Reviews For A Day at the Spa
Reviewer: FullofLife
Date: 09/27/07 6:49
Chapter: A Day at the Spa

Ha! The ending with the trio was the best part - that was a really great story, really funny. I think she should have washed his hair nine times though. And "jet black and uncontronablly untidy"? Lol, why would he want to look like Harry? :p Yay for you! Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you! I thought that he would appalled to have the same tyoe of hair as Harry and James so I put that in.

Author's Response: *type. (Man, I wish we could edit reviews/respones!)

Author's Response: *responses. (heh,heh)

Reviewer: Cirelondiel
Date: 09/27/07 4:44
Chapter: A Day at the Spa

*Reads I_LUV_MOONY's review... dreadlocks would be Lee Jordan, no?

I loved the twist... the trio tricking Snape into having a makeover, great idea! The originality of this fic is great. The last part is absolutely hilarious. Great work!

~ Cirelondiel

Author's Response: Thank you. Originally the last part wasn't going to be in it but my beta (LOVE YOU, SCHMERGO!) suggested it so I put it in. I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 09/26/07 22:55
Chapter: A Day at the Spa

That was a very good fic. It was not the roll-on-the-floor kind but a quietely-chuckle-to-yourself-as-you-imagine-poor-Snape-going-through-it-all kind. At least to me.

Great job. I look forwards to reading more from you.=Sammy

Author's Response: Thank you so much. It's my first fan fiction and I am fully aware it is not Schmerg_The_Impaler humour material, but you got to start somewhere.

Reviewer: I_LUV_MOONY
Date: 09/26/07 21:44
Chapter: A Day at the Spa

*laughing* That was brilliant.

To start off, I will say that the idea is awesome! I can't imagine Snape at the spa, but now I have a nice mental image to prove myself wrong.

A style. There is blonde and slicked back; brown and bushy; dreadlocks; long, flaming red, and pulled back in a ponytail; and there is also bald, but that went out of fashion when certain Dark Overlord made it his look. But for you, I think I would go with jet black and uncontrollably untidy. What do you think?

Now this was too funny, but I'm wondering who the dreadlocks belong to. I couldn't think of anyone.

Okay, so a great story from you. You should definitely write more humor. Best wishes! :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I believe it was one of Fred and George's friends who had dreadlocks. But I can't think of the name right now.

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
Chocolate Frog by L A Moody 3rd-5th Years
Amid the desolation of Diagon Alley, a tiny ray of hope lay buried. Nothing...
I Suspect Nargles by foolondahill17 3rd-5th Years
“No one’s ever kissed me before…. What is one to do now?” An extensive...
The Life and Times of Linnea Potter by Cantatrix 1st-2nd Years
Linnea Potter has lived under the tyranny of her relatives for the better part...
FEATURED
Come Home by WrenWinterSong 1st-2nd Years
Three year old Teddy Lupin ponders the photographs on the living room side table.
But You Haven't Lost Me Yet by Dawnie 6th-7th Years
The war with Voldemort comes and goes, and James and Lily find themselves struggling...
broken brights by Padfoot11333 1st-2nd Years
Harry's breath catches when he thinks of Ginny. I am not JK Rowling and...
CATEGORIES