Reviewer: Dracoisbeast
Date: 08/31/12 4:34
Chapter: Chapter VII

Thanks for writing this! I really thought it was fun to read, and believable. I can't say that about a lot of other James/Lily fanfics. I even found myself laughing out loud sometimes. You nailed some of the characters, which is really hard to do in my opinion. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: MaybeOneRaindrop
Date: 01/14/12 11:17
Chapter: Chapter VII

I LOVED IT I LOVED IT I LOVED IT I LOVED IT! And that's not just because I adore Lily/James, I promise you! It was soooo sweet! And even though it was completely fluffy, I didn't care, cos it was so sweet! Awesome story :)

Lily

Reviewer: MaybeOneRaindrop
Date: 01/14/12 10:53
Chapter: Chapter V

The only thing wrong with this story is that the fluff isn't real! *cries* I love James/Lily sooo much!

Reviewer: MaybeOneRaindrop
Date: 01/14/12 10:19
Chapter: Chapter I

Ha ha I thought it was almost unbelievably fluffy then I scrolled down to "In Reality!" Made my day! I think you captured the essence of all the characters really well. If people make a mistake in James/Lily fan fics it's that they make Lily too spiteful. I think this is exactly how she'd act after he realised she had feelings for James. Gemma reminds me of Angelina and Alicia, so you've done that well too. And of course Sirius is perfectly in character, as always. Well done :)

Lily

Reviewer: bibliophileballetbaby17
Date: 06/29/11 12:07
Chapter: Chapter V

This one is my favorite im tearin up at the cuteness of it

Reviewer: bibliophileballetbaby17
Date: 06/29/11 11:41
Chapter: Chapter IV

this is so cool trying to figure out what the marauders and gemma might say about the fantasys

Reviewer: bibliophileballetbaby17
Date: 06/29/11 11:39
Chapter: Chapter I

great

Reviewer: bibliophileballetbaby17
Date: 06/29/11 11:03
Chapter: Chapter III

awww

Reviewer: bibliophileballetbaby17
Date: 06/29/11 10:33
Chapter: Chapter I

OMG so cute

I cant stop smiling

Reviewer: snapeoutcast
Date: 01/02/11 16:03
Chapter: Chapter V

Alright stop begging for reviews! The story is getting intresting, I love the way the plotted the story with the fansties first and than what really happened

Reviewer: readergirl166
Date: 11/19/10 13:07
Chapter: Chapter VII

Beautiful, the whole thing was beautiful. I just love it. Sorry I didn't review before, I have this thing about no reviewing until I read the last chapter posted. I loved it all around.

Reviewer: ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor
Date: 09/16/09 0:05
Chapter: Chapter VII

Absolutely brilliant! I guess life is what happens while you're busy making plans for yourself, lol. I guess it just goes to show how silly and insecure guys really are.

Reviewer: Realchosenone
Date: 06/20/09 12:09
Chapter: Chapter II

How cute.

Reviewer: Realchosenone
Date: 06/20/09 12:09
Chapter: Chapter II

How cute.

Reviewer: Realchosenone
Date: 06/19/09 20:06
Chapter: Chapter I

You had me going on that first story. Totally fictional. I thought this was sweet and adorable.

Reviewer: siilly_bookworm_28
Date: 01/02/09 22:40
Chapter: Chapter VII

ABSOLUTELY TERRIFIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
10 OUT OF 5 STARS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: ginnypotter_89
Date: 12/27/08 22:20
Chapter: Chapter I

WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER. i dont care if it completed change the effing status!

Reviewer: rather_be_athogwarts
Date: 11/02/08 19:48
Chapter: Chapter VII

yay! cuteness ~ loved it.

Reviewer: rather_be_athogwarts
Date: 11/02/08 19:00
Chapter: Chapter VI

hey! i love how the "plans" have kind of an aura of unrealness or like romance novels about them. awesome!! great job! i have to read the last chapter!! :D

Reviewer: rather_be_athogwarts
Date: 11/02/08 18:45
Chapter: Chapter V

that was DEFINITELY the cutest fantasy so far! it seemed more realistic then the rest of them! i LOVE your fic so far!!! the idea is so creative and it's wonderful! i still can't wait for the end when the last plan falls apart. :D

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