Reviewer: lunarox14
Date: 06/04/08 15:45
Chapter: The Baby

Oh! That's so sweet! Now I have a really bad feeling something is going to happen to Anne! I cannot wait for the next chapter! It's the last one, right?

Author's Response: Three more, actually. Assuming I've counted right. Glad you like it, and you'll just have to wait and see what happens! Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: claymor
Date: 06/04/08 15:11
Chapter: The Baby

very *sniff*! This is very well written and it is so hard knowing what is coming...sniff indeed.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 06/04/08 12:59
Chapter: The Baby

Sniff indeed. What a wonderful chapter. And even Voldemorts appearance didn't squash the lovely feeling of the rest this time. I loved Anne telling Sirius that they'd have a baby when he stopped being one. Seems like the sort of thing Hermione might say to Ron. I'm guessing that James and Lily were discussing the prophecy with Dumbledore while the others watched Harry? Oh, and I loved Remus' 'Oh no' when Sirius named Harry the first in a new generation of marauders. Oh i do love this fic.

Reviewer: weasleytwinsfans
Date: 06/03/08 21:09
Chapter: Attack!

aahh, whats going to happen! I can't wait to find out how this ends!

Reviewer: weasleytwinsfans
Date: 06/03/08 21:06
Chapter: The One She Kissed, Once

aww....I really loved that chapter...the affection between Anne and Sirius was so sweet.

Reviewer: cat and otter
Date: 06/01/08 5:56
Chapter: Attack!

great work, I really love this. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Marauders Girl
Date: 05/30/08 16:51
Chapter: Attack!

I wish I knew Seren could keep them all there forever, without stupid Peter.
I don't wanttt them to die!

Reviewer: Vira
Date: 05/30/08 10:44
Chapter: Attack!

WOW! great chapter!!!!!!


Reviewer: CowGirlHPFan
Date: 05/29/08 17:09
Chapter: Attack!

YES an UPDATE!!!! Nice!!!

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/29/08 12:48
Chapter: Attack!

As soon as i read the chapter title i got a feeling of dread. And you truly didn't disappoint. This was so scarey, I felt the panick through your words as Sirius warned them. Isn't it odd that despite his distance from the group, despite his absence at their narrow wscape, they still didn't suspect Pettigrew? I guess if he were attacked he could just become a rat and hide until it was safe. Anyway, in DH when Ron was splinched Hermione said there were spells that could put him completely right but she didn't know enough to do them safely, was that the case here? Was there nobody qualified to perform a splinch reversal charm? That is another example of how desperate things had become, having home healed injuries as opposed to consulting professionals because there are that many casualties. You've really got a talent for projecting feeling through what you've writeen.

Author's Response: Anne's dad sort of knew what he was doing, so he and Anne's brother took care of it as best they could. As always, thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: claymor
Date: 05/29/08 12:29
Chapter: Attack!

ooooohhh the suspense...Peter is such a rat! I wish that the story ended with him getting what was coming to him at the hands of the Marauders!

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 05/29/08 11:31
Chapter: Attack!

Good thing they didn't tell Peter! He's being a bit obvious with the whole I'm fine because I'm not in danger thing. Although it probably only appears that way to outsiders because we know his motives.

Author's Response: It would be almost impossible to suspect someone so close to you of doing something so treacherous, I think. They're blind because they're focused on other people, like Slytherin Anne, instead of suspecting Peter. Thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/28/08 12:39
Chapter: The One She Kissed, Once

This chapter filled me with a sort of impending doom. I mean the war is coming closer on all sides. And i felt so bad for Sisius, and then i felt so glad that he's got Anne to share his grief. I like the way you got Harry his name, I think people always underestimate how hard it is to name somebody, I mean they're stuck with whatever you give them for the rest of their lives. I love the way you've written the closeness between the characters, it provides comfort when I'm reading about the awful events, at least they've got one another.

Author's Response: That's exactly the tone I was going for. I mean, I can't lie and say the story ends in all flowers and sprinkles because everyone knows what happens! But I wanted to make this a very character-centered story, and that's why I've focused so much on everyone's relationships. Thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: peekaboo317
Date: 05/27/08 10:59
Chapter: The One She Kissed, Once

No! Way to ruin my day. Poor Regulus. Ease up on Snape, too please. I love him.

Reviewer: lunarox14
Date: 05/26/08 20:32
Chapter: The One She Kissed, Once

AW! That's os sad!

Reviewer: KDTheRavenclaw
Date: 05/25/08 21:50
Chapter: The One She Kissed, Once

Awww, so sweet. Sirius and Anne are a great couple. Anne has got to be one of my favorite original characters.

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 05/25/08 20:56
Chapter: The One She Kissed, Once

Poor Sirius! I'm so glad he has Anne there to comfort him. Do they ever end up getting married? I can't bear to think even more bad things happen to him than already do in the books. He's going to lose his best friends and his freedom soon too.

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 05/25/08 20:18
Chapter: Lily's Pregnant

I'm going to be so sad when this ends! I really enjoy it. What's going to happen to Anne? I can't wait to find out, but at the same time I'm afraid it might be sad.

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 05/25/08 19:08
Chapter: A Spy In Our Midst

Yay for Severus! That'll probably just get him in trouble though. Does Dumbledore know it's Peter who is the spy? I always kind of thought that he did.

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 05/25/08 18:25
Chapter: Lily Potter

Ah Snape and his melodrama. That's kind of a hard way to find out his Lily Evans has become Lily Potter.

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