Well I noticed this hasn't been updated in a while but I couldn't resist. I loved the part where he changed his appearance according to the photograph, sometimes descriptions of a characters physical appearance can be a bit bland but that was great. You capture his emotions perfectly, his panic and his fear. It really is a good start, and I hope to see an update some time soon. :D
. . . . wow. I've never read anything about Teddy and this was a great first expirience (?), I will never be able to read one about him again!
Author's Response: Well, its nowhere near over.
nice chapter! really interesting story!!
This looks really good. : )
I really like this fic! Sorry it took me soo long to get a chance to look over it. I only have enough time to read this chapter but I will definataly be reading the rest of it. It's an interesting fic, not one that I have seen too often. Keep up the great work!
Wow, what an interesting and well-written story!
I'm a sucker for Teddy fics at the moment, but quite a few of them have not lived up to my expectations. This story, however, is amazing. You portray emotions beautifully - Teddy's in particular - you feel his tension, his panic when reading the prologue. I also love the descriptions of his appearance - you can write paragraphs and paragraphs about it and not bore the reader.
I do have one nitpick: While I was reading about her, I got the impression that Jazzelle is a little bit Mary Sue-ish, maybe that's because she's perfect, in Teddy's opinion, so maybe she'll be a little more real when we get to meet her.
Apart from that, this is truly one of the best fics I've read in a while now - I'm going to add it to my favourites right now. Excellent story: 10/10.
wow i like how u picked up right were teddy lupin was.
It was awesome. best of luck 4 evrythng
wow you are such a good writer. i love howyou describe their charactors and how Teddy got his apearence. great job. plaease update soon
Author's Response: As soonas my Beta returns from wherever she's run off to.... Haha.
Oooh, this is really interesting. I can't wait to read more! :)
First person is really hard to pull off, but I really like what you've done with the story so far. Teddy taking features from both of his parents to form his own appearance was an especially nice touch. I hope to read more in the future.
Eye-broccoli, how funny!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. It was actually part of an elaborate inside joke between myself and some friends. We named all of our guy friends, from eye-doorknob (Not even edible) to eye-strawberry pudding to the highest you can be, eye- chocolate cheesecake. Haha.
wow. i'm kind of confused... why does teddy call harry and ginny mr. and mrs. potter?? Harry IS his godfather after all. and how did teddy become a werewolf?? otherwise, good chapter! update soon!!
Author's Response: I know he's his godfather, but I just wanted a relationship with them as Harry has with Mr. and Mts. Weasley. One of... parents... yeah their not his... but still. Parents. (You never see Harry go "Hey Molly, how are you?" lol.)
Very interesting. Keep it commin`
Intersting. This could turn out well. It's original and creative. I look forward to rading the rest!
Keep it up...
Haunting start. It sends shivers down my spine!!! 10/10 this is going in my favorites!!