its the most wonderful time of the year!!! i cant wiat for action!!!
i love the Marauders they are so loyal!
stupid brian stanley lol
it was a little fluffy but sooo sweet!!!
awwwww how sweet, i hope we learn more about the Wallow history soon!
that was a nice chapter, but i have to admit my only critism would be that it was just a very very small tad fluffy...aww now i feel bad! it really was good i promise
yes finally!!! when i watch shows, i always like it when the characters are older, and i expect it will be the same with MNFF too : D
i love reading author's notes at the end!! i love to know what the author thinks...also i heart this chapter (i know i heart a lot of things!)
i heart cliffhangers!!!
this was a really short chapter, but i liked it anyways, anne walow is deffiently my favorite character so far! and i cant wait to read about the note from rodulphus...
haha i think its a little young to get into like dating in hogwarts, which is probably why ur building the characters up slow...ly... i cant wait to read the next chapter ;)
sigh....i wish peter never exsited, well then again, we wouldnt really have any books if he didnt! im still confused about the older characters, but i think im getting used to it a little bit
hmm...its a little hard to keep up with all the characters, but i'll get it soon enough, its probably because i just started...and once a gain i love the descriptions of the characters!
this was a really good chapter! the only thing i didnt understand was why First years was capatilized. it had an awesome plot and the descriptions were amazinnnn!
lol, i know this chapter shouldn't be funny, but i can just see harry "snape and my MOTHER???" lol, this is getting off to a really good start!
I absolutely loved the ending to this chapter. I had tears in my eyes. My fav character is Remus and I love how his years at Hogwarts gave him such brilliant friends. Your portrayal of Peter is great too.
I actually just signed up to write you this review, because I really wanted to tell you how much I loved reading your story. You really managed to get the Harry-Potter-Feeling, but you made it even more interesting with the sexual and other relationship issues. I also loved the ending. Of course it couldn't be a complete happy ending, but what awaits Sirius behind the veil made me very happy and hopeful for him.
The only thing I would maybe criticize is how James and Lily got together. I think it would have taken her much more than getting that "load" of Severus off her shoulders before she stops loathing James and "gets over herself". Maybe it would have been better to insert one or two chapters that show James carefully starting to flirt with her again etc before she kisses him. Then again, noone knows what was in these letters... ;)
I really loved reading this. It made me cry a lot when Anne died, and I very rarely cried even when reading the Harry Potter series. Awesome job.
I just finished reading this story this morning (kept me awak till 6 o'clock in the morning). I must say that I greatly admire this work you have created. not only does it have a great plot, great characters (both original and new ones), but also holds very true to the emotions and feelings in the real HP books, albeit with a little more romance and sex, but that just adds to the fun. I really couldn't stop reading it when I had started and when I finally got to the last chapter and the epilogue I just could not help my self, I had to cry because your words were so well written and the emotions touched so deep.
I hope to read more or ou stories in the future - so please keep writing.
best wishes and thanks
Absolutely love your epilogue. Full circle as the saying goes.