Reviews For Teddy
Reviewer: Andromeda_Tonks
Date: 02/15/08 13:33
Chapter: Nothing Like Muggle Fairy Tales

I know I already reviewed this, but just thought I'd tell you I just spent ages looking for this to add it to my favorites ;)

Author's Response: Lol! Good to know that you now have it safely in your favorites!! ~Evie

Reviewer: crochet_kid_30
Date: 02/12/08 20:33
Chapter: Nothing Like Muggle Fairy Tales

the story is coming along great so far. the teacher fight brought in some new mystery to the story and i love the way teddy acts. he seems like your typical teen who is rebelling, but the way you write it makes it sound cooler. keep writing so i can keep reading!!!!

Author's Response: Will do!! :D

Reviewer: toothpastekisses
Date: 02/12/08 5:04
Chapter: Nothing Like Muggle Fairy Tales

This is great :)
Keep going, I really want to know what happens haha x

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: hpreader1
Date: 02/11/08 18:20
Chapter: Nothing Like Muggle Fairy Tales

Teddy is so much like Fred and George it's great!!! He also seems to be like Harry when it came to Umbridge only now Teddy is bothering Dermot. What's with Dermot and Allen anyway?! Alfie seems to have an attitude like Ron...

Author's Response: Yeah, Alfie is a little like Ron, although I'm actually basing him on a boy in my English class called Frankie. ;) rnrn~Evie

Reviewer: hpreader1
Date: 02/11/08 18:11
Chapter: The Injustice of it All

Ouch! It's Snape all over again!!! Poor Lupin. Is Rita Skeeter behind the rumors?

Reviewer: hpreader1
Date: 02/11/08 18:05
Chapter: Professor Dermot

Ok, loved Herbology, good to see Neville again. Professor Dermot is dead scary (ha-ha- dead). Oh! And love the comment about Peeves!

Reviewer: hpreader1
Date: 02/11/08 17:55
Chapter: The Sorting Ceremony

ahhh! The wonderful sorting hat! Don't know how you wrote the sorting hat song, I probably would have stolen some from the books but yours is completely original. Teddy already sees the prejudice...

Reviewer: hpreader1
Date: 02/11/08 17:50
Chapter: The Hogwarts Express

Hi Kevin, well another great chapter! Love the "Grusome Twosome".

Reviewer: hpreader1
Date: 02/11/08 17:31
Chapter: Prologue

This is so great! It kind of puts Harry's feelings in perspective.

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: Andromeda_Tonks
Date: 02/11/08 16:01
Chapter: Nothing Like Muggle Fairy Tales

Kevin doesn't look very dead to me - at least he's still writable on :). I love this story, write more!

Reviewer: A_Pink_lady
Date: 02/08/08 13:37
Chapter: Nothing Like Muggle Fairy Tales

*huggles Kevin and gives him chocolate* yay a new chapter! im still curious about 'Adrian' Dermot and now even more about Prof Allen.i really liked how you wrote Teddys point of view over werewolves, it was so great he didnt think his father was a monster, it figres from the upbringing he recieved etc. haha loved the bickering with Alfie and Eidith! Cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Glad to hear it! :D ~Evie

Reviewer: Her My Own EE
Date: 02/07/08 23:05
Chapter: Nothing Like Muggle Fairy Tales

Dearest Kevin,

This has been another wonderful chapter. Teddy's sense of freedom is a much needed thng for him.

I have some questions About the story timeline that I hope you can help me with. At one point Evie writes:
"September and August pass in a haze of mischief making ... As the first day of October rolls around, ... I find myself in my thirty-sixth detention with Dermot."
School starts September 1st, so I am unsure how August passed in a haze of mischief & detentions. Also, there are only 30 days in September I am unsure how Teddy is having his 37th detention on or around October 1st. Perhaps you could explain these feats to us (myself and other unofficial members of the Kevin fanclub)?

Author's Response: Kevin: That's another one of Evie's dumb blonde moments. ;) Although, on the detention count, I can see Dermot giving Teddy detentions in his free periods and lunch times, so it's entirely possible Dermot gave poor ol' Ted two detentions a day. However, I will give Evie a big kick for making such a stupid typo. ;) ~Evie

Reviewer: RainbowSmurf
Date: 02/07/08 21:27
Chapter: Nothing Like Muggle Fairy Tales

hello kevin! :D the story you are writing is absolutly awesome. keep at it! can i ask for one thing though? i would love to see some more about sirius in the next few chapters, because no matter how long it has been, they are still going back to grimmauld place. also, when is lupin teddy going to find out the reason dermont is being a jerk? update soon!

Author's Response: Well, Sirius is not really key in this story, but he will be involved a little, mainly with Harry. Teddy won't really find out what's up with Dermot for a while yet. ~Evie

Reviewer: daffy
Date: 02/07/08 2:44
Chapter: Nothing Like Muggle Fairy Tales

that was cooll!!!
like the fact that teddy is becoming a rebel!! i wud have hated it if turned out ti be some geek!! n dumb dermot... dat definitely looks like a name given by a 11yr old!! n wats on between adrian n dermot?... too many questions n too less chapters.... sooooo get the hint n update more often n longer chappies
gr8 work ... keep it commin!!

Author's Response: Well, as you know this story is proving easy to write but difficult to get validated, but I am doing my best. ~Evie

Reviewer: blak Dragon
Date: 02/07/08 1:26
Chapter: Nothing Like Muggle Fairy Tales

ir needs immediate emergency updates NOW!!!

Author's Response: **points to homepage** Might be difficult for the time being. ~Evie

Reviewer: flossingstringmint
Date: 02/06/08 22:40
Chapter: Nothing Like Muggle Fairy Tales

I love it! Keep writing!!!! I anticipate your next chapter. :)

Author's Response: thnx

Reviewer: marvelousmeg
Date: 02/06/08 20:56
Chapter: Nothing Like Muggle Fairy Tales

Aw, i feel bad for Kevin and am feeling talkative so here goes. This was a fun chapter. i really love the slightly cheeky attitude now that Teddy is coming out of his shell. I imagine Remus would have been similar. Edith is certainly starting to sound like she might become the Hermione of the group and i would love that. Anyway, please update soon, i love this story!

Author's Response: No, she's not going to be the Hermione of the group at all - I know she seems that way at the moment but... well, she hasn't got the quality of Hermione we all love the most. /vagueness. ~Evie

Reviewer: linnealovegood
Date: 02/06/08 18:50
Chapter: Professor Dermot

this is good ,but i notice there are some uncanny similiarties between snape and dermot... not necessarily bad , but deffinitely noticable

Author's Response: Yes, I agree with you there. But Dermot is most certainly different to Snape, only you won't see how for a while yet. ~Evie

Reviewer: Sev and Lily
Date: 02/06/08 18:30
Chapter: Nothing Like Muggle Fairy Tales

I sure don't want kevin to die!
I have super missed this story for the past month but i know you have been trying to get chapters validated it is not your fault...except for submiting a previous chapter that was a little silly but you are still awesome! I love teddy so much but what is up with Alfie? update ASAP

Author's Response: Yes, I am rather stupid sometimes, aren't I? I can get great exam results, but when it comes to common sense... well, lets just say that I managed to drop my mp3 player in a bucket of water recently. ~Evie

Reviewer: shewolf2000
Date: 02/06/08 18:06
Chapter: Nothing Like Muggle Fairy Tales

Hiya Kevin!

Good chapter. It seems like Teddy has a bit of a rose-tinted view of what it is to be a werewolf. I'm worried he's in for a bit of a rude awakening. Oh dear, Kevin, what will we do? Why would Evie set him up for something like that? Why, Kevin, why!?

Oh, well I suppose it does make for a more interesting plot. Anyway, Kevin, tell Evie she did a great job with this chapter and that I am eagerly awaiting the next.

Author's Response: Kevin: I will tell her that, and she will be very grateful. I have no idea why she sets poor old Ted up for horrible things like that, and considoring her evil cackles as she writes future chapters, I can only guess things are going to get a lot worse. <3 Kevin the review box

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