Ha Ha. poor Lucious. NOT. oh well at least every one is still alive.
Great story. Keep it coming.
I like how Dumbledore just manages to show up at the right moment, every time, it's like he's a producer yelling cut. I'm annoyed at Snape for being a death eater, but I'm still glad he threw a potion over Malfoy. By my calculations there aren't many more chapters to go, such a shame as I'm really enjoying this fic.
aha go sevvy! Shame you didn't write in something about Bella cackling about Lucius' nakedness. :P
I love that you have been updateing so regularly. I really like this story. Thanks
Thanks for updating. This fic is really gripping. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: It should be posted before the weekend is over. Thanks for reviewing!!
poor, poor Snape. Did you have the whole story planned out before DH or are you accommodating for the circumstances revealed in the book?
Author's Response: The story, believe it or not, was actually planned out from the beginning! It's mostly DH compliant with a few tangents here and there. I just got lucky in guessing that Snape had a thing for Lily. =) Thanks for the review!!
Eek! I guess that's one way for Severus to find out...
I feel bad for him though.
If only because I know what he becomes. :[
Really really great chapter though!
I loved the "and don't you ever think you aren't worth it"
Keep up the marvelous work! :D
ooo his conscience is trying to tll him something.
ooo his conscience is trying to tll him something.
STrange is thi smay sound, I'm rather, er, fond of Snape.Don't get me wrong- I like his charchter, not his personality. I just think he's interesting, from a motive perspective as well as a good/evil one. Ohmigoodness, Remus- he just may have to magically not be a fictional charcter, because its wierd to fangirl fictional charcters. But we all do anyway.
Good chapter! A bit short for my taste though, Overall nice job!!
Thank you for the updates. It seems that spring has stiffled so many authors that updates are few. I appreciate your keeping up!
What an absolutely fantastic fic! I've read what is available here in two days and can't wait for the next chapter. I can't believe there are only fifty three chapters, that means there aren't many to go. You've really arranged everything so weel, all of the characters are brilliantly written and 3D, and even if not all of the events follow canon, you've woven them together so well it hardly matters. Please update again soon, hopefully I'll get the update email if I put this fic on my favourites. In the mean time I'm off to read some more of your fab work..
oh, so much fluff. i feel all arm and fuzzy.. and worried, because I am well aware that from here on in things only get worse. I like how you have Peter spying on the Potters from early on
Author's Response: It is hard to write the story of the Marauders because without some MAJOR alternate universe-ing, it ends up very sad. Don't worry, this will be no exception! But I hope it will at least be cathartic for you! Thanks for reading.
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I wish I didn't know it was going to turn sad. :[
Aww!=D
It may not be big, or anything, but...That wedding has to be the best one I've ever read! XD
So..perfect!
Wow, are they really only 18?!:0
That's pretty young!
I love the way that you tie in your story to the real HP books- the photo bit was very clever. This is a really great story- I can't wait for the next chapter!
I love how you worked that picture in to the story. Good writing.
Yay!! They finally got married! I really wish something horrible would happen to Peter, It would be no less than he deserves! Wonderful chapter :-)
