Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 09/23/07 10:10
Chapter: The Loud Lament of Tonks

I really liked this poem. It was simple yet powerful. I think you have the emotion down pat, great job. This was one of the best poems I've ever read about Tonks.

Author's Response: Why thank you very much. What a nice thing to say!

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 09/23/07 2:44
Chapter: The Loud Lament of Tonks

A nice one but I can't help feeling that Tonks was completely out of character. To me she doesn't seem so formal at all.=Sammy

Author's Response: Pregnant ladies are rarely in character. All the ones I know at least! :) Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Link Potter
Date: 09/21/07 13:34
Chapter: The Loud Lament of Tonks

good poem :)

Author's Response: Thanks!

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