Reviews For Teddy
Reviewer: chickonsticks
Date: 04/14/08 10:24
Chapter: Learning Prejudice

Hi Kevin, I'm enjoying the story.. are we going to find out more back story, like dermont?

Author's Response: Kevin: Yes, indeedy, we are. Dermot has a hell of a story behind him, actually, and there are many more twists to come.

Reviewer: claymor
Date: 04/14/08 9:46
Chapter: Learning Prejudice

Poor Kevin.....Great story. It has been so long I had to go back and read again. No real hardship. SO sad that people are so prejudice and ignorant. Can't wait for next update. carry on...

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: gryffindorboi
Date: 04/14/08 9:29
Chapter: Learning Prejudice

Brilliant! Keep up the good work! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Glad to hear that!

Reviewer: clumsywerewolf2438
Date: 04/13/08 19:22
Chapter: Learning Prejudice

I still love this story, and this chapter was totally worth the site-revamping-queue-closure. Keep up the good writing!


Author's Response: Aw, thanks, Remora, hun! :Drnrn~Evie

Reviewer: emmaholloway
Date: 04/13/08 17:56
Chapter: Learning Prejudice

That's so mean and so sad. I want to hug teddy. And ruffle his hair. I love him.
emma x

Author's Response: Me too. ;)rnrn~Evie

Reviewer: emmaholloway
Date: 04/13/08 17:47
Chapter: Nothing Like Muggle Fairy Tales

or maybe he’s just born ugly. Call me immature but that was hilarious.
This is craziness though. Reading it one place and then reading it somewhere else.
Love it. emma x

Author's Response: lol - well, I'm getting sick of, I may abandon it all together. Glad you like it, Emma, dear!

Reviewer: KDTheRavenclaw
Date: 04/13/08 17:31
Chapter: Learning Prejudice

HI, Evie and Kevin! :) I love the story so far. But poor Teddy! Can he punch Edith in the next chapter? Please please?

Author's Response: LOL, nah, our Teddy can't hit a girl!!rnrn~Evie

Reviewer: moony 4eva
Date: 04/13/08 11:06
Chapter: Nothing Like Muggle Fairy Tales

i've been thinking about why Dermot hates teddy so much and i came up with a theory! is it becuse of remus' condition? Love the story! can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Yes, it is, but there's a little more to it than that. You'll find out...rnrnGlad you like the story at any rate!!rnrn~Evie

Reviewer: emLILYEVANS
Date: 04/12/08 19:57
Chapter: Nothing Like Muggle Fairy Tales

here have a cookie kevin i dont want u to die remus;( (wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh) sorry in still upset
great chapter yaaaaaaaaaaah

Author's Response: cheers

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 03/29/08 19:19
Chapter: Nothing Like Muggle Fairy Tales

Great chapter! This story just keeps getting better and better.
It looks like Hogwarts has a new set of Marauders on its hands. I'm glad that Teddy is beginning to enjoy Hogwarts , in spite of Dermot.
Edith is interesting, a bit Hermione-like. I was a bit surprised at her response to hearing that Remus was a werewolf, but then again, even the trio was put off by the fact when they first found out.
One thing, I noticed that some of the dates were wrong. I think you meant to say that Sept. and Oct. flew by, and Teddy had 36 detentions with Dermot, but it said Sept. and Aug. Then you said something about it being Oct. 1st, and if that was the case, it would be impossible for Teddy to have 36 detentions, unless he had more than one some days.
Other than that, great job! Please, update soon!

Author's Response: hee hee - yeah, my timeline's a bit squiffy, I apologise. Edith is not like Hermione, as you'll very soon find out!! Glad you liked it!!rnrn~Evie

Reviewer: Patrick Johnson
Date: 03/13/08 15:32
Chapter: Nothing Like Muggle Fairy Tales

Dear Author of the Story,
Hi! My name is Patrick Johnson. I really liked this story alot! I have always thought Ted, was going to be friends with a Muggle-Born!
Patrick Johnson

P.S. Is there going to be more chapter's of Teddy?

Author's Response: Yes, definately. :) I'm glad you like the story, but I would just like to give you a word of advice - please don't put your second name on the internet!! You don't know who's watching!!rnrnI'm glad you like it at any rate. Yes, I thought I should have a muggleborn in there. ;)rnrn~Evie

Reviewer: LoopyLoonyLuna
Date: 03/07/08 22:24
Chapter: Nothing Like Muggle Fairy Tales

i love your story ... its great and i cant wait for the queue to be open so that i can see some more!! :)

Author's Response: aw!! **huggles** I can't wait for the queue to open either!! ~Evie

Reviewer: tanmay
Date: 02/25/08 12:20
Chapter: Nothing Like Muggle Fairy Tales

great story mn cant wait for future posts

Author's Response: thnx

Reviewer: tanmay
Date: 02/25/08 11:51
Chapter: The Hogwarts Express

great job
but i dont think u should have introduced victoire as a type of cousin
as she would end up with ted

Author's Response: Yes, but, I think tha tHarry always saw Ginny as a sister before he started getting feelings for her. ;) ~Evie

Reviewer: Jasmine_Lupin
Date: 02/21/08 9:43
Chapter: Nothing Like Muggle Fairy Tales

love it! i heart teddy lupin! it's nice to see this other side of him, in all the other ones i read he's all quiet. keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Yes, I wanted him to be more Tonks like than Remus like, seeingas I focus a lot on Remus in this story. ;) Thanks for reviewing! ~Evie

Reviewer: Luna_dreamer
Date: 02/20/08 19:11
Chapter: Prologue

This was a very VERY good epilogue.

Author's Response: thnx

Reviewer: qqquill_rita
Date: 02/19/08 14:05
Chapter: Nothing Like Muggle Fairy Tales

I LOVE second generation stories, especiallay Scorpio and Teddy ones. A fine example.

Author's Response: aw, thanks! :D

Reviewer: snowey
Date: 02/18/08 15:05
Chapter: Nothing Like Muggle Fairy Tales

its pretty good! i want more!]
its inspiring me to write about my james! (harry's son)

Author's Response: aw, good to hear!

Reviewer: mathgirl365
Date: 02/16/08 20:19
Chapter: With Love, Hugs and Warnings.

Teddy is the sweetest character.

Author's Response: Hee hee, he is kinda cute, huh? :p ~Evie

Reviewer: mathgirl365
Date: 02/16/08 20:18
Chapter: Prologue

I love this chapter!!

Author's Response: Cheers.

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