This was a good poem, but I feel that it didn't flow very well. I liked the way you went through her emotions though. Good job overall. Sorry if this sounded mean, it wasn't meant to. I swear!
Author's Response: No problem. I just thought I'd give poetry a try... it isn't really my thing. But thanks for enjoying it! x x x
awesome! I loved it!
This is a great poem! It's so cute, but it really seems like what Hermione would be thinking as they FINALLY kissed. :) Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you! I can't get over the fact that they kissed!
Good poem! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks! I intend to write more in the future.