Awwww!!! That was a sweet one. Good job.=Sammy
Okay, this was a really sweet and heart-wrenching story. The last line is so cute and squeal-worthy! I think it's really really sweet of James to comfort her. Anyway, yes, nice math joke! Do you remember that the brilliant JK Rowling named Hermione's Arithmancy teacher Professor VECTOR? Haha (:
Author's Response: I figured it was very likely the Arithmancy professor would have been different...so the one before Vector was Scalar :) And I'm glad you liked the story, though there probably won't be a sequel per se.
Good story! I read your other and I liked that too!
That was awesome
that was so sad
that was a really good fic. i really liked the math joke.
Author's Response: thank you! (and I'm glad you got the joke)
This was very well done, great job.
I really liked this. Especially the line about Lily hating the indigo colour; that passage was quite effective! You should definitely keep writing, your subtlety shows good style!
Author's Response: Thank you...that passage was important, so I'm glad it was effective. And I will definitely keep writing!
short, but totally great. it was so simple yet it portrayed their love beautifully.
Author's Response: Thank you! I didn't focus on their love, just a very important experience they have (okay, may have had) in common--but because we all know that connection grows into love, you were able to imagine it. Yay, my story fulfilled its purpose!
i thought it was a great story and idea . next time try to add more details and try to make it longer . the story is still awsome!
Author's Response: Every day in their lives was packed with details I would have loved to describe--but I plucked two moments out to show their connection. I'm glad you wanted to read more and liked the story!
awe! it is so cute! extremely sad but still very cute! you could have made it longer though...
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it and that you thought it was sad...I was trying to translate my own experience with grief into a story about what could grow out of it.
I loved this!
I love how there's a reason they get together. They understand what the other is going through. Not the "One day Lilly Evans decided that she was madly in love with James Potter" stuff you can get sometimes. Keep writing! Do you think maybe you could add more to the story? Building up to when they start going out?
Author's Response: I'm definitely going to write more James/Lily fics, but this one needs to stand alone: I like leaving the rest to the imagination. Besides, it does take a bit longer for them to get together, and I'm not sure you want to read/I want to write several chapters about James being supportive and Lily not even wanting to think about a relationship with him. I don't think I could skip over that part if I were to continue with the story. I feel like it should be finished.
I liked it... it was sweet. They learn to understand eachother. It's great. =D
well, i loved anything it was ur A/N about Professor Scalar! dont i hate that topic! haha...
nice attempt Niymphea... i would have loved a bit more detail though... keep it up.
Author's Response: I was afraid no one would get the joke if I didn't point it out...I'm quite proud of that name. ;-) When I wrote this, I was thinking of it almost as like two separate chapters, two isolated incidents. So the reason there isn't as much detail as perhaps you would have liked is that I know there was a lot going on in their lives, but I was emphasizing these two simple scenes and their effect on their relationship.
This was really good. sad but good. I felt like I was inside Lily's head!
Author's Response: Thank you; that's a huge part of what I want readers to be able to feel--so that's a major compliment.
Yay! You know I love your works!
That is so touching.... You have a great style of writing that draws the reader in and keeps them in the story. Nice writing!
Author's Response: Thank you! (and thanks for r&ring Not Another Cinderella Story...I took your suggestion).
Great story. Very touching and heart-wrenching. I can't even begin to imagine....
Thank you for writing it. I really liked the line from your A/N that you based it from. Poignant.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it. I was kind of tired of reading fics where they suddenly fall in love and they're kissing and getting married and then dying. So this one has subtle romance.
OMG, that was so SAD! I'm on the verge of tears here! It was really good though!
Author's Response: As weird as this sounds, I'm glad the story made you almost cry...it means the story wasn't too improbable. And I'm glad you liked it!