Reviews For Now I See
Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 09/23/07 10:13
Chapter: Now I See

This was a good poem, but I feel that it didn't flow very well. I liked the way you went through her emotions though. Good job overall. Sorry if this sounded mean, it wasn't meant to. I swear!

Author's Response: No problem. I just thought I'd give poetry a try... it isn't really my thing. But thanks for enjoying it! x x x

Reviewer: Wicked_Quill
Date: 09/14/07 16:51
Chapter: Now I See

awesome! I loved it!

Reviewer: fawkeshermione221
Date: 09/12/07 16:44
Chapter: Now I See

This is a great poem! It's so cute, but it really seems like what Hermione would be thinking as they FINALLY kissed. :) Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you! I can't get over the fact that they kissed!

Reviewer: Prongs92
Date: 09/12/07 16:42
Chapter: Now I See

Good poem! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks! I intend to write more in the future.

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