Reviews For My Father's World
Reviewer: emLILY EVANS
Date: 01/07/08 19:10
Chapter: Emil


Author's Response: Glad that you like it!

Reviewer: Dissendio
Date: 12/31/07 9:17
Chapter: Letters

So far, I am enjoying this story a lot. You capture how Dean would feel about being a wizard well. I thought that the school would send round a teacher from the school to explain to the parents of a Muggle-born about the magical world though. I don't suppose that it matters too much as the rest of the story so far fits in very well with Dean's probable situation. I look forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks! In the next chapter, you'll find out who the school sends as a representative. I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Author's Response: Thanks! In the next chapter, you'll find out who the school sends as a representative. I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: Pendraegona
Date: 12/26/07 20:04
Chapter: Emil

Aw, you do a great Dean. He was always a fun character, and since J.K. gave him a backstory, it makes me happy that you're writing it.

I'd always imagined Dean living alone with his mum, and I haven't read all the interview literature on him, but your way is much better. Why wouldn't Dean's mom get remarried? And the step-siblings just make it more realistic. You do well weaving in how he pumps his fist--sort of a Dean signature gesture.

I've only just started reading this, but you write it so well, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and have a Happy New Year!

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much for leaving such a wonderful review! I'm flattered by all of your compliments. Quite honestly, I haven't read the interviews about him, but it wouldn't make sense for his mother to remain unmarried for so long. Anyways, I'm honored that you enjoyed my portrayal of Dean so much. I hope that you too have a fantastic New Year!

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 12/23/07 22:36
Chapter: Emil

I love it! Another great chapter, and I can't even find a nitpick! How many more chapters are there? Or if you havn't written them yet, where are you ending it? I really like it, I hope you keep going for a while.

Author's Response: I have a very detailed outline for the next chapter and a vague outline for the final chapter. There will only be five, at least, that's my plan. I'm amazed that you couldn't even find a nitpick - my beta is great, no? Oh, as for your other question, I'm planning to have it end right as he goes to Hogwarts. Nice and simple, yeah right. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: whomovedmyquil
Date: 12/22/07 21:52
Chapter: Emil

Kelly! Another amazing chapter! Though I'm the lucky one, as I always get to read it first! *grins superiorly*

Anyways, as I said, you're doign a great job, Klley! You have such a flair for this!

Author's Response: Ashley! *huggles* Thank you so much for being not only a great beta, but a wonderful person for leaving me a review! And all of your little suggestions only make this better. Thank you!

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 12/22/07 21:13
Chapter: Emil

aw! great kelly! It seems that Dean's mum still really cares about Emil! John = :#!!!

Author's Response: Thanks again! :D

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 12/22/07 21:13
Chapter: Emil

aw! great kelly! It seems that Dean's mum still really cares about Emil! John = :#!!!

Author's Response: Yeah...she does. I mean, in comparison to the way her current husband is acting, he must seem like a veritable saint. Plus, absence makes the heart grow fonder. Thanks for leaving review!

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 12/19/07 16:15
Chapter: Letters

Very good chapter, please update soon! One little thing though, when Dean's reading his letter to his father, you have it starting as Dear Dean, it began:. That seems to the reader like the it began is part of the story. If you put the it began part ahead of the Dear Dean and didn't italicize it, it would be much less confusing. But other than that one little nitpick, awesome chapter!

Author's Response: I will be submitting the next chapter tomorrow, never fear! And thanks for the nitpick - I hadn't realized that while I was reading. I'm glad you're enjoying it and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 12/03/07 21:09
Chapter: Parental Confusion

I like it. It's cute. How'd Dean's father know his name though? Didn't he leave before he was born? I like that you gave Dean a stepfather, it makes sense that his mum would probably remarry. And by the way, goalies in England are called keepers.

Author's Response: I'd like to think that Dean is a bit older than Harry, so there is a chance that his father met him as a newborn. Also, parents sometimes choose names long before a child's birth. I'd like to say both situations apply here. And thanks for the Brit-pick. Since I'm most definitely an American, it's difficult for me to catch those. Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 12/03/07 20:20
Chapter: Letters

I really liked how he was on time! great job!

Author's Response: Heh, speaking as one who can be late upon occasion, it was pretty cool for him to be on time. Hopefully the next chapter will be up faster. Thanks for leaving a review!

Reviewer: TheBlackSister
Date: 10/03/07 21:27
Chapter: Parental Confusion

Oooh, an evil cliffie! It's really good so far, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Evil? No, no. It's good. It's very good. Muahaha

Only kidding! The next chapter is currently hanging out with my lovely beta. Hopefully, *crosses fingers and toes* it will be done shortly. I'm glad you like it! This is truly my favorite of all that I've written.

Reviewer: Ginnygirl3
Date: 10/01/07 22:00
Chapter: Parental Confusion

Awesome! i like your style of writing! =) i wish i could make up a great story like that! cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I'm glad you of all people enjoyed it! *huggles* Hope to see you around some more, dear!

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 09/29/07 19:20
Chapter: Parental Confusion

aw! That's good! you should add more chapters to this! maybe just one more! I love it!

Author's Response: Oh, don't worry! This is going to be a chaptered story. I believe the final tally is four, and I have most of chapters two and three written. Actually, chapter two is currently with my fantabulous beta, FenrirG.

Anyways, thank you for being kind enough to leave me a review! This fic was feeling really lonely here. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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