Oh, it gives me shivers! I love it.
Oh my gosh that made me cry.That was really good!!!
Author's Response: Really? I didn't think it was that angsty... Thanks though!
Quite interesting, I suppose, but not exactly what I expected. I knew it was goig to be Ginny and Harry, of course, but usually when I read those (and it is from Ginny's POV), it's CAPSLOCK!Angst. This was what I think is referred to as Whangst. Whiny angst.
Yes, I did find it a bit whiny. Incoherently whiny. All the "oh, I'm going to die, oh, he's going to die" did drag on my nerves some.
The end was nice, though. I like how Ginny- or you, as the author- interpreted "Ginny" as the word that meant the war was over.
Author's Response: Ohh, lol. I'm sorry, I've never been told that, but okay.. Lol, I can see what you mean though, how that could be annoying, but she was very worried, but yeah, I see where your coming from. Hehe, lol, my name's Ginny! :p Sorry, I just found that funny how you said 'Ginny- or you, as the author' cuz my name's Ginny and I'm the author.. Lol, sorry. Thanks for the review!
provides a break from the usual style of writing... i loved how Ginny questions herself abt Harry's safety...
Author's Response: Yeah, I wanted Ginny to be unsure and all that. Thank you though!
Yeah I'm first! That was excellent, I could really identify with Ginny from you excellent description of her feelings.
Author's Response: Haha, yep! Thank you! I'm glas that you could sorta see where she was coming from!