Reviewer: MadamPince
Date: 07/13/09 0:06
Chapter: Would Have Done Well In Slytherin?

I really like that story.
I kept smiling when I thought about how nice little Scorpy (haha) was, compared to his complete git of a father!
But I have to admit that I didn't like it went Rosie went to Ravenclaw! I really wanted her to be "where dwell the brave at heart."
Yes, I know I'm corny ;)

Author's Response: But she left Albus Severus even though she thought something would go wrong. Which is probably the clever thing to do but not the most loyal. But you could debate her being 'brave of heart' either way. Was she brave for leaving and going off on her own or would it have been more brave to go against something her parents told her not to do? Although when I put it like that that sounds more like a Slytherin characteristic... maybe I put Albus Severus in the wrong house... The Sorting Hat's job really is difficult. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: FounderDisagreement
Date: 05/20/08 9:47
Chapter: Would Have Done Well In Slytherin?

Ah. I found this really really good. I was kinda sad when Scorpius wasn't sorted into Hufflepuff. XD Just kidding. A wonderful story. (I'm a big fan of "Next Generation" stories...)

Author's Response: Well obviously Hufflepuff would have been my next choice...rnThank you for reading and I am glad you liked it.rnemma x

Reviewer: marauderteddylupin
Date: 04/27/08 12:02
Chapter: Would Have Done Well In Slytherin?

i think it is very nice that you made them both gryffindors, and friends. keep writing good fanfiction ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Author's Response: Thank you very much. emma x

Reviewer: Danielle_Malfoy
Date: 03/28/08 11:05
Chapter: Would Have Done Well In Slytherin?

I love this . It was great and I loved that Rose was in Ravenclaw..
I thought this story was great, It's a shame I cant read your Ginny story about her having an eating disorder.

I really wanted to read it...:(


This one was great thought.

:)

Author's Response: Thank you very much.rnI don't really know what's going on with the other story. I can read it fine.rnemma x

Reviewer: PheonixFlamesForever
Date: 01/13/08 10:03
Chapter: Would Have Done Well In Slytherin?

Ahh, I really like this! I know a lot of people just go for the Rose/Scorpious shipping but the idea of a friendship between Scorp (haha) and Al is original - at least to me anyway!

It was a very enjoyable read!
-Elle

Author's Response: Thank you very much.

Reviewer: cjbaggins
Date: 12/18/07 21:02
Chapter: Would Have Done Well In Slytherin?

*humming happily at the computer* hmm, hmm, hmm, lalala, I've got 2 replies. Thanks Emma! Now I don't feel so left out ;).
I'm sorry if my big words frightened you, I have that effect on people!
By the way - I love how Rose 'bounded happily towards the cheering Ravenclaws'. Well said.
{hugs}
cj

Author's Response: I think that someone who obviously has hair like Hermione's needs to walk with a skip in their step so that their hair bounces joyfully behind them. Don't you agree??

Reviewer: cjbaggins
Date: 12/15/07 21:04
Chapter: Would Have Done Well In Slytherin?

I'm feeling so left out. All those other reviews got a response... I'm gonna go pout now...

Seriously, I still enjoy this story. Well done.

Author's Response: Oh I'm sorry. I'll reply now. I'm sure it's fascinating!! Thanks for liking my story. emma x x

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 12/13/07 18:11
Chapter: Would Have Done Well In Slytherin?

aw albus is so cute but i think rose would've been more kind towards scorpius
i loved the fact that scorpius was put in gryiffindor

*cheers*

~lola~

Author's Response: Rose wasn't mean to Scorpius, she was just a bit sceptical of him and of how Albus would react to him. She didn't want to get into trouble.

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 12/12/07 9:58
Chapter: Would Have Done Well In Slytherin?

I always liked the fact that the Sorting Hat took Harry’s wants into consideration. Knowing you would do well in another House and actually doing well in that House is a different matter.
The Hat sees a bit of each House in every person. Or at least it should, so when it lets them choose, it’s usually because of a really slim margin between two characteristics.
I was happy to see Albus wanting to be friends with Scorpius, and that he told him what Harry had said. I am quite sure Scorpius would have been in Slytherin without that bit of knowledge.
You have brought the fear and humor of the kids to life in this story. I like that Rose was leery of getting too friendly with Scorpius, and that Albus told her they didn’t have to be best friends just because they were cousins and going to school together.
Having Rose put in Ravenclaw was a nice touch. Hopefully people will start varying the Houses they put the Next Generation kids.
Excellent work, and I hope you will visit the ‘kids’ again in the future.
Happy Holidays from "The Order of Ravenclaw House Elves."


Author's Response: Thank you very very much. I did like Albus and Scorpius so writing more to their story isn't out of the question. It depends on if inspiration stikes again. Merry Christmas!! emma x x x

Reviewer: halfbloodseeker
Date: 12/05/07 20:47
Chapter: Would Have Done Well In Slytherin?

Wow, i really loved how you incorporated Harry's own experiences into the story, and it was so well written and played out

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. emma x x

Reviewer: Harry_is_our_king
Date: 10/30/07 17:09
Chapter: Would Have Done Well In Slytherin?

I love this story! I've read some of your others stories as well, and although the storylines weren't my favorite, I think they are very well written as well. This one is really, really good (meaning that I like the storyline, and combined with your writing talent, this story is unbelievebly good). You are the best writer I found on mugglenet so far.
Wow, I'm really giving a lot of compliments. I've never done that before to anyone.
Great!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Oh, wow. I'm all a fluster. That's so nice. It's so important to me that my writing is appreciated but to be considered the best you've found is absolutely incredible. You've made me feel so happy. I'm glad you like the storyline, I should probably start writing more happy things. Thank you so so much for your review. It has actually made my day. emma x x x

Reviewer: chicago_grl
Date: 10/25/07 20:39
Chapter: Would Have Done Well In Slytherin?

really good

Reviewer: The_Quibbler
Date: 10/07/07 12:28
Chapter: Would Have Done Well In Slytherin?

wonderful

Author's Response: why, thank you.

Reviewer: cjbaggins
Date: 10/05/07 22:54
Chapter: Would Have Done Well In Slytherin?

Very interesting look at the 'next generation'. I thought it was brilliant how you brought in bits of the trio's characterisation within the interaction of the cousins on the train, as well as in the conversation between Albus and Scorpius. Well done.

Author's Response: I remember reading this. Too many big words and it scared me. Albus is obviously very like Harry, and Rose very like Hermione. But you don't end up exactly like your parents, I don't think Harry would have gone in to talk to Scorpius, and Hermione would have stayed. And I had fun writing Scorpius' part because I got to create a very different character, and I wanted to redeem Draco a little bit because I liked him. Sorry again for not replying, I do try to reply to everything. thank you very much. emma x x

Reviewer: I_LOVE_DRACO_287
Date: 10/05/07 19:14
Chapter: Would Have Done Well In Slytherin?

Oo...juicy! Can I have some more to read?

Author's Response: I am actually considering writing some more, because I like these characters, but it probably won't be for a while. I;ve got exams in January and coursework to do ect ect.

Reviewer: lunafredtonks123
Date: 09/29/07 21:21
Chapter: Would Have Done Well In Slytherin?

I loved that! I think it was neat how you made Albus and Scorpius become friends. I really enjoyed it!!!!!!!!! :D

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 09/29/07 18:03
Chapter: Would Have Done Well In Slytherin?

good chapter!! is this a oneshot??

Author's Response: I'm afraid so.

Reviewer: Phoenix13
Date: 09/29/07 15:47
Chapter: Would Have Done Well In Slytherin?

Very good story--and very believable! It would be so cool if Scorpius actually were in Gryffindor!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. And what's to say he wouldn't be in Gryffindor?

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 09/28/07 21:21
Chapter: Would Have Done Well In Slytherin?

I always though that Draco's son would be placed in Gryffindor but I also wondered how Draco would handle something like that! lol A great one shot.

Author's Response: I think Draco would be glad in the sence that his son wouldn't have to face pejudices for being in Slytherin. Even if it wasn't shown so much in the books I always felt that draco was quite compassionate, and it was this that made hime how he was because he was desperate to please his parents. (as I wrote.) Although I like Draco, so this is a slightly bias opinion.
thanks for reading and reviewing.
emma x x x

Reviewer: The_Mystic
Date: 09/28/07 16:08
Chapter: Would Have Done Well In Slytherin?

Ah! You've been accepted! *Hugs* I loved Beta'ing this, as another person's take on Albus and Scorpius is always interesting to see.

And I must say, I did really love the way it was Albus that was *truly* the Gryffindor and his family easily could have been fit for a different house. We saw many Slytherin traits in James (the elder) and his pranks.

Anyway, congradulations.

Author's Response: Squee. I was so happy to get this validated because I was really proud of this story and how it turned out, and was annoyed that those silly mods didn't seem to agree. Thanks again for all your help and your wonderful beta-ing skills. woop, what fun!!
emma x x x

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