Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/16/09 1:01
Chapter: Apologies

Progressing in an interesting fashion

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/16/09 0:37
Chapter: Giddy, Trumphant, and Terrified

Definitely different

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/16/09 0:27
Chapter: The Hogwarts Broom

Hmmmmnnnn again

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/16/09 0:21
Chapter: The Date


Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/16/09 0:17
Chapter: He Asks Her Out

This is great

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/16/09 0:12
Chapter: After the Holidays

Definiitely AU

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/16/09 0:06
Chapter: Cat Got Your Tongue?

Your version is refreshing and fun. The Maraudr's aftraid of a Slytherin and a Slytherin girl at that! They've always been the brightest two in their class, except for Lily in Potions, and it's fun to see them as entirely different people.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/15/09 23:59
Chapter: The Dog and the Stag

I like the way you wrote that.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/15/09 23:52
Chapter: Getting a Date

Yes, this is definitely an AU Marauder fic. It is fun though.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/15/09 23:41
Chapter: Shifting Loyalty

I like your story, it's nothing I would ever have imagined.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/15/09 23:35
Chapter: Slytherin Quidditch Team

Hope we get to see a Quidditch match

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/15/09 23:30
Chapter: A Nice Smile

You do have a rather interesting universe. It's nothing at all like JKR's, but that's what fanfiction is supposed to be, a takeoff from the original, not a replica.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/15/09 23:23
Chapter: Werewolf

As I had said before, they found out in 2nd year, and that's what decided them to become Animagus' which they achieved in 5th year. Since I'm reading this much later than most, you've probably already been told this.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/15/09 23:16
Chapter: Friends and Girls

I'm beginning to like the idea of your non-canon stuff. It's really fun and funny to see the Marauder's afraid of a Slytherin girl, and Snape not nearly as nasty as he is usually portrayed. You do good work.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/15/09 23:08
Chapter: Prefects

So some things are way not canon, like the Marauder's finding out about Remus in 2nd year. Or are they not going to become Mssrs. Mooney, Padfoot, Prongs and Wormtail of the Marauder's Map? And I still like Anne. Snape doesn't fit the imagine of him I had at school in the least.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/15/09 23:00
Chapter: Green Eyed Girl

Well, that answered my Evans/Snape question. They hadn't met before school in your story. I like Anne, and she is very definitely Slytherin material. Hopefully we will still find out when the other Marauder's discovered Remus' "furry little problem"

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/15/09 22:52
Chapter: Tongue-Teasing

Definitely fun. Has Snape met Lily before Hogwart's in your story? It's kind of hard to figure out .

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/15/09 22:44
Chapter: The Second Prank

They do like playing with fire, James and Sirius, don't they. I just hope they don't get badly burnt

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/15/09 21:52
Chapter: Attention

This is fun. I'm betting it only takes them a few months to figure out there's a werewolf in their midst. And Lily and James are starting out as advertised.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/15/09 21:46
Chapter: The First Prank

The young lady definitely belongs in Slytherin. But I must admit, I thought Snape knew a lot of hexes when he started at Hogwarts. Maybe she teaches him?

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