Reviewer: mrs_ginnerva_potter
Date: 01/10/08 16:30
Chapter: Chapter I

wait, the first part...gemma wrote that?! omg!!!!! that was so coooool!!!! an awesome first chapter. hope the next chapter is just as good!!!

Reviewer: REMi iS AWESOME
Date: 01/09/08 16:27
Chapter: Chapter VII

James Potter had finally won Lily Evansí heart.

For eternity.
OH MY GODNESS!!! AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!! I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE YOU! AND I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE YOUR WRITING!! This is totally what I needed after getting my dreams crushed by the guy of my dreams =D hopefully my life ends just like James with lily his for eternity!

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope things are all with with you and the guy of your dreams, though. And I hope all of us here will have our own happily-ever-afters, exactly modelled after our fluffy fantasies. (:

Reviewer: RowenaHeart
Date: 01/07/08 13:45
Chapter: Chapter VII

Nice! Gemma is my favorite charactor. Though, htere is one snag. If they will love for all eternity, then they cannot get married, because they will have to vow to part when they die. Remember, "til death do us part?" Good fic, anyways.

Author's Response: Haha, I'm sure they'll change the vows such that death will never do them part. Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: Minna_Black
Date: 01/06/08 16:48
Chapter: Chapter VII


Author's Response: Glad you thought so! Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: Honorary Marauder
Date: 01/06/08 15:31
Chapter: Chapter VII

Oh, that was soo cool! I love the whole plan/reality thing. It was such a great idea.

Author's Response: I am glad you thought it was a great idea. Thanks for the review. (:

Reviewer: Honorary Marauder
Date: 01/06/08 14:24
Chapter: Chapter I

This is a really neat story.

Author's Response: I'm glad you think so! Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: fawkeshermione221
Date: 01/04/08 16:41
Chapter: Chapter I

WOLE..that made me luagh out loud. Loved this chapter!


Author's Response: Ooh, it made you laugh? I hope you continue reading this fanfic! Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: HJaneWeasley
Date: 12/24/07 16:49
Chapter: Chapter VII

AWWWW!!! that was so. cute.

Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you thought so! Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 12/13/07 6:30
Chapter: Chapter VII

How sweet! I'm sad to see the story end, but I'm glad James finally won her heart. I loved the Marauder's relationship. It makes you wonder why Peter went over to Voldemort. Lily's detention was great, I really could see her doing that to help Remus, even if she didn't know it was him.
Despite the title, I didn't realize there would be seven plans until about the fifth one! ;-)
Great job!!!

Author's Response: Well, perhaps the Marauders weren't enough for him. Lord Voldemort was "ruling" the world those days; he must have thought joining Voldemort put him on the winning side for sure. And haha yes! Lily is the decent sort of girl, I think she'd probably help anyone who deserved it (and Remus certainly did). Thanks for the great review, Hermione Clone! :D

Reviewer: Osced
Date: 12/12/07 16:44
Chapter: Chapter VII

Great ending, a really beautiful end!

Author's Response: I'm glad you thought so! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Osced
Date: 12/12/07 15:10
Chapter: Chapter V

Great Story, but little more funny moments would be appreciated!
Keep up the great WORK!

Author's Response: Not enough humour? Oh well. I'm glad you still enjoyed it somewhat anyway! Thanks for the review! (:

Reviewer: Obsessed_Much
Date: 12/12/07 10:28
Chapter: Chapter VII


Author's Response: I'm glad you thought it was aww-worthy. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: am_Lily_Evans
Date: 12/10/07 20:19
Chapter: Chapter VII

i loved the ending :D then agina, i was always a sucker for love stories.... tee hee

Author's Response: I'm glad you loved the ending! Thanks for the nice review! (:

Reviewer: Lostlovegoods
Date: 12/09/07 15:46
Chapter: Chapter VII

It was a fabulous ending to a great- reality styled- story! You did amazingly with the parts of what he would like to happen and what actually does and the end was just a top off of perfectness.
Great Work!

Author's Response: This review made me blush too. Violently. I mean, wow. Thanks! (: Also, I'm glad- really, really glad- and thrilled- extremely thrilled- that you thought I handled this story well. And the part about how the end was perfect! I mean, I know it's not perfect- far from it, I'm sure- but thank you, thank you, thank you for thinking so highly of it. And thank you for this lovely review! (:

Reviewer: Greenelfhpfan
Date: 12/09/07 12:12
Chapter: Chapter VII

LOVE the story- it is SO CUTE!!!

Author's Response: Glad you love this fanfic, and that you thought it to be cute! Thanks for the review! :D

Reviewer: kittykat
Date: 12/09/07 0:55
Chapter: Chapter VII

i just adore your fic...i think all seven chapters and the wait for updates was totally worth it. the ending is soo cute and just warm and fuzzy. i think every girl wants that to happe to them.

Author's Response: I read your review and blushed with pleasure. Thanks for thinking so highly for my story! I agree with you that every girl wants a happy ending, though I'm not sure they want the ending to be like this one, which, while cute, isn't devastatingly romantic or anything. Thanks for the review! (:

Reviewer: RonandMioneForever
Date: 12/08/07 18:11
Chapter: Chapter VII

So cute=)

Author's Response: Glad you thought so! Thanks for the review! (:

Reviewer: GryffindorGal18
Date: 12/08/07 16:30
Chapter: Chapter VII

I LOVED IT! You've such a captivating style, and you know your characters perfectly! Keep up the good work, and thank you for writing such a fabulous story!

Author's Response: I have captivating style? Wow, thanks! I'm glad you thought they were all in-character, because my characterisation is not perfect, to say the least. Thank YOU for reading this story, I hope you'll read my other stories, too. Also, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: stupefyx
Date: 12/08/07 15:02
Chapter: Chapter VII


Author's Response: Glad you thought it so. (: Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: emerald_dolphin
Date: 12/08/07 11:19
Chapter: Chapter I

Wow. I love this story! It's so cute and fluffy and sweet, and it just gives me a warm fuzzy feeling. I think you did an excellent job of capturing the characters' personalities. Once again, I love it.

Author's Response: It gave you a "warm fuzzy feeling?" Definitely a good sign! Lol. Anyway, I'm glad that you found the characters believable as those created by the wonderful JK Rowling. (All hail JK Rowling!) Ahem. Anyway, thanks for loving it, and thanks for the review! :D

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