Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 09/23/07 10:10
Chapter: The Loud Lament of Tonks

I really liked this poem. It was simple yet powerful. I think you have the emotion down pat, great job. This was one of the best poems I've ever read about Tonks.

Author's Response: Why thank you very much. What a nice thing to say!

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 09/23/07 2:44
Chapter: The Loud Lament of Tonks

A nice one but I can't help feeling that Tonks was completely out of character. To me she doesn't seem so formal at all.=Sammy

Author's Response: Pregnant ladies are rarely in character. All the ones I know at least! :) Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Link Potter
Date: 09/21/07 13:34
Chapter: The Loud Lament of Tonks

good poem :)

Author's Response: Thanks!

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
A Story for Charlie by Darkness Enshrouds 3rd-5th Years
A boy. A girl. A budding romance. If only things never got complicated... (Violence...
Scorpius Malfoy and the Salem Witch Trials by Hotrav 3rd-5th Years
The third story in the Scorpius Malfoy and the Sins of the Fathers series. Lucius...
No One Can Ever Know by Nagini Riddle 3rd-5th Years
"My word, Severus, that I shall never reveal the best of you?"~Dumbledore to...
FEATURED
My Troubled Tyrant by Belledeg Professors
Keedie Dante has experienced many amazing things during her time at Hogwarts...
His and Hers by Acacia Carter 3rd-5th Years
In a perfect world, Neville and Hannah's wedding would go off without a hitch...
All This Waiting For The Sky To Fall by Dawnie 1st-2nd Years
They found her body - broken, bleeding, face filled with signs of pain and fear...
Sanguini, the Vampire by teh tarik 6th-7th Years
Vampirism is the persistence and the perpetuity of the body, a madness of the...
Lost and Found by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor 3rd-5th Years
When Tracey Davis's financial security was a casualty of war, her family is...
CATEGORIES