Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/21/12 16:53
Chapter: Epilogue

I really liked this ending. It's such a strange feeling to bump into people you used to know or who knew people you used to know. I'm sure Harry and Jonathan had a lot of stories to share. Thanks for writing this story. I really enjoyed reading it.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/21/12 16:43
Chapter: The Last Chapter

I really liked this last chapter. It gave a quick review of Sirius' last years and how heartbreaking they were. It was nice to think of them all reunited beyond the veil. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/21/12 16:36
Chapter: The Same Tuxedo

That was fairly brave of Severus to go to Sirius and tell him that Anne had died. It would've been better if Severus had approached Dumbledore about getting out. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/21/12 16:21
Chapter: Severus Wants Out

That was unfortunate to say the least. If Anne died, she probably died with her last thought being that Severus had tricked her. You should always tell someone where you're going. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 06/26/12 19:39
Chapter: The Baby

Sniff, indeed. Are you trying to say that Severus might not have known that he was causing problems for Lily when he related the prophecy? I suppose things would've been a lot different if he had known the Potters were expecting a baby. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 06/26/12 18:04
Chapter: Attack!

Thankfully someone had some sense and didn't tell Peter where everyone was. It's funny how fate works out like that at times. I guess it's a while yet until Peter really does some damage. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 06/04/12 16:50
Chapter: The One She Kissed, Once

And still, no one suspects Peter of being a traitor. Sometimes that sort of thing is hard to see even when it's right in front of you. It's too bad Sirius dies before finding out the good things his brother actually did. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 06/04/12 16:31
Chapter: Lily's Pregnant

I wonder if they're going to figure out if it's Peter who's giving away all of the secrets. It's sad to think what people will do for power. I'll have to figure out which of your stories to read next. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 06/01/12 17:48
Chapter: A Spy In Our Midst

I couldn't figure out who Bella's brother-in-law was. I forgot about Rabastan:D Oh no, I was worried that Severus' concoction was going to mess up Lucius' hair:D Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 06/01/12 17:31
Chapter: Lily Potter

I was afraid there for a minute that they had captured someone from the Order. I suppose that will happen before too long. I started thinking that it's impossible to make pasta that tastes inedible but then I remembered my first experience making homemade spaghetti sauce. I spent a lot of time on it but could only eat a couple of bites in the end:D Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 06/01/12 16:38
Chapter: That Picture Harry Saw

I don't think I could have been as brave as the people in the Order. It's sad to think that Peter was so desperate for attention or power that he had to betray his best friends. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 06/01/12 16:11
Chapter: Occlumency

Once again, you have to feel bad for Severus. I was so relieved when Sirius showed up. I can easily see that we have to start being wary of Peter. He really turned into a rat. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 06/01/12 16:01
Chapter: The First Defiance

This is getting scary. Order members are definitely in danger. Anne was probably right to worry about Sirius. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/31/12 22:50
Chapter: The Order of the Phoenix

I loved that last line. It was the perfect thing to say. I'd almost forgotten that Anne was once under Lucius' protection. We know what happened to other members of the Order but I've very curious as to how people like Anne and her father are going to fare. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/31/12 22:22
Chapter: The End of an Era

That was a sad scene between Severus and Anne but someone had to tell him and actually point out what he had lost. There's not much more to say when someone has lost everything. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/31/12 22:03
Chapter: He Forgets Her

That certainly showed the differences between Slytherins and Gryffindors. It's probably good that Anne was kind of forgotten by the Slytherins as rumors of Severus' power and knowledge grew. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/31/12 19:24
Chapter: Seventh Year

This is getting interesting. What are they going to do to get Anne to take the Dark Mark? Sounds scary. Interesting when James made the comment about loyalty when you consider what Peter eventually did. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/31/12 19:15
Chapter: Two Valentine's Day Presents

I wonder if Lily and James have discovered the Room of Requirement. Valentines Day is a great holiday for girls I think. I guess the guys do get something out of it though:D Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/31/12 18:59
Chapter: Out All Night, or They Get On With It

I'm always surprised what little things you bring into the story--things that we all know but it's like they're being discovered for the first time, for example, the Room of Requirement. You seem to weave it so neatly into the story. You gave a lovely description of their lovemaking. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 05/31/12 16:51
Chapter: Joining the Ranks

I wonder if Sirius and Anne will ever "get on with it." I'm getting the feeling that something has to give before too long. I've always wondered why Narcissa didn't have a Dark Mark. Other female Death Eaters did. I find it odd that she was so close to the Death Eaters but never have the Mark. Great chapter.

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