I really liked this poem. It was simple yet powerful. I think you have the emotion down pat, great job. This was one of the best poems I've ever read about Tonks.
Author's Response: Why thank you very much. What a nice thing to say!
A nice one but I can't help feeling that Tonks was completely out of character. To me she doesn't seem so formal at all.=Sammy
Author's Response: Pregnant ladies are rarely in character. All the ones I know at least! :) Thanks for the review.
good poem :)
Author's Response: Thanks!