Reviews For A Day at the Spa
Reviewer: FullofLife
Date: 09/27/07 6:49
Chapter: A Day at the Spa

Ha! The ending with the trio was the best part - that was a really great story, really funny. I think she should have washed his hair nine times though. And "jet black and uncontronablly untidy"? Lol, why would he want to look like Harry? :p Yay for you! Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you! I thought that he would appalled to have the same tyoe of hair as Harry and James so I put that in.

Author's Response: *type. (Man, I wish we could edit reviews/respones!)

Author's Response: *responses. (heh,heh)

Reviewer: Cirelondiel
Date: 09/27/07 4:44
Chapter: A Day at the Spa

*Reads I_LUV_MOONY's review... dreadlocks would be Lee Jordan, no?

I loved the twist... the trio tricking Snape into having a makeover, great idea! The originality of this fic is great. The last part is absolutely hilarious. Great work!

~ Cirelondiel

Author's Response: Thank you. Originally the last part wasn't going to be in it but my beta (LOVE YOU, SCHMERGO!) suggested it so I put it in. I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 09/26/07 22:55
Chapter: A Day at the Spa

That was a very good fic. It was not the roll-on-the-floor kind but a quietely-chuckle-to-yourself-as-you-imagine-poor-Snape-going-through-it-all kind. At least to me.

Great job. I look forwards to reading more from you.=Sammy

Author's Response: Thank you so much. It's my first fan fiction and I am fully aware it is not Schmerg_The_Impaler humour material, but you got to start somewhere.

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 09/26/07 21:44
Chapter: A Day at the Spa

*laughing* That was brilliant.

To start off, I will say that the idea is awesome! I can't imagine Snape at the spa, but now I have a nice mental image to prove myself wrong.

“A style. There is blonde and slicked back; brown and bushy; dreadlocks; long, flaming red, and pulled back in a ponytail; and there is also bald, but that went out of fashion when certain Dark Overlord made it his look. But for you, I think I would go with jet black and uncontrollably untidy. What do you think?”

Now this was too funny, but I'm wondering who the dreadlocks belong to. I couldn't think of anyone.

Okay, so a great story from you. You should definitely write more humor. Best wishes! :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I believe it was one of Fred and George's friends who had dreadlocks. But I can't think of the name right now.

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