Reviewer: Nevilles Girl
Date: 11/04/07 12:56
Chapter: Of Hair Products, Violent Trees, and Turquoise-Colored Robes

That's Lockhart all right! You've captured him brilliantly! I really like the way you ended it. It seems like something Jo would do if she wrote this story. The way you had his room decorated is so perfectly Lockhart, it is kind of strange.

Smiles,
Luna

Reviewer: Crows
Date: 09/30/07 13:53
Chapter: Of Hair Products, Violent Trees, and Turquoise-Colored Robes

Hah, mildly funny. Writing style: A+

Reviewer: Phia Phoenix
Date: 09/30/07 6:46
Chapter: Of Hair Products, Violent Trees, and Turquoise-Colored Robes

Tehehe. Now this was hilarious.

Yes. I loved it.

Your characterisation of dear Gilderoy was simply perfect! I don't think Jo herself could have done better. Just... the way he spoke, the way he struck poses, the self-assured yet stupid things he did, oh, I can't compliment it all, there's too much, and for once I have nothing to criticise. It was all perfect.

I also loved the bit about Snape's hair being shiny. Now THAT was funny. Not to mention the insinuation that Snape had ever heard of any type of hair care.

Yeah. Characterisation of Gilderoy, Snape, McGonagall, Sprout, Oliver Wood, all tick, tick, tick, tick, tick!

If this doesn't win I'll be shocked.

Let's see if you can pick up the quote (I'm sure you can)- How come you're not in Ravenclaw?

And that wasn't in any way a slight against Hufflepuff. I just wish that the points you'll earn for winning this were going to my dear House.

Phia

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :D I really appreciate it. I had a lot of fun writing this one, but there's tons of talent on here...winning would be a surprise to me indeed! Actually, I think of myself as a Ravenpuff. ^^ But you 'Claws have a lot of entries in the Autumn Challenge; you'll be raking up tons of points that way. *hopes that more Puffs will participate*

Reviewer: Phoenix13
Date: 09/29/07 15:56
Chapter: Of Hair Products, Violent Trees, and Turquoise-Colored Robes

Ha! What a laugh! Gilderoy is so...well, he's actually rather stupid. And hilariously so! Thanks for the fun story!

Reviewer: Colli
Date: 09/29/07 15:28
Chapter: Of Hair Products, Violent Trees, and Turquoise-Colored Robes

Nice story i really enjoyed it!
It was really funny!
Colli

Reviewer: 001anonymous
Date: 09/29/07 7:38
Chapter: Of Hair Products, Violent Trees, and Turquoise-Colored Robes

Wow, that's definitely the Lockhart in canon. I like the way you wrote about him! Especially the way the teachers reacted when he entered the Great Hall! haha, I can just imagine McGonagall doing that! Splendid work!

Reviewer: dancingwithneville
Date: 09/28/07 22:58
Chapter: Of Hair Products, Violent Trees, and Turquoise-Colored Robes

Oh my! It was really good! You described Gilderoy Lockhart perfectly. I especially liked it when he told Oliver “Well, Mr. Wood, I’m expecting you to know all the colors of my robes by next class."

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