Reviewer: Magic Marauder
Date: 03/22/09 8:44
Chapter: Cat Got Your Tongue?

its the most wonderful time of the year!!! i cant wiat for action!!!

Reviewer: Magic Marauder
Date: 03/21/09 13:07
Chapter: The Dog and the Stag

i love the Marauders they are so loyal!

Reviewer: Magic Marauder
Date: 03/21/09 12:58
Chapter: Getting a Date

stupid brian stanley lol

Reviewer: Magic Marauder
Date: 03/21/09 9:19
Chapter: A Nice Smile

lily's reaction

Reviewer: Magic Marauder
Date: 03/21/09 9:15
Chapter: Werewolf

it was a little fluffy but sooo sweet!!!

Reviewer: Magic Marauder
Date: 03/15/09 7:18
Chapter: Friends and Girls

awwwww how sweet, i hope we learn more about the Wallow history soon!

Reviewer: Magic Marauder
Date: 03/15/09 7:13
Chapter: Prefects

that was a nice chapter, but i have to admit my only critism would be that it was just a very very small tad fluffy...aww now i feel bad! it really was good i promise

Reviewer: Magic Marauder
Date: 03/13/09 14:43
Chapter: Green Eyed Girl

yes finally!!! when i watch shows, i always like it when the characters are older, and i expect it will be the same with MNFF too : D

Reviewer: Magic Marauder
Date: 03/13/09 14:37
Chapter: Tongue-Teasing

i love reading author's notes at the end!! i love to know what the author thinks...also i heart this chapter (i know i heart a lot of things!)

Reviewer: Magic Marauder
Date: 03/13/09 14:33
Chapter: The Second Prank

i heart cliffhangers!!!

Reviewer: Magic Marauder
Date: 03/12/09 17:26
Chapter: Attention

this was a really short chapter, but i liked it anyways, anne walow is deffiently my favorite character so far! and i cant wait to read about the note from rodulphus...

Reviewer: Magic Marauder
Date: 03/12/09 17:22
Chapter: The First Prank

haha i think its a little young to get into like dating in hogwarts, which is probably why ur building the characters up i cant wait to read the next chapter ;)

Reviewer: Magic Marauder
Date: 03/12/09 17:17
Chapter: Marauders

sigh....i wish peter never exsited, well then again, we wouldnt really have any books if he didnt! im still confused about the older characters, but i think im getting used to it a little bit

Reviewer: Magic Marauder
Date: 03/12/09 17:11
Chapter: First Day of School

hmm...its a little hard to keep up with all the characters, but i'll get it soon enough, its probably because i just started...and once a gain i love the descriptions of the characters!

Reviewer: Magic Marauder
Date: 03/12/09 17:06
Chapter: The Sorting Hat's Surprises

this was a really good chapter! the only thing i didnt understand was why First years was capatilized. it had an awesome plot and the descriptions were amazinnnn!

Reviewer: Magic Marauder
Date: 03/12/09 17:00
Chapter: Prologue - A Look Back In Time

lol, i know this chapter shouldn't be funny, but i can just see harry "snape and my MOTHER???" lol, this is getting off to a really good start!

Reviewer: Kiwi_Chick
Date: 03/09/09 3:26
Chapter: Werewolf

I absolutely loved the ending to this chapter. I had tears in my eyes. My fav character is Remus and I love how his years at Hogwarts gave him such brilliant friends. Your portrayal of Peter is great too.

Reviewer: Karaley Dargen
Date: 03/08/09 15:15
Chapter: Epilogue

I actually just signed up to write you this review, because I really wanted to tell you how much I loved reading your story. You really managed to get the Harry-Potter-Feeling, but you made it even more interesting with the sexual and other relationship issues. I also loved the ending. Of course it couldn't be a complete happy ending, but what awaits Sirius behind the veil made me very happy and hopeful for him.
The only thing I would maybe criticize is how James and Lily got together. I think it would have taken her much more than getting that "load" of Severus off her shoulders before she stops loathing James and "gets over herself". Maybe it would have been better to insert one or two chapters that show James carefully starting to flirt with her again etc before she kisses him. Then again, noone knows what was in these letters... ;)

I really loved reading this. It made me cry a lot when Anne died, and I very rarely cried even when reading the Harry Potter series. Awesome job.

Reviewer: NinjaNina
Date: 01/18/09 17:05
Chapter: Prologue - A Look Back In Time

Dear Soap
I just finished reading this story this morning (kept me awak till 6 o'clock in the morning). I must say that I greatly admire this work you have created. not only does it have a great plot, great characters (both original and new ones), but also holds very true to the emotions and feelings in the real HP books, albeit with a little more romance and sex, but that just adds to the fun. I really couldn't stop reading it when I had started and when I finally got to the last chapter and the epilogue I just could not help my self, I had to cry because your words were so well written and the emotions touched so deep.
I hope to read more or ou stories in the future - so please keep writing.
best wishes and thanks

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 01/16/09 20:11
Chapter: Epilogue

Absolutely love your epilogue. Full circle as the saying goes.

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