*sniff,sniff* Aw!!! :'-( great work, these two deserve a decent death scene at least!
OMFG this is so goddamn fucking sad!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lupin's my favourite character, toooooooooooooooo!!!! ='[
This one is so sad, but that is why it is very good. Remus and Tonks were my favorite characters, and I felt really bad for Teddy after they died. Very, Very good job.
Aww... I really liked it. I almost started crying...
but basically the fact that Tonks died makes me cry. I named my rabbit after her....
Very good though. Seriously good.
xoxo. Allie Beth
Oh my gosh. This is beautiful. I loved it, even though it was so sad. It is one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. I can't wait to read some more of your writing.
AAAAAAAGH!!!!! It's *sniff* so *sniff* sad!!!!! I was reduced to a puddle of tears when I read the DH, what are you trying to do to me? Well, I suppose it's my fault for going looking for remus/tonks fics, but that's beside the point. Remus and Tonks are my joint second fave characters. I LOVE THEM! This is a really good story. *sniff*
Oh my goodness, that was so sad!
The last thing he hoped before the green light flashed and hit him was that the war would be won. That it would finally be over and his son could grow up in a better world, one he and Tonks both had died fighting to make…
That last line is what really got to me. *sniff* It really hit me hard.
This story is unique. Most stories about this topic (mine included) have Remus die first, but yours was different. It was definitely a different take on it.
One thing that's the same is that Bellatrix kills Tonks. That was the widely accepted theory that J.K.R. proved to be true. You have Bellatrix kill Remus, too, which is (again) unique. J.K.R. did say that Dolohov killed Remus, but I still like your version of events. So, good job, and I'm off to cry again. Best wishes! :D
Author's Response: The most ironic thing about this is that the part that you quoted I did not originally intend to put in. I actually needed more because my word count was not high enough... I actually think it gives more closure to this part and am really really glad I didn't have enough words
Well now its more than one word:positivley amazing
Not rubbish at all. Quite lovely.
Oh! You made me cry! This is so good! Keep writing!