Reviewer: captburke
Date: 07/31/09 21:31
Chapter: When Worlds Collide

Perfect.

Reviewer: Pendraegona
Date: 12/09/08 19:10
Chapter: When Worlds Collide

It's the little things that are most annoying, and Remus and Tonks were real people in this with quirks and bothersome habits that made them all the more beautiful. My Dad's office looks just like your description of Remus' office, too.

You fit the prompts well, and the repartee was excellent. Kudos for the cellar scene as well, seeing as that was particularly well done. It was sweet, and just what I was in the mood for, so I thank you for that.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 05/17/08 9:32
Chapter: When Worlds Collide

Wonderful. I have always loved this pairing. You are a very strong, visual writer. Your stories are superb.

Reviewer: weasleytwinsfans
Date: 02/09/08 10:20
Chapter: When Worlds Collide

that's a really cute story. very well done, considering the prompts you used.

Reviewer: r_j_lupingirl
Date: 12/08/07 20:40
Chapter: When Worlds Collide

Very nice, this is the second story of yours I've read. Do you specialize in Remus/Tonks fics?

Reviewer: r_j_lupingirl
Date: 12/08/07 20:39
Chapter: When Worlds Collide

Very nice, this is the second story of yours I've read. Do you specialize in Remus/Tonks fics?

Reviewer: tonkzie
Date: 10/25/07 6:51
Chapter: When Worlds Collide

wow brill tonkzie ;)*

Reviewer: DontCallMeNymphadora
Date: 10/13/07 12:35
Chapter: When Worlds Collide

Love it. I also loved how it was Remus' old house, and how Tonks got to see more into Remus' past. So sweet.

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 09/26/07 19:20
Chapter: When Worlds Collide

Great Story!

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 09/24/07 16:28
Chapter: When Worlds Collide

Aah, that was so cute!

And he had completely failed to anticipate that his father would actually develop a wide enough streak of sentimentality to keep everything from his first toy broomstick to what appeared to be very ancient slices of his birthday cakes stored away in Winter Hollow’s loft space.

How in the world did they manage to preserve birthday cake? Utterly amazing.

"Felisha Hathaway?”

“We hadn’t even reached blushing terms then, let alone managed an exchange of birthday gifts.”


Now that got me laughing. That's a very clever line.

“Sirius bought me that kit because he said if I was going to lurk around being an incognito dark creature, the least I could do was grow some warts to look the part. He reckoned I was far too harmless looking and I should be ashamed of myself. “

Sirius is definitely someone to say something like that. And, by the way, you had an extra space between 'myself' and the end quote.

That entire conversation in the cellar spoke the loudest to me. That was such a serious part of their lives, and you wrote it beautifully.

“She didn’t suspect an ulterior motive?”
Ginny gave her a long, slow look. “Of course she did. So I let her overhear me telling Dad that I needed to talk to you about boys.”


Teehee, too cute! I can just imagine Arthur's horror when he heard his daughter needed help with boys. :D

Well. Lying next to him was a bit deceptive. Lying diagonally across the bed so as to leave him with no more than a few inches along the right hand side was probably a little more accurate. For a brief instant, he considered prodding the Tonksian caterpillar that had taken control of his place of repose, but he knew within his heart that the result would be no different to any other night. He would receive one entirely sleepy and subconscious Glare of Death and then a further few inches of bed would be annexed for his trouble. That was the way it worked.

This entire paragraph was hilarious! Tonksian caterpillar, Glare of Death... will the jokes ever end? :D

Well, great job! You really know how to send a person on a journey. Keep up the good work. Best wishes! :D

Reviewer: ForeverTonks
Date: 09/24/07 12:01
Chapter: When Worlds Collide

All the guys before me are right: Keep on writing. You're story is so cute and funny, please ... at least a few scences. Please

Reviewer: RemusLapin
Date: 09/23/07 7:55
Chapter: When Worlds Collide

I like Tonks views on pairing socks:P

Reviewer: RemusLapin
Date: 09/23/07 7:54
Chapter: When Worlds Collide

I like Tonks views on pairing socks:P

Reviewer: BehindHarrysEyes
Date: 09/22/07 18:47
Chapter: When Worlds Collide

haha. i liked it =]

Reviewer: BehindHarrysEyes
Date: 09/22/07 18:47
Chapter: When Worlds Collide

haha. i liked it =]

Reviewer: BehindHarrysEyes
Date: 09/22/07 18:47
Chapter: When Worlds Collide

haha. i liked it =]

Reviewer: BehindHarrysEyes
Date: 09/22/07 18:47
Chapter: When Worlds Collide

haha. i liked it =]

Reviewer: BehindHarrysEyes
Date: 09/22/07 18:47
Chapter: When Worlds Collide

haha. i liked it =]

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 09/22/07 17:59
Chapter: When Worlds Collide

LOL That was such a cute few moments! Thanks for sharing them with us! Cyns

Reviewer: real_life
Date: 09/22/07 15:33
Chapter: When Worlds Collide

Sweet.

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