Reviewer: Andromeda_Tonks
Date: 02/17/08 8:11
Chapter: Chapter 1: An Overheard Secret

I like this story, I haven't seen one from Hugo's point of view before. My only worry is that people will lose track of who's who with so many people. Apart from that, I love it! *adds to favorites*.

Author's Response: Hey, thanks! I've got a re-write in the works, so that should be up soon. Thanks for the support, you made my evening!!

Reviewer: go go ravenclaw
Date: 01/15/08 10:04
Chapter: Chapter 1: An Overheard Secret

Its good, and please check your beta boards account, I've offered to beta for you in reply to your beta wanted post. Please PM me if you're interested, since I already have a few things and suggestions for the story, which, otherwise, is great!

Author's Response: Thanks! I've sent you a message, so if you are looking at this, go check it out!!

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 09/22/07 10:37
Chapter: Chapter 1: An Overheard Secret

great chapter!! the only thing is, that JKR said in an interview that ron doesn't become an Auror, he ends up working with George in the joke shop, and george names his first son Fred. but i think that ron becoming an auror works out way better!! update soon!!

Author's Response: I actually did see that interview, but it was after I had started to write this story. I guess since Harry and Ron were always side by side, I figured they would want to work together on a daily basis. Besides, I just can't see Ron working in the Joke Shop; that was Fred's place. As for Sam, after writing him out on paper, I just didn't have the heart to change his name! So I left it. Thanks so much for reading, I'll be sure and update soon!

Reviewer: JoharinNebarSephrite
Date: 09/22/07 1:02
Chapter: Chapter 1: An Overheard Secret

You've done really well especially with all the characters ages and years, bet that got confusing. Hope you havent stopped keep it up I'm hoping to see more

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: JoharinNebarSephrite
Date: 09/22/07 1:02
Chapter: Chapter 1: An Overheard Secret

You've done really well especially with all the characters ages and years, bet that got confusing. Hope you havent stopped keep it up I'm hoping to see more

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I definitely haven't stopped, so look forward to the next chapter soon!

Reviewer: pwcapone
Date: 09/21/07 0:27
Chapter: Chapter 1: An Overheard Secret

I liked this! The only bad thing is there is almost to many characters to keep track of. Anyway, keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yeah, the characters are confusing, especially with all these new characters being thrown at you so fast. I'll put up a character list on my Author's page soon, so maybe that will help. Thanks again!

Reviewer: tonksosme
Date: 09/20/07 21:22
Chapter: Chapter 1: An Overheard Secret

a bit wordy, and confusing at the beginning, but i think you have a good story going.

Author's Response: Thanks for my first review! I absolutely love getting feedback. This is my first story I've ever written, so it was hard getting used to the writing process. I agree that the beginning is a little wordy, and since this story has such a tangled plotline (you'll see soon!) it was difficult to make it not confusing. Thanks again for the review, and I hope you'll keep reading!

Author's Response: Thanks for my first review! I absolutely love getting feedback. This is my first story I've ever written, so it was hard getting used to the writing process. I agree that the beginning is a little wordy, and since this story has such a tangled plotline (you'll see soon!) it was difficult to make it not confusing. Thanks again for the review, and I hope you'll keep reading!

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