Reviews For A Day at the Spa
Reviewer: fanofFred
Date: 11/04/07 0:03
Chapter: A Day at the Spa

hee-hee-hee :) That was funny. I liked the end.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! It seems a lot of people like the ending.

Reviewer: snapefan2007
Date: 11/03/07 21:41
Chapter: A Day at the Spa

HA HA HA!!! that was great. i love snape but i think he really does need a hair wash!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review!

Reviewer: Afifa
Date: 11/03/07 7:19
Chapter: A Day at the Spa

that was totally HILARIOUS!
loved the ending especially. Snape and good looks don't sound good together, yeah?

Author's Response: Yeah. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: FlyingPheonix
Date: 10/28/07 13:07
Chapter: A Day at the Spa

Thats good


Author's Response: Thanks!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: SlytherinSaint
Date: 10/28/07 7:16
Chapter: A Day at the Spa

That's great, very funny- best bits were...“First, we are going to wash your hair . . . twice,” AND -“Now, what kind of a style do you want?” Deena asked.

“A what?” Snape asked uneasily.

Laughed so much. :D

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I remember writing the first part. "No. I don't think washing it once will really do the job." I must say, the "Ways to bother Severus Snape" list on MuggleNet was a bit of an inspiration.

Reviewer: Hermione Lurves Ron
Date: 10/27/07 17:41
Chapter: A Day at the Spa

HAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAAAHAAAAHAHAHAHA! OMG, I NEVER would've thought the story would end like that!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review!

Reviewer: nikkiolapotter
Date: 10/26/07 20:38
Chapter: A Day at the Spa

BWAHAHAHAHA!! That made me giggle. :)

This was really really cute! I never would've guess that Hermione was Deena! That is really something I think she would do in the name of S.P.E.W.

I loved that last part-

“Absolutely not,” remarked Snape, in a tone he usually reserved for talking to Harry Potter.

You truly have a talent for humor! The only thing that irked me was Snape screaming out of the window when he received the flyer-I imagined him more thrusting his head outside in a bothered manner. (but then again, this is the same guy who went to a spa) Great job!



Author's Response: Thank you so much! That part was OOC, but he would have to be OOC to go to a spa in the first place. As for the "talent for humor", thanks!

Author's Response: I was just re-reading your review and notice you used "Snape" and "bother" in the same sentence. I saw that and, being me, went "Oh! Heh, POTTER PUPPET PALS!!"

Reviewer: mrsmcclnt
Date: 10/24/07 10:51
Chapter: A Day at the Spa

** LOL***

** LOL **

Oh my goodness!!..... This was just wonderful!! And you picked a great BETA in Schmergo to do this with you!!

*puts story into favorites*

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review and the add! By the way, you are absolutely right about having Schmergo beta this story for me. She's great! *hugs Schmergo*

Reviewer: Robby
Date: 10/24/07 7:51
Chapter: A Day at the Spa

That was a halarious story!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: dracos_star
Date: 10/13/07 19:53
Chapter: A Day at the Spa

WOW! I absolutly loved it..it was so funny!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: katsbag
Date: 10/12/07 21:15
Chapter: A Day at the Spa

omg so funny! love it!


Author's Response: thanks !

Reviewer: SparkleDust
Date: 10/12/07 17:32
Chapter: A Day at the Spa

haha. good story.

Author's Response: Two doubles in one day?

Reviewer: SparkleDust
Date: 10/12/07 17:17
Chapter: A Day at the Spa

haha. good story.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: loveismagicharry
Date: 10/12/07 16:34
Chapter: A Day at the Spa

HA!That was hillarious!I would have never dreamed up such a thing as Snape goign to a spa!!Lol keep writing!

Author's Response: Doubly-post.

Reviewer: loveismagicharry
Date: 10/12/07 16:34
Chapter: A Day at the Spa

HA!That was hillarious!I would have never dreamed up such a thing as Snape goign to a spa!!Lol keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks! I am working on a few other stories. One's a future generation story and one's poetry.

Reviewer: murtagh799
Date: 10/08/07 14:33
Chapter: A Day at the Spa

haha that was hillarious! really well written. though it could use a bit snazz and they were all horribly out of character it fit :) great job!

Author's Response: Thank you. By the way, your pen name is strangely familiar. Is it from Eragon?

Reviewer: x4mereve4
Date: 10/07/07 19:47
Chapter: A Day at the Spa

absolutely, positively hilarious. that gave me a good laugh...especially the last part! Good job :D

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Meralie
Date: 10/07/07 14:20
Chapter: A Day at the Spa

..nice :P

Author's Response: ..Thanks :)

Reviewer: ginnyhermionefan123
Date: 10/06/07 14:30
Chapter: A Day at the Spa

LOL I loved the ending..
"Meanwhile, Severus Snape was paying for his purchases in the Apothecary. As he handed one Galleon, nine Sickles, and three Knuts to the elderly witch at the counter, she leaned over and said “Hey there, handsome. Want to go get an ice cream when my shift is done?” She winked at him.

“Absolutely not,” remarked Snape, in a tone he usually reserved for talking to Harry Potter. He grabbed his purchases, hurried out of the store and promptly Apparated home. 'Curse my good looks!'"
LOL genius

Author's Response: Thank you! That part wasn't originally in the story, but Schmergo suggested I add in a part like that. I'm glad she did!

Reviewer: Tweak
Date: 10/06/07 1:07
Chapter: A Day at the Spa

*fic. Typo. Sorry. ^.^ Keep writing!

Author's Response: That's okay. ^.^ Thank you fo correcting it.

Author's Response: *for. Typo. This was entirely unintentional.

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