Reviewer: MysticalMayhem
Date: 09/13/08 17:02
Chapter: Prologue

Well I noticed this hasn't been updated in a while but I couldn't resist. I loved the part where he changed his appearance according to the photograph, sometimes descriptions of a characters physical appearance can be a bit bland but that was great. You capture his emotions perfectly, his panic and his fear. It really is a good start, and I hope to see an update some time soon. :D

Reviewer: darknessofnight
Date: 02/14/08 20:10
Chapter: The Pig-Man's Papers

. . . . wow. I've never read anything about Teddy and this was a great first expirience (?), I will never be able to read one about him again!

Author's Response: Well, its nowhere near over.

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 01/18/08 14:52
Chapter: The Pig-Man's Papers

nice chapter! really interesting story!!

Reviewer: Lily the Second
Date: 01/16/08 15:56
Chapter: Prologue

This looks really good. : )

Reviewer: hermione_granger4life
Date: 12/24/07 15:16
Chapter: Prologue

I really like this fic! Sorry it took me soo long to get a chance to look over it. I only have enough time to read this chapter but I will definataly be reading the rest of it. It's an interesting fic, not one that I have seen too often. Keep up the great work!


Reviewer: Ellie4Harry
Date: 12/17/07 8:17
Chapter: Eye-Broccoli

Wow, what an interesting and well-written story!
I'm a sucker for Teddy fics at the moment, but quite a few of them have not lived up to my expectations. This story, however, is amazing. You portray emotions beautifully - Teddy's in particular - you feel his tension, his panic when reading the prologue. I also love the descriptions of his appearance - you can write paragraphs and paragraphs about it and not bore the reader.
I do have one nitpick: While I was reading about her, I got the impression that Jazzelle is a little bit Mary Sue-ish, maybe that's because she's perfect, in Teddy's opinion, so maybe she'll be a little more real when we get to meet her.
Apart from that, this is truly one of the best fics I've read in a while now - I'm going to add it to my favourites right now. Excellent story: 10/10.
Ellie :D

Reviewer: thomasandrewfelton
Date: 12/07/07 16:54
Chapter: Prologue

wow i like how u picked up right were teddy lupin was.

Reviewer: ashley benton
Date: 11/14/07 5:33
Chapter: Prologue

It was awesome. best of luck 4 evrythng

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 11/12/07 16:55
Chapter: Eye-Broccoli

wow you are such a good writer. i love howyou describe their charactors and how Teddy got his apearence. great job. plaease update soon

Author's Response: As soonas my Beta returns from wherever she's run off to.... Haha.

Reviewer: SingingBird
Date: 11/03/07 15:21
Chapter: Eye-Broccoli

Oooh, this is really interesting. I can't wait to read more! :)

Reviewer: jediprankster
Date: 10/10/07 1:18
Chapter: Eye-Broccoli

First person is really hard to pull off, but I really like what you've done with the story so far. Teddy taking features from both of his parents to form his own appearance was an especially nice touch. I hope to read more in the future.

Reviewer: GeekyGirl1012
Date: 10/07/07 17:13
Chapter: Eye-Broccoli

Eye-broccoli, how funny!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. It was actually part of an elaborate inside joke between myself and some friends. We named all of our guy friends, from eye-doorknob (Not even edible) to eye-strawberry pudding to the highest you can be, eye- chocolate cheesecake. Haha.

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 09/22/07 16:50
Chapter: Prologue

wow. i'm kind of confused... why does teddy call harry and ginny mr. and mrs. potter?? Harry IS his godfather after all. and how did teddy become a werewolf?? otherwise, good chapter! update soon!!

Author's Response: I know he's his godfather, but I just wanted a relationship with them as Harry has with Mr. and Mts. Weasley. One of... parents... yeah their not his... but still. Parents. (You never see Harry go "Hey Molly, how are you?" lol.)

Reviewer: Only
Date: 09/20/07 11:52
Chapter: Prologue

Very interesting. Keep it commin`

Reviewer: Calliera
Date: 09/19/07 21:51
Chapter: Prologue

Intersting. This could turn out well. It's original and creative. I look forward to rading the rest!

Keep it up...

Calli :)

Reviewer: Pottergirl
Date: 09/19/07 20:09
Chapter: Prologue

Haunting start. It sends shivers down my spine!!! 10/10 this is going in my favorites!!

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