Reviewer: rather_be_athogwarts
Date: 11/02/08 16:52
Chapter: Chapter IV

well, i'm just going to have to read the next chapter! :D i found this plan was a bit too simple, but awesome anyways!

Reviewer: rather_be_athogwarts
Date: 11/02/08 16:43
Chapter: Chapter III

i love your fic!! :D it's so clever how the plans never work out. i can't wait to see the last "in reality"!

Reviewer: rather_be_athogwarts
Date: 11/02/08 16:27
Chapter: Chapter I

very cute. you totally tricked me with the "in reality" part!

Reviewer: Izzy Radcliffe
Date: 10/10/08 6:46
Chapter: Chapter VII

awww that is the cutest fic every!! lol i love gemma, she's hilarious

Reviewer: bettab911
Date: 10/04/08 9:37
Chapter: Chapter VII

Wow, that was really great, I especially liked how it all worked out in thend without him needing a plan!

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 06/26/08 18:57
Chapter: Chapter VII

Aww... this was a wonderful fic.
You're a great writer!
This was an awesome idea for a fic, I loved it and really had fun reading the different schemes and the very fluffy, romantic, peaceful ending.
The last line was so perfect.

Great job!

Reviewer: lilyrox
Date: 06/25/08 13:38
Chapter: Chapter VII

Oh wow! I loved that fic so much! The ending was just pure bliss. I was so happy! They really do make a great couple.

Reviewer: Lily Cambers
Date: 06/18/08 21:25
Chapter: Chapter VII

That........Was.......soooo.....ADORABLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep up the good work!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you, and I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. (:

Reviewer: tonkzie
Date: 04/26/08 5:35
Chapter: Chapter VII

i loved it

Author's Response: Each time someone says that I feel this inexplicable warmth enveloping me in this giant hug. Thank you. It means a lot to me that you and all you others love this fic. It's like the feeling that you gave someone at least a few minutes of fun. (:

Reviewer: maggie_95
Date: 04/20/08 6:48
Chapter: Chapter VII

i just love this story!!

Author's Response: And I'm glad you do!

Reviewer: Mandy-Jane
Date: 03/27/08 23:43
Chapter: Chapter VII

=) Fluffy

Author's Response: We all need a little fluff in our lives at one point of time... Hope you enjoyed this story. (:

Reviewer: deadly_muggle
Date: 03/27/08 9:05
Chapter: Chapter I

um... hey, not to be mean or anything, you must have heard it before, but you see i have this tiny bit od OCD so... well, how cold James have a nimbus. It was the newest version ever so long afterwards, in arry's second year. By the way, I love your story and plot and everything. Just so you know


Reviewer: olipop10
Date: 03/26/08 10:56
Chapter: Chapter VII

omg...u r right, the ending is sooo sweet! and i think it was better this way because it was not planed...well at least not entirely and so,it was not artificial but true to the characters!
your story was very entertaining! just keep it up if u r writing any other stories!

Author's Response: Yeah, I didn't want the part where they really got together to be planned, that'd feel too fake. I'm glad you prefer it the spontaneous way, too. Thanks for the reivew. (:

Reviewer: olipop10
Date: 03/25/08 18:33
Chapter: Chapter VI

cool, really a romantic chapter...too bad lilly doesnt dance but thankfully she refused not because she was burried in a book or ignoring james,but because she realy couldnt dance.i think james ' a gentleman here in not pushing her and understanding that its okay if she cant dance.
really, you should consider being a romantic writer yourself; beside Gemma! but i guess you're already there, so great work!

Reviewer: olipop10
Date: 03/25/08 18:06
Chapter: Chapter V

ooooohhhh, my heart is fluttering! really this is just a great story! if only things in reallity could turn out like in the fictions!
but hey, cheeers!

Reviewer: olipop10
Date: 03/25/08 17:48
Chapter: Chapter IV

oh, ever so cute little stories! i hope james finally get a move on with lily, but i must admit that 'real' lily is really difficult to get, so im just waiting to see how james is gonna do!

Reviewer: olipop10
Date: 03/25/08 17:30
Chapter: Chapter III

awwww, thats soooo sweeettt! i defnitly lov this chapter!

Reviewer: olipop10
Date: 03/25/08 17:06
Chapter: Chapter II

wow , i kinda like your little romantic stories! too bad it ends up being a total mess in reality...haha!

Reviewer: olipop10
Date: 03/25/08 16:29
Chapter: Chapter I

your first chapter is really good, but i have a question to get things straight: the top part of the story is suposedly the story lilys friend wrote right? good thinking! i loved it

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 03/24/08 10:33
Chapter: Chapter VII

Awwww this is such a cute, sweet, fluffy, hilarious, fanfic! I loved it! I really like reading fanfics that are funny and sweet because the depressing ones are just dark and sad a lot of the times. Thanks so much!

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