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Name: LilyLuna13 (Signed) · Date: 08/04/11 8:56 · For: A Werewolf's Plight
So sweet . . . love this pairing! Great job :)

Name: tonkzie (Signed) · Date: 06/26/08 11:51 · For: A Werewolf's Plight
I loved that story now i can't stop grinning!!

Name: GinnyPotter808 (Signed) · Date: 06/18/08 21:41 · For: A Werewolf's Plight
OMG! That is exactly how I pictured Reamus and Tonks getting back together (although you putting in Ted and Andromeda was far more genius than I would've thought of). I absolutely loved it! It wasn't even that sappy, fluffy OOCness that I dislike very much. Great job!

Name: Chris_04 (Signed) · Date: 06/08/08 23:13 · For: A Werewolf's Plight
Wow. That's all I can say. That was a really excellent story! You really summed up Remus's charater well for me. Thanks for letting me enjoy reading this!! This is definitly one of my favorite fics ever.

Name: Cwiddy (Signed) · Date: 05/01/08 21:13 · For: A Werewolf's Plight
All I can say is Wow! This is very close to how I picture the first conversation after the row with Harry between Tonks and Remus. They are my favorite couple in the HP series...and I have to say that I was very upset that they died. You got their personalities and those of Tonk's parents down pat to how I picture them. This was very well written and really shows the feelings and emotions of all those involved very well!

Name: Haley Lupin (Signed) · Date: 03/23/08 14:23 · For: A Werewolf's Plight
This is a completely awesome story! You wouldn't BELIEVE how many times I've tried witing the aftermath of Remus vs. Harry but it always ended with Remus getting pissed off and trying to commit suicide...[I'm a very violent person...]

Name: dulcet_tones (Signed) · Date: 01/27/08 5:28 · For: A Werewolf's Plight
To start off with, I really liked this story, it's a wonderful glimpse into a moment of Remus life that I had wondered about.

You've done an excellent job at showing the range of motion Remus possibly went through on that night, from being mad at Harry in the beginning all the way to the end where he was elated at the chance to be a doting(sp?) father. I especially enjoyed the fight with Tonks and then his in-laws. Everything that was said was completely believable and I could just picture Remus and Tonks standing in front of me having it out.

You've done a wonderful job with characterizing all of the characters within this piece, not just Remus. I must admit it's refreshing to see him lose his cool, as everyone has the chance to do.

There was one part that had me scratching my head, but I think it's just the placement of the sentences and the way I read it.

I’d never forgive myself if I hurt either one of you, if I contaminated you. I could kill our child.”

I had to read that over a couple times for what was truly meant to sink in. The first read thru had me thinking 'Why would Remus want to kill his child?' Like I said though, it's just the way I read it surely.

Other than that, all I really have to say is 'Wow!'

~Stacy~ of the Gryff Review Crew

Name: Wolfie Jojo (Signed) · Date: 12/12/07 11:58 · For: A Werewolf's Plight
It's a one-shot epic! Oh, that's so sad, you've made me cry, I hope you feel ashamed. Or perhaps that was your evil plan all along... Only kidding. That was so good! I've always wondered what happened after Harry threw Remus out with his unkindness. Your version is very different to mine (which is for my eyes only), but I like yours more. It's happier, and a lot more likely. Love it! ^-^

Name: clumsywerewolf2438 (Signed) · Date: 12/01/07 16:57 · For: A Werewolf's Plight
Awww! That's so cute! I love it!

Name: shewolf2000 (Signed) · Date: 10/18/07 16:33 · For: A Werewolf's Plight
I loved it!
Although... I'm totally in love with Remus and Tonks, so I might be biased. But it was a cute story.

Name: DontCallMeNymphadora (Signed) · Date: 10/13/07 12:29 · For: A Werewolf's Plight
This is honestly one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. It is brilliant in every way, and I love at the end when Remus finally feels happy that he and Tonks are going to be parents.

Name: wolverine_rox (Signed) · Date: 10/08/07 13:08 · For: A Werewolf's Plight
WOW! cant wait to read more of your storys! :)

Name: ron_chaser (Signed) · Date: 09/26/07 22:48 · For: A Werewolf's Plight
Nice job! It had a great story line for the length. The way Harry was described as James, Sirius, and Lily all at once was great and how each of them would have reacted to Remus. The relationship between Tonks and Remus was also very realistic.

Name: I_LUV_MOONY (Signed) · Date: 09/24/07 20:11 · For: A Werewolf's Plight
That was so cute!

The beginning with Harry's quotes was excellent. You fit those in very well. Remus' thoughts on these were very believable, as well. Definitely a great job with the first initial reaction.

Tonks and Remus' discussion (the first one) was very good. These topics have obviously gotten a bit cliched, since everyone writes about their arguments, but you wrote them well. Ted interrupting was a nice twist to it.

Ted, Andromeda, and Remus' talk was really good. I had considered the possibility that they didn't like Remus (Tonks seems to be like one to go against her parents), but you gave good reasons to like him but act like they didn't. Does that make sense? :D

“Are we?” she asked in a voice of mock-surprise, from his shoulder. “Here I was, thinking the thing growing inside my stomach was the watermelon seed I swallowed at dinner last week!”

He laughed again, and then bent over so he was level with Tonks’s slightly swollen belly. “Hello!” he said to it, “I’m your Daddy!”

Now this is what I call the perfect Remus/Tonks moment. It's a got a bit of cute humor from each of them. I don't see Remus as the type to get entirely mushy-gushy like here, but I think he wasn't thinking when it finally hit him. Sorry I'm so confusing. :D

Well, great job. I can't wait to see what else you come up with. Best wishes! :D

Name: xxxmoonyxxx (Signed) · Date: 09/23/07 1:25 · For: A Werewolf's Plight
i love this story! i was so sad when they both died! they were my favorites! R-I-P

p.s. adding to favorites!

Elle xoxox

Name: xxxmoonyxxx (Signed) · Date: 09/23/07 1:24 · For: A Werewolf's Plight
i love this story! i was so sad when they both died! they were my favorites! R-I-P

Elle xoxox

Name: RonandMioneForever (Signed) · Date: 09/15/07 11:49 · For: A Werewolf's Plight
ah. so bittersweet. brilliant work!

Name: Jazzbones (Signed) · Date: 09/13/07 13:17 · For: A Werewolf's Plight
Good one. I like how you worked her parents into it.

Name: goGinny_84 (Signed) · Date: 09/12/07 22:02 · For: A Werewolf's Plight
This is so touching it made me cry. Well, I cried because of what happems to them, but that's besides the point. Good work!

Name: to_the_stage93 (Signed) · Date: 09/12/07 21:04 · For: A Werewolf's Plight
As a fellow Remus/Tonks fanfic writer, I must congradulate you on this! Good job! Kudos on a job well done with good charecterization!

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