Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 06/23/08 15:28
Chapter: The End of an Era

I really love this story it's great. And as much as i want everything to end happily i know it can't so i might as well ead ahead and enjoy it while it lasts.

Reviewer: Sirius_Forever_94
Date: 06/23/08 0:27
Chapter: Epilogue

O *tear tear sniffle sniffle*! Marvelous story kudos to you!!!

Reviewer: padfootsluver500
Date: 06/22/08 19:31
Chapter: Epilogue

thats a really good ending :) :)
thx so much... keep writing other stuff!!!

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 06/20/08 16:46
Chapter: Epilogue

OMG I can't believe it's over! This is such a wonderful story!

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 06/20/08 16:24
Chapter: The Last Chapter

That chapter was wonderful. Thank you for making up for the last one. Still very sad though. Poor Sirius!

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 06/20/08 16:15
Chapter: The Same Tuxedo

That was the saddest chapter. I'm crying.

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 06/20/08 16:07
Chapter: Severus Wants Out

Look what he did! He went and got his cousin killed!

Reviewer: cyt_potter
Date: 06/20/08 9:50
Chapter: Lupin's Fib

Oh my, I just couldn't let this chapter go by with out leaving a review! *still chuckling* I loved this chapter! When Michael said Remus was gay! Well that was absolutely priceless! And his sputtered reply was just as good! That sure lightened my day! Great work! And I love your story too!

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 06/20/08 1:21
Chapter: Us Against the World

you know it's chaperts like this that really make me wish that snape had a happier story. It really makes me hate james sometimes but i love him too much for that o ever happen. Still i feel bad for snape. Anne rocks btw she is a fantastic character. I love this story

Reviewer: Marauders Girl
Date: 06/19/08 17:34
Chapter: Epilogue

Awww. I just started crying. :[
This was an amazing story, I truly enjoyed it. I'm sad that it's over. It was fantastic though. Really wonderful. You are a terrific writer. I'll miss it!

Reviewer: melodie
Date: 06/19/08 8:04
Chapter: Epilogue

i've never written a review before, so let's start!
just, let me present myself. My name's Mélodie, I'm 21, and french. it's been a month and half that I'm on internship (I'm not sure about the "on"), before I enter my last year of urban planning master. So let's say i've got my office, my shedule and nerve cell to think about how much space-saving a residential neighborhood can be. It's about sustainable developpement and all... So, as much as I'm intersted in that, I'm somewhat dizzy and bored after several hours, and I had to find a way out. Here comes mugglenet. I'm a huge fan of harry potter, no kidding, I'm absolutely mad about him, and, I'm like the only one I know beeing that much (I'm not sure this does make sense..). I've read french, english (It's far more funnier) about ten times or more each, I've seen films even in deutch, I put them for background noise whenever I cook, do the housework, or home alone, and it's almost sad to say it, I know them by heart... It drives my man crazy! I told you all this because I wanted to thank you, first for writting stories I enjoy very much, and also because It is a real relief to know that I am not the only one, by my age furthermore. Actually I've never been attracted to fan fictions before, because to me, JKR is the one and only, but it was before I consider that a lot of parts in her universe are let to ourimagination, so it's not like someone is rewritting the original history. And you do it great! you make me laugh (quietly, everyone ears one-another at my office), and even strip off a tear! furthermore, after having read a lot of stories, and stumble upon some not very... good, let's say, I've gone check your favorite stories, and I was pleased to see that we like the same (a littlemoretime is great). So this is how I came to send you a message, a little long, I'm sorry.
I hope that my english is understadable. I can widely hear and read it, fut it's been since a couple of years that I didn't have to write any essay...
I also hope it didn't bother you to read me

Author's Response: Love long reviews! And your English was certainly understandable. Being a little bit multilingual myself (no French, however... unless you figure counting to ten is speaking French), I certainly understand the trouble with writing essays. And speaking for that matter. Give me something to read or hear, and I'm fine!

I understand about the fan fiction thing. Sometimes it's hit or miss, but I love finding someone out there who can really put a different spin on the universe we all love. Thanks so much for the great review!

Reviewer: Sirius_Forever_94
Date: 06/19/08 2:41
Chapter: James and Lily

O that I love you moment was a tear jerker! So sweet!

Reviewer: Sirius_Forever_94
Date: 06/19/08 1:53
Chapter: The Biggest Prank

Ok in almost all the fics I've read about the Marauders this happens- Snape discovers Remis is a werewolf, Sirius leads him to Remus, and James saves him. But when is this mentioned in the actually Harry Potter books? Is it ever mentioned? As the author could you please help me out here??

Reviewer: Sirius_Forever_94
Date: 06/19/08 1:39
Chapter: Giddy, Trumphant, and Terrified

Ooo gettin' steamy hahaha. "Looking thoroughly snogged" that one cracked me up! Love the story it's being added to me faves!! :D

Reviewer: inluvwid_pdft
Date: 06/18/08 22:41
Chapter: Prologue - A Look Back In Time

I loved it.
This is the first time I'm reviewing, but I've read the whole story.
Very touching,especially the epilouge!

Reviewer: cat and otter
Date: 06/18/08 10:22
Chapter: Epilogue

Noooooo! It's over! But a lovely ending. Thank you SO much for writing this. It's made me laugh and cry, the description was vivid, the storyline tied in well with the actual books. Seriously, if J.K. Rowling had written a book about the Marauders, it would probably have been like this. Well done, and thank you! I really enjoyed reading it.

Reviewer: cat and otter
Date: 06/18/08 10:18
Chapter: The Last Chapter

Oh that's so SAD! I'm crying. No joke. It was so beautiful... thanks for updating.

Reviewer: jameslily11
Date: 06/18/08 8:01
Chapter: Epilogue

best marauder era story ive read so far - and ive read a lot! you made everything fit! everything we know about the marauder era from the books;you put into the story, and it all fits! loved the O/C - i cried when she died because of poor Sirius. i have to admit you have incredible story-telling ability - i think you should write somehing of your own. :)

Reviewer: ringobeatlesfan4
Date: 06/17/08 19:29
Chapter: Epilogue

WOW!!!!!!!!!!! This story is AWESOME! I love how Harry was able to meet someone who knew Sirius, Anne, James, and Lily! This has abundant usage of completely deserved exclamation marks!!!!!!!!!! I absolutely love the ending. It was incredible, I really hope you write more of this, like maybe a sequel????????? Like, not as long as this, but a few chapters explaining Anne Warlow II's time at Hogwarts. Aha! I just reread this chapter, and I really liked the:

It hit him suddenly. After seeing that memory, Hermione had delved into research.
^^This was really cool. Its about 20 years later, but he still remembers that! I started reading this when there were about 12 chapters posted, and now its up to 55. I'm almost in tears now because it was so good, but it ended. I never cry with stories on here! But this truly was wonderful. I really think you'll make a great professional author some day. Sirius has always been my favorite of the Marauders, and I'm incredibly glad that he has sort of an untold story that authors can play around with, and this could be perfectly canon. What I like about the Marauder era is that Jo left so much open. She only told us about the werewolf prank on Snape, that James/Lily was in 7th year, and what happened in the few days before Halloween 1981. There is so much untold story on James, Lily, Sirius, Remus, and any of their friends that is left to play around with. I think that this is the perfect Marauder era fic. It has all the great makings of a real, original work. I cannot put into words how great an author you are, or how great this story is. Wonderful job! {BeccA}

Reviewer: aussigirl
Date: 06/17/08 17:58
Chapter: Epilogue

great ending!

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