPhoenix
Date: 02/19/08 2:30
Chapter: Nettus Narrosium

Oh my gosh... too funny. Can't wait until the next chapter!!!!!

Reviewer: shooting_star42
Date: 02/18/08 21:38
Chapter: Nettus Narrosium

That was ABSOLUTELY HILARIOUS! I can't wait for the next chapter!

However...I am slightly confused about one thing: Blaise seemed to be switching genders...

Reviewer: primagirl89
Date: 02/18/08 19:39
Chapter: Nettus Narrosium

I don't know if I am crazy or something, but this was posted before, right? I know I have read it before. hmm

either way, it is GREAT!! so funny

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 02/18/08 19:05
Chapter: Nettus Narrosium

Interesting chapter that for sure! ;-)

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