well, i'm just going to have to read the next chapter! :D i found this plan was a bit too simple, but awesome anyways!
i love your fic!! :D it's so clever how the plans never work out. i can't wait to see the last "in reality"!
very cute. you totally tricked me with the "in reality" part!
awww that is the cutest fic every!! lol i love gemma, she's hilarious
Wow, that was really great, I especially liked how it all worked out in thend without him needing a plan!
Aww... this was a wonderful fic.
You're a great writer!
This was an awesome idea for a fic, I loved it and really had fun reading the different schemes and the very fluffy, romantic, peaceful ending.
The last line was so perfect.
Oh wow! I loved that fic so much! The ending was just pure bliss. I was so happy! They really do make a great couple.
That........Was.......soooo.....ADORABLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep up the good work!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, and I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. (:
i loved it
Author's Response: Each time someone says that I feel this inexplicable warmth enveloping me in this giant hug. Thank you. It means a lot to me that you and all you others love this fic. It's like the feeling that you gave someone at least a few minutes of fun. (:
i just love this story!!
Author's Response: And I'm glad you do!
Author's Response: We all need a little fluff in our lives at one point of time... Hope you enjoyed this story. (:
um... hey, not to be mean or anything, you must have heard it before, but you see i have this tiny bit od OCD so... well, how cold James have a nimbus. It was the newest version ever so long afterwards, in arry's second year. By the way, I love your story and plot and everything. Just so you know
omg...u r right, the ending is sooo sweet! and i think it was better this way because it was not planed...well at least not entirely and so,it was not artificial but true to the characters!
your story was very entertaining! just keep it up if u r writing any other stories!
Author's Response: Yeah, I didn't want the part where they really got together to be planned, that'd feel too fake. I'm glad you prefer it the spontaneous way, too. Thanks for the reivew. (:
cool, really a romantic chapter...too bad lilly doesnt dance but thankfully she refused not because she was burried in a book or ignoring james,but because she realy couldnt dance.i think james ' a gentleman here in not pushing her and understanding that its okay if she cant dance.
really, you should consider being a romantic writer yourself; beside Gemma! but i guess you're already there, so great work!
ooooohhhh, my heart is fluttering! really this is just a great story! if only things in reallity could turn out like in the fictions!
but hey, cheeers!
oh, ever so cute little stories! i hope james finally get a move on with lily, but i must admit that 'real' lily is really difficult to get, so im just waiting to see how james is gonna do!
awwww, thats soooo sweeettt! i defnitly lov this chapter!
wow , i kinda like your little romantic stories! too bad it ends up being a total mess in reality...haha!
your first chapter is really good, but i have a question to get things straight: the top part of the story is suposedly the story lilys friend wrote right? good thinking! i loved it
Awwww this is such a cute, sweet, fluffy, hilarious, fanfic! I loved it! I really like reading fanfics that are funny and sweet because the depressing ones are just dark and sad a lot of the times. Thanks so much!