Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/16/09 20:09
Chapter: The Last Chapter

Your ending was superb.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/16/09 20:03
Chapter: The Same Tuxedo

But it was necessary to your story. The "real" reason could be many things depending on which FF you read. There's another reason in the HP series.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/16/09 19:56
Chapter: Severus Wants Out

I knew something like this was going to happen. Sirius is not going to be a happy camper. Severus isn't going to feel much better.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/16/09 19:49
Chapter: The Baby

I'm with Sirius. Remus is not an animal.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/16/09 19:31
Chapter: Attack!

They should have more suspicious of Peter is all I can say. I'm glad Anne's father has some sense.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/16/09 19:26
Chapter: The One She Kissed, Once

I'm glad Sirius was able to mourn his brother's death with his friends.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/16/09 19:19
Chapter: Lily's Pregnant

Good flow to the story. Even when you know what will ultimately happen it's enlightening to read the path that leads to it, especially since there that path was not part of the HP series, only an outline.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/16/09 19:11
Chapter: A Spy In Our Midst

This is getting to be more fun.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/16/09 17:14
Chapter: That Picture Harry Saw

Very nice. And Peter, as we saw in the last chapter, is now firmly under Voldemort's umbrella.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/16/09 17:09
Chapter: Occlumency

Interesting and more interesting.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/16/09 17:05
Chapter: The First Defiance

This is definitely getting to be interesting.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/16/09 17:00
Chapter: The Order of the Phoenix

Good chapter

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/16/09 16:55
Chapter: The End of an Era

As much as I like happy endings, I know it didn't end happily and will gladly plow on ahead.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/16/09 16:49
Chapter: He Forgets Her

Ah, I was correct in thinking she'd manage to get out of Stanley's clutches. I'm sure, however, that revenge will be in his mind and I don't think I'm going to like what happens.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/16/09 16:23
Chapter: Seventh Year

I certainly hope Siriuse and James are able to rescue her, but I'm not holding my breath on the prospect. I have the feeling Snape may get part of his wish, but I also think Anne will do something no one expects.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/16/09 16:02
Chapter: Dark News

Too bad Severus didn't let his cousin's words have more effect on him. But then, it would have been a totally different story.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/16/09 15:49
Chapter: James and Lily

This is so much fun. I love the angle that Sirius is not the main Cassanova, and that Lily and James are together earlier than is mentioned in the HP series. This is a good adventure and not a teenage angst love story.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/16/09 14:00
Chapter: Halloween . . . with Severus?

Perfect mix.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/16/09 13:53
Chapter: Enough About My Cousin

Not bad at all.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/16/09 13:41
Chapter: No Marks

I do like your approach. It's entertaining without all bad teenage romance stuff. Being a much older reader I appreciate how you've written your story.

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