Reviewer: Theloonyhermione
Date: 07/07/12 23:39
Chapter: Chapter 1

This was really good! I especially liked Ginny and Neville's parts, I think you wrote their perspective really well. It was a bit confusing trying to figure out who was who in the beginning of some sections; for example I thought Ginny was Ron at first, but if you wanted to be that way, I guess I can live with it. Again, good job!

Reviewer: arshiaariana
Date: 07/24/10 4:55
Chapter: Chapter 1

I loved this! I think you have such an amazing style of writing. I actually read this a while back, but i couldn't comment, because I wasn't a member then. But this is my favourite fanfiction by far!! Good job!

Reviewer: GryffindorGals
Date: 02/13/08 8:10
Chapter: Chapter 1

*sniff* once I was done reading this I had tears in my eyes! This was wonderful, exactly what the story needed to end like. I loved your take on the other characters point of view, but I was a little disappointed when I found that there was no 'Luna' part. Still, it was brilliant!!!
Have fun and Happy Writing

~Hannah {one of the GryffindorGals}

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed the different perspectives. I know some people were disappointed that I left out Luna, which was mainly because we didn't hear much of her actions in the Final Battle. Not that our Luna isn't important, though =) Thanks again!

Reviewer: Badgers_R_Cool
Date: 01/28/08 12:57
Chapter: Chapter 1

awsome story. i really think your a good writer you just have to stick to it!

Reviewer: Dissendio
Date: 12/05/07 8:13
Chapter: Chapter 1

I loved it! Though I thought that you would do something from Luna's POV. You managed to put all the emotians down very well. Brilliant work!

Author's Response: thank you very much! to be honest, I didn't even consider putting Luna in there. We didn't hear much about her during the Final Battle, except when she was battling Bellatrix with the other 2 girls. thanks for the review!

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 10/16/07 15:35
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow. that was amazing! you luike, did the whole chapter from all the different viewpoints in all the right places. Awesome! I can see why they chose it for the challenge X11

Author's Response: thank you so much! i was hoping to achieve that effect. thanks for the review =)

Reviewer: Simply Being
Date: 10/10/07 15:59
Chapter: Chapter 1

Perfect! Absolutely perfect. The different perspectives are fabulous, and very creative. The way you write flows so naturally...I love it! How you shifted into different perspectives so seamlessly was great...and ending with Harry was fantastic (never saw it coming!). My one critique is that it would have been nice if there was a great variation in the writing styles when you switched perspectives (so that each character has its own unique perspective/writing style).

Great work! Keep writing :-)

Author's Response: thank you so much! reviews like yours are very helpful. glad you enjoyed it =]

Reviewer: immortal_evil
Date: 09/24/07 16:24
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow, this was great. Wonderful idea, and so well put together. Bravo!

Reviewer: snpdrgn
Date: 09/14/07 11:15
Chapter: Chapter 1

Good story to fill in the blanks. Very believable!

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 09/13/07 17:41
Chapter: Chapter 1

Great story!

Reviewer: sam_1034_lily
Date: 09/12/07 17:25
Chapter: Chapter 1

i luved it

Reviewer: cjbaggins
Date: 09/11/07 21:58
Chapter: Chapter 1

I enjoyed this. At times when reading it I even felt that tiny thrill of excitement in my gut that I had when reading DH. I also loved Ron's thought about, 'me, being a git ... me, being a git'. Made me laugh aloud!
Well done.

Author's Response: thanks for the review! i love to hear that =]

Reviewer: Phoenix13
Date: 09/11/07 20:43
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow. This is a great story, and displays the characters' emotions very vividly. Keep writing!

Author's Response: thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RonandMioneForever
Date: 09/11/07 20:20
Chapter: Chapter 1

=D Terrific. Extremely well written. I did miss Mrs. Weasley's first line to Bellatrix though. Off to faves...=)

Author's Response: ah, i know. i wanted to put that quote in there (for it most definitely is one of the most amazing HP quotes ever devised) but i decided that i didn't want to take TOO many quotes of Jo's. thanks for the review!

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 09/11/07 19:51
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was the best fic I've read in a long while. What an amazing job you've done. You mace me laugh, cry and hut at the same time and it's been a while( 21 july 2007 ( since anyones been able to do that. Thank you so much for writing this.=Sammy

Author's Response: thanks so much for the review! i love hearing that - i'm glad that you enjoyed it so much!

Reviewer: Jazzbones
Date: 09/11/07 19:03
Chapter: Chapter 1

Great conjecture on the feelings running thru everyone's heads. I love how you portrayed everyone. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 09/11/07 17:31
Chapter: Chapter 1

*sniff* good story!!

Author's Response: muchas gracias!

Reviewer: Heiress_of_Insanity_
Date: 09/11/07 17:29
Chapter: Chapter 1

Aw, that was so sweet! *dabs eyes* I was close to tears the entire time (probably because I still refuse to accept that he's dead...). I would have liked it if Luna'd been in there, so the 'Super Sextet' would have been completed, but I love it the way it is. 10/10!~


Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I hate making myself accept the fact that he's dead too =[

Reviewer: Wicked_Quill
Date: 09/11/07 17:18
Chapter: Chapter 1

good. I found the portrayal of the first four very realistic, but Harry's part seemed a bit redundant seeing as we all knew this part already. You write very well though. I enjoyed it!

Author's Response: yeah, I kind of battled with myself for a while trying to decide whether I should put Harry's part in or not... I eventually decided on it, but I can see why you thought it was kind of unnecessary. thanks for the review!

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